One shot/Meet/Jaane Magar Yeh Nayan/sad - Page 3

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesum super<br>loved it........<br>

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

i loved the story, it was sad but real, and it was enchanting!

please do write more!

Originally posted by: rankanrock

nice one shot! but it was sooo saddd!!! 😭😭😭y no meet scenes anymore!!!! anyways great job!!😊😊😊

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

<font color="#990000">OMG N, that was heartbreaking. I shall be back to edit this.<br><br>*edited*<br><br>Firstly, N, thank you so much for the dedication! You are so welcome. I totally wanted to. 😳 So sweet, and completely unnecessary, Khabar Nahi was not that good, and I stand by that!

It was too*stamping foot like a spoilt brat and insisting*😆

😆 I'm so dedicating my next Meet VM to you.
*faints away in Preet shock* totally good kind of shock* Oh! My! God!*Heartbeats accelerating in anticipation* How totally sweet of you* Awww.... 😉<br><br>Ahh, I love how you wrote it. The contrast between the sad Meher of now, and the happy and blushing wife of Preet is so well portrayed. I was wondering what had happened to Preet, because there was no way he would willingly leave her, and then when she gets home, and happily goes to Preet I was shocked, because, well, I was not expecting that, and then you turned things on it's head (again) by having Preet be her imagination. Her pain was palpabale. It was heartbreaking, I had tears in my eyes!

Radz, thanks so much for your lovely comments. You are such a wonderful writer, it feels so wonderful that you like what I write. See, you put me to the blush😳 😳

<br><br>N, you have got to write more, but happy things please, I want to see smiles on Meet's faces! 😆 Oh, PremHeer you can write tragic. 😉<br><br>Love,<br>Radz</font><br>

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

<FONT color=#9900cc>*giggle* Me!!!! Awwww, what will you do when i write one for you!?!?!? =D </FONT>

<FONT color=#9900cc>Gosh that was so heartbreaking and tragic *sob*.................. I LOVED IT!!!!!! 😳I'm a huge fan of people who can write tragedy well, and that was amazing Nonee!!!! 👏</FONT>

Awww....Maddy, that's so sweet of you, thank you so very much. I feel overwhelmed. You are so talented yourself, it feels great to have such an amazing compliment from you. Thanks so much.

<FONT color=#9900cc>The way you captured the emotions and the two contrsting sides of the story with the past and present was really well done!!!! You almost made me cry............. key word being almost because to date i have only cried ONCE while watching something and that was HC's performance when Prem thought Heer didn't love him and then he cried on the bridge! 😭</FONT>

Thanks so much Maddy. I know what you mean about HC's performance on the bridge. He was simply amazing in that one.

<FONT color=#9900cc>I haven't cried for movies like Kal Ho Na ho, or Bhagbhan or any of that stuff............ i am freaky that way!!!! 😆Anyways i'll stop now!!!! 😳</FONT>

Awww.....you cried for Prem (or should I say HC*wink*) Big hug:)

<FONT color=#9900cc>But seriously that was really really well done Nonee!!! You are a great writer and i'm sure you made Shabo very happy!!!! 😆</FONT>

<FONT color=#9900cc>Can't wait till whatever is next!!!!! </FONT>

<FONT color=#9900cc>Love you!!! *hug*</FONT>

Originally posted by: ashred12

heart-breaking💔...but beautiful....<br>