[FF] Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi [Part 4, Pg 14] [21/7] - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Now you're making me want a new laptop! *pouts*😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww, that sucks! hope it gets better!!!!!
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So that's why you haven't been online. I just thought you were mad at me or something. Heh. I know, the world does not revolve around me right?

Love,
Radz

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Haila Bhav , how r able to breath without ur lappie??? I would have been in ICU by now, u r much stronger😃 , Hope your lappie gets fixed soon...
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😃

*edited*

So Meher is like a mini Rani from TPTM to me! 😃😳 Thankgod Preet isn't as saru as Saifu was though! 😆 I loved the way that she answered the phone call and then he waited.....and waited.....and waited some more!😳 Thought that was really cute..
Finally saw that movie! Whee! Now I've got more ideas on Meher's character! 😃
oh and before I forget! 😃 Loved the handshake bit as well! 😳
🤣 Thank you!
Can't wait to see what happens with the plan now! 😃

Can we all take a moment to notice that has GOT to be the shortest comment I've ever made? 😲 (I'm kinda tired....so I blame it on that! 😆)
Awww...shortest comment or not, thank you for commenting!
Love you loads,
Love you too! 😃😳
Meera😳

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

quack! =D

okay, give me a sec...................... 🤣!!!!!!!!!!!! I officially love Meher even more than i used to!!! And i didn't think it was even possible!!!! 😲 😆 I love Meher, she was so cute!!!!! I love this new side of Preet which is so different from his usual self!!!! *thumbs up*
😆 Thank you! For liking both Preet and Meher!
The whole conversation was so funny, the way they interacted, Preet getting all uncomfortanble, Meher doing really funny things!!! 😆 It was so perfect Bhav!!!!! 👏
😳 Thanks! It was so fun to write...
Gosh, Premeer seem like the very chipku types eh!?!?!? 🤢😉😆 I kidding!!! I really like Heer, she is so naive and sweet!!!!! 😃
Yeah...She's the goddess of love! *dances around, throwing flowers in the air*
Loved this update and can't wait till the next part!!!!!!
Thank you!
Love you *hug*
Love you too! *hugs back*

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

*dances along with Bhav* I know I may never have heard Kris song, but if you say he's good, I'm pretty damn sure he'd be awesome. You have good taste in music. *grin*
Damn right I do! *smug grin*
My spot. And remind me to update.

*edited*

I remembered! Whoo! 😆
Whoo congrats! Now all you have to do is get my birthdate right, and we can be BFFs again! 😛
I love this part. She's too cute, how she forgets the word secretary, and how Preet needs a secretary so bad, he hires her despite her - eccentric behaviour, shall we say? 😆 Love the way he gets uncomfortable with how she's so intense one second, and so bimbo the next. She's too cute.
Ahahaha thanks!
Waiting for more!

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: *lucky_karen*

😛hey bhav!! *hugs back*🤗 hows it goin? Heya Karen!! It's goin' good! 😃 (Yeah I was lazy to switch to purple...😆)...well i lovedd this part!!😃 had me smiling throughout!Aww thank you!..meher is soooo adorable...omgg u gotta love her...shes soo sweet when shes so innocent😳 and i can just imagine her doing that whole right side tilt thing😆 and preets expression...hai main kaha pas gaya😆😆 this is gonna be awesome...and premeer are adorable... Aww thanks! 😳 Yep they are pretty adorable aren't they? They're cute characters... i can just imagine them in all white...heavenly😆😳 for some reason i see heer in a gown...off one shoulder😆😆 Ooh Greek goddess style right? That's totally the look I'm aiming for! 😆 (Too much Greek theatre in TSD for the past two years...🤢) ok im gonna shut up now😆😆.. cont soon....-karen😛

@ bd670816: Thank you!
@ Summy: Aww thanks!

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Hey

I just started reading this and the concept is interesting Looking forward to reading more
Hi new person! Welcome! I'm glad you like it so far, and I hope you'll enjoy whatever comes after this too! 😃

Originally posted by: shabo24

KRISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! *fans herself*
KRISKRISKRISKRISKRIS!! *giggles*
Oh my gosh. Meet and Kris. Now that is pure bliss. *wink* I lurved it - specially how Meher has already spoken to her mother-in-law. 😆 And oh gawd do Prem and Heer need to get out more or what? =]
Huh. I totally didn't realise the mother-in-law part...😆 HAHAHAH Prem and Heer are gods! Where can they go?! 😆
--shabz

Originally posted by: noneeM

Oh! I'm so happy you're thrilled....KRIS Won! Yay! *Hops around happily*
Yay! Kris won! *dances*
And as for this part, it blew my mind away.....Oh My God! I am totally in love with this concept and your sterling writing....
Awww thanks...you and Meera are both way too liberal with your compliments! 😳
Both preet's cell phones were engaged! Well, one was me 😆 and the other was.....me😆 (Cupids can do a lot....he he he)
😆 Oh my, Nonee...
[Preet eyed her curiously. "Secretary?" he offered.] [Oh! Superb! Loved it]

The way she was looking at him unnerved him. Her head was tilted to the right, and the smile was mostly gone. She was studying him very intensely. Feeling more than a little uncomfortable, Preet shifted in his chair and cleared his throat. [Oh! Killer stuff. Totally wishing I was Meher:) Brilliant writing Bhav]
Haha thanks!
Meher nodded vigorously. Preet's smile grew wary. (He momentarily wondered whether her head hurt from nodding so much.) [Preet is so cute. Loved this bit as well]

I like the way she observes his hand, I love the way he is uncomfortable with her scrutiny, I just love the way you have described this first meeting Bhav. It's simply amazing. I am going to dream about this tonight....It's so wonderful (Preet dreams 😳)
Awww thank you! 😳
I love the way Preet keeps waiting for her to give him the message and she doesn't catch on...How sweet is that:)
Haha totally, right? 😳
And I loved this bit - ["Oh!" She nodded. "It was your mother. She says don't forget to have your lunch. Her exact words were, usse keh dena ki agar woh apna lunch nahin khata hai, toh usse dinner bhi nahin milne waala."] Really really well written Bhav. I adore this one already and can't wait for the next part....

Totally Amazing really, I'm out of adjectives here.....Love:-Nonee
Like I said, you're way too liberal with your compliments! 😳

Originally posted by: egle

That was adorable!😳

Thank you! 😃
I could totally picture Meher acting the way you desribed😆. I like it so much that infact, I'm going to start using her type of handshake on everyone I know....and everyone I don't. I'll tell you how that works out. 😃
🤣 OHMYGOD you have to tell me how it works out!
Great start!👏
Thanks!
~Cheers😎

Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s

woww!!! meet story!!

Yep! A Meet story!
very intresting!! Thank you!
add me too in Pm list....Added! 😃

@ 9rpatel: Added you to the PM list! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is weird. I was...um...Taylor Lautner can drive, and somehow that reminded me that I have to update RNBDJ. It's weird, isn't it? It should be completely illegal for a seventeen-year-old to be that smokin' hot. I mean, he made my laptop screen sizzle when he came on in the New Moon trailer!...And I am going to stop gushing over Taylor Lautner (seriously, Shabz, make even the tiniest comment on that and I will haunt you.) and post the next part! 😃😳

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Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi

Part Two

As she locked her car, Ashlesha Maan rummaged around her bag, wondering why she could never find her employee pass. She always tucked it into the back pocket, but somehow it would always manage to fall out and lose itself in the organized mess that was her bag.

Sighing, she decided she needed a smaller bag.

Luckily for her, she somehow always managed to find her pass just as she reached the building. She smiled triumphantly as she flashed the guard her pass and he opened the door to let her in, trying not to roll his eyes and biting back a snide comment.

Now that the first ordeal of the day was over, Ash strode confidently to the elevator, tapping a foot clad in dark brown Salvatore Ferragamos impatiently as she waited for it to arrive. As she waited, she checked her reflection in the silver elevator doors. As usual, Ash loved what she saw: she was tall and slim, her figure the envy of many of her colleagues; not a strand of her long black hair was out of place; and as usual, she looked polished in her sleeveless black button-down shirt and her cream-coloured pants, topping off the entire look with dark brown Ferragamo pumps.

The elevator doors opened, breaking into her reverie. Ash's red lips curled briefly into a pout, before she recovered herself and smiled at the man coming out of the elevator. As she went inside, she felt his eyes on her, and she turned, winking at him. The elevator doors closed.

Ash grinned. She leant back against the wall, crossing one ankle around the other, the epitome of confidence and ease.

-||-

Meher frowned, desperately trying to organize Preet's meetings. Which was hard to do, considering Preet had dumped a stack of Post-Its and bits of paper in front of her. Someone needed to get the man an organizer.

As she sorted through the bits of paper, trying to filter out those pertaining to the immediate week, a woman strolled briskly past her and headed for Preet's office.

Meher jumped up. "Good morning, Ma'am! Can I help you?" she asked quickly.

-||-

Ash paused, her hand on the doorknob, and turned to see who had spoken to her. She raised an eyebrow, studying the girl standing at the desk that she had never noticed before.

The girl looked so typically Indian, in a churidaar kurta ensemble that she personally didn't fancy too much, yet it appeared to suit her. The pink colour gave her a rosy, almost ethereal glow.

Ash raised an eyebrow. "Tum kaun ho?" she asked. Ash was Preet's second-in-command, and no one talked to her like that. Except for Preet. Not that she liked it.

"Ji, main Meher hoon. Preet Sir ki nayi secreh…seccuh…" she frowned, looking extremely distressed.

Ash stared at her. "Secretary?"

The girl's face lit up. "Secretary! Ji! I have to remember that word," she muttered to herself. Then she remembered that Ash was there, and she looked up at her again. "Main Preet Sir ki nayi secretary hoon. Aur…aap?" she asked cautiously.

Ash shifted her weight to her right foot, placing a hand on her hip. "Ashlesha Maan, aur tum mera time waste kar rahi ho."

The girl – Meher, she corrected herself – stared at Ash, then her eyes widened. "Ashlesha! I've heard a lot about you, Ma'am!"

Ash studied Meher, smiling slowly. She was starting to like this girl. "Good things, I hope?"

Meher grinned. "Very good, Ma'am. Aap bas ek minute yahaan ruko, main Preet Sir ko batati hoon ki aap unse milna chahti hain."

Ash nodded, agreeing, then seated herself at Meher's table as Meher knocked on the door to Preet's office. A moment later she emerged, holding the door open for Ash to pass. She beamed at Ash.

As the door closed behind Ash, Meher settled down on her chair. Organizing Preet's meetings lay forgotten as she wondered how she was going to bring Preet and Ashlesha together. Without Ashlesha falling for someone else.

She sighed, wishing that Cupids really did have those arrows that made people fall in love with each other. That would have made things so much easier. But the God and Goddess of Love were never one to make things easy, which left Meher wondering how she was going to bring Preet and Ashlesha together without Ashlesha falling for someone else.

The telephone rang, and Meher shrieked, covering her ears, startled by the sound. Heads turned to her curiously as she lowered her hands, smiling sheepishly, then answered the phone. "Good morning, Preet Juneja's office."

-|end of part two|-


Ta-dah! Ash makes her appearance! Did ya like it? I love Friends. Joey's so...Oh. Right. RNBDJ. Heh. I have the attention span of a squirrel. Ooh, HAMMIE! Did ya guys watch Over the Hedge? Oh, my, Hammie was so cute! (The attention span of a squirrel. And Radz, you make even the slightest comment about this, and I take away the welcome-back cupcakes/brownies I was planning on baking you.) Comment and criticise, people!

Love,
Bhav (:
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'm not allowed to make any comment on your attention span? Darnit. Ooh, Taylor Lautner! *fans self* I think I've seen the ad quite a few times already. *sighs* Damn him for being only 17.

my spot.

*edited*

Thanks for the reminder! 😉

Oh, I can't think of anything to write. Distracted. Whoops. 😆

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome update Bhav! Me loved it. Of course it's 8 am for me and I'm a bit tired and not used to waking up this early and will probably have to re-read the update but that's not important 😆 Love Ash's appearance and Meher should definately try remembering that word 😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
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mine! woof! =D
I'm only sixteen, thought you would like to be reminded!!!! ROFL!!!
I love being sixteen!!! 😉😆 Fine, i'll stop torturing you and move on with the update!!! 🤣
Oooooh, Ash's entry was quite................ Ash!!!! 😆 Very today's independant, sophisticated 21st century working women!!! *Thumbs up* I like it!!! 😳 OMG, she even winked at the guy!!! Can't wait to see more of her!!! 😆
Awwww, Meher makes me all happy!! She is so so so cute!!! ROFL!!! She is so sweet, can't say secretary!!! 😆 I love her!!! Hmmm, Ash seems nice enough i guess!!! 😕
Ok, i kinda relized thses cupids don't have arrows.......... how about magical powers!?!?!? LIke any kind!!!! That would be cool!! Like somehow the broom closet just got locked by itself or something and instead of Preet and Ash getting stuck inside it's like Meet get stuck!!!! I dunno HOW yet, but whatever!! 😆 Ok, i'll stop embarrassing myself now!! 😳
Great update and can't wait to see where you are going with this!!!
Love you!! *hug*
Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago
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^^ Great. First I've got Shabz, now I've got you. 😛

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