|| Saath Saath|| Premeer One Shot - Page 2

I'm with BD. I loved how Heer stood her ground. I think right now Premeer lack a certain understanding in their relationship - but this shot Meera, perfected it! =]

The whole conversation, I could imagine it completely! That's what your writing does to me! It's just fantastic! AND YAY! Preet smiled at Meher. ☺️

--shabz

Originally posted by: purplestar22

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That was wonderful... I just loved it!!! i really wanted this to happen...I was happy Heer didnt want to come with him... Creatives should be reading this right now... Actually you should be one the creatives!!!😊

Thank you so much Amna! 😆 Me be one of the creatives, I'd do it if I was in india! 😉

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice shot.

Thanks Sweta! 😃😳

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Meera, I want this to happen. It was nicely written, and though I wish Gayatri wouldn't be forgiven so easily, I can see it happening in the show like that. I'll come back and comment in detail.

Love,
Radz

Thanks Radzie, yeah....in this show it'd defintiely be like that...which makes me mad...😆😆 I just wrote it so it'd end...cus I wasn't sure how long it'd get, cus if I went into detail about them being all mad at Gayatri it would've been too long! 😆

Originally posted by: ash08

Meera, it was very good.👏

As Radz said, I wish it would happen like this in the show, though I wish the tamasha would last a bit longer.........😆

Thanks a lot hun! 😃 Glad you liked it....😛

Originally posted by: heeroshni

awesome......hope something like dis happens!!

Thanks! 😃😳

Originally posted by: fungrl

I just loved it......I just hope Ekta can get inspired from your FF

Thanks so much! 😳 hope so! 😛

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Hammed-up hindi or not, this one was awesome. I love how Heer (initially) refused to go back with Prem. That is so how it should be. Prem should have to beg for her back, he should have to prove his love for her. But then again, that's just me. Awww thanks Bhav! 😆 Yup, I couldn't let Heer not go with him...but I want him to do that too, as MUCH as I love him....he deserves her anger!😳

Anyway, like everyone else said, it would be amazing if something like this happened in the show. And if it does, I will worship you. Feeling as melancholic-y as I am, a small part of me wished this one had a bitter ending. BUT! I wrote a bitter ending for my version, and it satisfies me, so this one gets two thumbs up from me! 👍🏼👍🏼 Thanks Bhav! 😆 Ahh no need to worship me! 😆😛 But I hope we get a happy ending after lots of begging from Prem! 😛😳 I loved yours! 😃

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: nasco

awsome yaar!!. maybe u shud write the script for kis desh

If I get a job offer, I'll take it! 😉 Thanks a lot hun! 😃

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

Oh Meeeeeera; you and your little one shots make me blush. ONLY IF ALL THIS HAPPENED IN THE SHOW :(

Not even joking - I was totally gonna ask you yesturday when your next PH one shot was gonna be, but it just slipped my mind. &this is what I see when I log on. What an amazingggg coincidence!

This was SO adorable :D how you did it in both POV's; so amazingggg. Your writing always blows me off :) I always tell you that.

I loved how Heer didn't wanna go, but Prem convinced her. SO sweet.

And I'm glad Veera and Maya got caught; atleast in your FF!

Flawless as always; keep up the AWSOME workk

Have I mentioned how much I love these smileys?? 😃😳 They're so much fun! 😛 If you remember correctly I think you asked me about it two days ago, and so I thought I'll try to do one for you soon! 😃😳 But I'm better with angryish stuff! 😆 Yup, I needed Heer to be upset with him, because in all honesty he needs to BEG!😳 I'm glad you like the way I did both POV's!😳 I just figured it'd make more sense to get the insight! 😳 As for Veera and Maya, they deserve a lot BETTER than that!😆😆 Thanks again Sanya! 😃😳

Originally posted by: shabo24

I'm with BD. I loved how Heer stood her ground. I think right now Premeer lack a certain understanding in their relationship - but this shot Meera, perfected it! =] Awww I'm glad...but you're right, they do lack the understanding especially after EVERYTHING they've been through together...but thank you! 😃

The whole conversation, I could imagine it completely! That's what your writing does to me! It's just fantastic! AND YAY! Preet smiled at Meher. ☺️ I'm glad you liked it! 😛 I KNEW you'd like that! 😛😳😃

--shabz

ahaha; I LOVE those smileys too :) They're so cute. I got bored with I-F ones :P too normal.

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

ahaha; I LOVE those smileys too :) They're so cute. I got bored with I-F ones :P too normal.

Okayy :D &no problem!

You're so cute Sanya! 😃😳

hey
that was awesome. wish this happens in the show...but of course the creatives have to ruin it all. keep up the great work. 😊

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
that was awesome. wish this happens in the show...but of course the creatives have to ruin it all. keep up the great work. 😊

thanks a lot! 😃😳 I'm glad you liked it...😛

hey that was great! wonder when that will happen in the serial!

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hey that was great! wonder when that will happen in the serial!

Thanks a lot Kashish! 😛😳

aww i love it ...
its awesome story i hope this happen...i agree with u all..
finger crossed.. i agree u should be creative indiandoll89...great story.... well done




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