There are just too many tracks on which they can carry the story frwrd seperation is not the only thing left..... i kno i have posted sum suggestions earlier but this is what i have to say finally......... Ok as I think that you might have already shot for some of the episodes and if you have not redeemed Prem's character yet then I think that should be the very first thing that you should go for. Prem after hearing both sides of the story should go to Heer and ask her for forgiveness and tell her that he has his faith intact in her. He should tell her to trust him as he wants to get to the core of the matter and wanted to bring back the very respect that she seems to be loosing because of Veera and Nihaal's relationship. In all this he reveals his Gaurav's saga in order to protect Heer and Meher from further misconduct. He says that if anyone is to be blamed for Veera's condition its him as he was the one who somehow managed to tell Nihaal about Rishabh and was also happy that he married her. He checks with Nihaal that which doctor was attending Veera and calls the same doctor to jzoo saying that he wants her to attend Veera as she has suffered a miscarriage. Doctor is shocked to hear that and says what miscarriage are you talking about she willingly came here to abort the child with one of her friends and she says I think her name was Maya. Nevertheless he does call her home, and with her coming home Maya's truth is unveiled and Veera spill the beans about how it was all Maya's plan and also she did all this for money and her figure and future leaving everone in disgust.
Show Maya thrown out of jzoo by Harman. Preet apologizing to Meher for his irrational behaviour not supporting her knowing it wasn't her fault. Veera gets an earful from every1 in the house specially from Gayatri ma (I suggest give her some beautiful and strong dialogues). Make Gayatri break down in front of Heer and Prem and let both of them support her making their bond stronger. Jzoo realizes that Prem and Heer never had any actual happiness, it was only them who were revering in the fact that Prem is back. Show a nice marriage of both Prem-Heer with the rasams and show some cute moments and in the process develop on Preet and Meher's relationship. During the wedding celebrations you can show re-entry of Ashlesha and Harman's decision of divorce which he hasn't disclosed to anyone. If you want some drama then you can put in Rishabh questioning Heer's chastity in one of the rasams like mehndi or something and Prem stand by Heer and even jzoo barring Veera and Prem proves Rishabh wrong in some or the other way even if it takes to literally threaten to kill Rishabh, show something like Prem trying to set Rishabh on fire just to get out of the real truth from him. (again good dialogues will come in handy, also it will go with his previous proclamations thats if sum1 tries to hut Heer in any way then he will set everythin on fire). Later show Prem and Heer on honeymoon won't mind if meet join them later and they should consummate their marriage there.
With all this when Prem and Preet are away then there is problem in business but Lalit prolonged and didn't inform them thinking that he will b able to handle it, but when matters go out of hands he calls them back. Show how Prem and Preet work together to get out of this crisis and Harman supports them in the process. Reason for the downfall of Juneja empire Rishabh yet again but this time in sync with Maya. Reveal Sanjana's truth that she is alive provided there is some improvement in her health. This would be the real test of Prem and Heer love DO NOT at any point show that their trust has faltered in each other as they are two pieces of the same heart. Show how Heer supports Prem at each and every step. Ultimately, Sanjana gets well and says that she didn't commit suicide and it was an accident and she has nothing against Prem and Heer. All this while you can show Preet supporting Meher and convincing her to pursue her dream to become a lawyer. Then Harman- Maya - Ashlesha can b brought into the forefront and hoe the family supports Harman in his decision. Can also show hoe Veera is not been treated well by the family except for Prem and Heer as they are ever so forgiving and realizes that Nihaal really did love her and she decides to win him back and in the process win her family back.
As of now I can think of this only thing that i can sum up with...... . Other than that its upto the creatives about what to do and what notšš.. but still some suggestions that they just SHOULD NOT ignore.
1) No tampering with the characters specially Prem, Heer, Meher and Preet.
2) Always show Prem Heer are one and even if there are some misunderstandings they are not major ones and are always talked out
3) No cheeky dialogues given to Prem and Heer please' the dialogues have been pathetic from sometime now.
4) No turning Prem into a spineless male character at any point, this will just be a big blow to the show.
5) Give Prem and Heer equal importance, try to maintain a balance, this lead is really different from all the shows so keep them different.
6) Prem should always support Heer no matter what and same goes for Heer.
7) No pregnant track anytime soon, sometime later is fine and a leap is a big NO NO'. they are just too young for all this.
OMG i think i have said a lot........ finally i have everything out of my brain now lets see which way creatives wanna go.......
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-iksha
Edited by gr8ronny - 16 years ago
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