(FF)Love Story; PM List/ Ch 2, Pg 4 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

OMG Shifu, I want to leave a proper comment but at the moment I can't. Hopefully, I remember to edit this.

Love,
Radz

You didn't remember to edit this!😆 Thanks for liking the update

Originally posted by: shabo24

Feel so bad with writing a small comment - seeing all these lambe ones you have been getting - but I got no choice. Longer comments in a couple of weeks =] Okies, whatever suits you best

I LOVE and I mean LOVE the concept! Meet and Premeer in one FF? Great start already - my heart is breaking for Heer! Yea, thanks for liking this fic!

--shabz

Thanks for liking this fic Shabz

Originally posted by: ruky786

wow great start to the ff aww meher is pregnant awesome continue soon looking forward to the next part

Thanks for liking his fic and yes, Meher is already pregnant.

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!👏

Thanks for liking this fic and I shall continue soon

Originally posted by: vrinda16

Hai Shifali,

Just read the first update of this ff & must say that it's beautifully written - Very beautiful indeed. Thanks V

Meher's happiness on realising that she's pregnant, Heer's happiness for her sister & at the same time her pain on remembering what happened in her life was all described so beautifully. Yea, Heer was truely heartbreaking in this chapter

That little speech of hers to Meher where she revealed the extent of her unconditional love to Prem was just so touching - she loved him expecting nothing in return. Yes

What truly touched my heart was how u described Heer's reactions amidst the joy of the family on knowing abt Meher's Pregnancy - how she tried to control herself while her eyes welled up. I don't know but reading that part 7 and also Prem's attempt to console her & her stopping him midway - everything brought tears into my eyes. It just absorbed me into it. Thanks V

Wonderful writing.

Looking forward for ur future updates & yes, u can count me in as an avid reader of this ff & expect my views on ur regular updates if u don't mind bcos I just loved it. Hehe, ofcourse I won't di!

If u have any PM list then do add me to it if it's possible & not too late. Added

C u l8r after ur next update.

Vrinda

Originally posted by: pRinc3ssRZxJT

heyyy =) very nice ff, like seriouslyy when i was reading i was so0 absorbed in its marvelous description i felt likee i was theree (haha dat would be amazing if it were true😍 lol) from the first part i said "wow im already addicted" 😛 hehee ...yayyy meher is preggy and lmao preet was blushing more than meher upon hearing the news😆 ....but its so0 sad to see premeer like this😔 ...ughh preem ko sirf sanjana milli thi pyaar karne ki liye🤢, but still the connection b/w prem and heer was just beyond words ..and cuz u wrote it so perfectly =] ... i wonder whts gonna happen now plzzz updatee imma be impatientlyy (<--- spelling?😕) waitinggg and dat was a gr8 part shifali yahaan par meri jaan jaari hai aur parne ke liye super excited for the next part😃 _____________LUV Rumsha<3

Thanks Rushma. I didn't know it was that good!😳 Don't worry, he thinks he loves Sanjana, but we all know the truth! Thanks for liking this fic

Originally posted by: nav555

dont forget me,it was awesome!

Originally posted by: jamune

awww reallie gud please message me when net part is done please

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

me too! 😃

*edited*

Okay so good job with Ravs for the title, and you shouldn't really thank me for proofreading btw! 😉😆

Okay now I shall get into the update! 😃😳

The way you described the house was beautiful, it made me actually wanna go see it! 😳 Very purty! 😃 and ohhh you added two new characters??😳 That's cool, I miss Harman though! 😉😆😆 He amuses me!😆2 New characters are that dadi and her husband! Harman bhi aayega!

I really can't believe that Heer's baby died 😔 Her daughter would have just been a little angel! 😛😳 The way you talked about the stillborn had me in tears, completely, because I really can't handle it... 😔 It was just really hurting to read! 😔 But since you've reassured me...I'm going to be okay!😳Hehe, you will be surprised with what actually happened!

The poem suited the situation perfectly Shif, I love that you added it into it! 😃 I'm proud of you for finally showing your amazing talent! 😃Thanks for liking the poem Meer

The way you described Prem and Heer's relationship was beyond words Shifali, seriously the way you explained the feelings from Prem and even from Heer, was perfect! 😃Thansk Meer and that is what I like about PH. More mind/heart/soul then talks

The end was really moving, I want him to comfort, even if it's without romance, I just want him to be there for her, even if it's just as a friend! 😳 He WILL be htere

I love this idea Shifali, really the way you combined both the pregnancy ideas, love it! 😃Thanks Meer

Love you loads,

Meera😳

Thanks Meer