||In Dino|| Meet One Shot - Page 2

Originally posted by: sourpuss

It so did not! I didn't even notice it, even AFTER you pointed it out!

Love,

Bhav (:

P.S. Then again maybe I'm just not paying enough attention...😆

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

my gosh this was amazing.....*sigh*....one of the best meet 1 shots i've ever read.....i didnt want it to end....i really wanted it become a full out fanfic wer u wrote how they fell in love with each other....it was simply wonderful....

Originally posted by: noneeM

Hi, I'm Nonee, I just read this one shot and I loved it:) It's written so well and it was like my morning dose of Meet. Now I can last till evening:)) Like your style of writing. And the song is one of my favourites, Thanks..

Originally posted by: zenia

hi..

very nice story yaar.......

simply amazinng.........

dialogues are also very nice...........

and abut preet- maar hi daala usne to......seriously... so sweet..

mehar is also very sweet in the story..........

nice one..

thanks.

Originally posted by: shabo24

I should be studying, but lemme comment on this quickly first! =] Thank you! 😃

I loved it! I think I see what you mean though about you deciding if you want it to be tragic or not, because it was a very iffy shot as in, I couldn't figure out what direction it was going int! I half thought Preet would cancel the wedding because of Ash, but BOY AM I GLAD HE DIDN'T! =] Teehee, thank you! 😛 See I love it when someone gets what I mean! 😛 Yeah I really was confused initially, but I think then I kinda figured out where my mind was going! 😛

The way you depicted both their feelings was amazing! The apprehension was like SEEPING through the computer screen! =] Teehee, I'm glad you liked it, and wah...do you have a way with words or what?😛

Keep writing! Will try! 😃

--shabz