V.V.IMP!!..Your suggestions for the story! - Page 2

Anyway, I don't have much time, but off the top of my head, for future tracks:

1.Show us a saga-sautela track. After watching the 21st April episode, it seems you are hell bent on destroying Prem's character. So, PLEASE redeem him in any way you can. He is not the typical BT male, that does not trust his wife.

To redeem him, the ONLY way out seems to be that he was faking this. He told Heer that he knows about Maya and Veera that Baisakhi night. So, together, they're trying to teach Veera and Maya a lesson. This would keep Prem-Heer-are-one intact. To give them more trouble, you can show that the family finds out about their naatak, and you can bring in the saga-sautela track. Gayatri may overhear Prem-Heer discussing about their plan to teach Veera and Maya a lesson, and she'll misunderstand them, and call Prem sautela. That will hurt both Prem and Heer, and a batwara track will start. To avoid this, Prem and Heer will leave. Preet and Meher also want to leave with them, but Prem and Heer give them their kasam. Preet vows to make sure the family realises how important Prem-Heer are to them. Preet (not Harman) starts to handle the family, but there are still cold wars between him and Harman over Maya and Meher, and the business (btw, it should be Harman's fault, because Maya is poisoning him). So, everyone will still feel Prem-Heer's absence. The Meet love story can also start.

If you want to prolong the track, you can show that after Prem-Heer move out, the hate escalates, and the Gaurav Sharma story comes out (Maya may find out about Prem pretending to be Gaurav Sharma, so she uses this information to prejudice everyone against Prem-Heer. Everyone thinks that Prem-Heer were deceiving them again (except for Meet, who believe Prem-Heer), and they refuse to even meet Prem-Heer.

After some time, while Prem-Heer are away from them, the family starts to realise their importance. Meanwhile Prem and Heer will be trying to settle a new life, alone, perhaps in a small house, or back in Ambala. Prem may start a new company, Heer supports him all the way. Nihaal can also help them some times, and you can introduce a nice friend (who's a girl) for him, so he has some support. Then, one day Gayatri overhears Maya's conversation with her father, about how she finally broke apart the family, and used Veera to do so. So, now the family comes together to bring back Prem-Heer with the respect they deserve...

As long as Prem-Heer are in this TOGETHER, this track will work.

2. This is a completely different track, and it may be a bit far fetched. Show a reverse reincarnation track, if you're completely out of ideas. Many people are saying the old magic of the show is gone. Well, instead of killing Premeer, and bringing them back, show how they had a previous janam, and their story, love and problems then. It would fit into the theme of the ETERNAL love of Premeer (and not MaRa's revenge drama). Also, it's something quite unseen on TV. During the Rajasthan epis, this track had been predicted, and it would have been successful, but we got darling Gaurav Sharma instead. Anyway, so this track would focus on Premeer, but it would still have the current characters, like Preet, Meher, and Kul di, whom we are all attached to as well. They can show parallel tracks, with their story, and the story of the J-zoo as well.

I'll be back later to develop, but that's the gist of it. Whatever they do, they HAVE to keep Prem-Heer-are-one alive. They HAVE to keep Prem on equal importance with Heer. I do NOT want to see Heer crying 24/7 while Prem misunderstands her. This show better keep the male lead as strong as the heroine.

Lastly, thank you sooooooo much Sidrah for this. But, I'm still scared about the next few days, because they can't change the track all of a sudden. So, I'm prepared to get my heart broken over the next week.

Since right now everything is so messed up I would want Prem to be sane one and hear out both the sides. He should have a talk with Heer and they both should have a discussion abt it and make a promise that no matter what happens they shouldn't let this affect their relationship. \

Prem should overhear Maya talking about her plan to destroy junejas and how she's using Veera to do so. How she's almost got Gaya3 on her side and how Heer and Meher will soon be out of the house. The reason I want Prem to hear this is because if Heer does then they can easily prove that she's just making up stories. If it is Prem then it'll be more credible. After he hears Maya he'll realise that his family is at the brink of being broken and he has to do something fast but he also has to be very cautious.

He wants to tell heer about it but decides to do it after he's found a proper solution to the whole problem. Because now he wants to save Veera and her marriage also make sure that Gaya3's misunderstandings are cleared and Heer and Meher get back their rightful place in the household. But before all this he needs to find out Maya's reason for breaking up the family. After digging he realises that Maya is actually RR's fiancee and they were going to get married before the whole Sanjana (there by realising that Sanjana is RR's sis) fiasco happened. Since then RR has been after Prem and the Juneja's and tries a lot of things. So Maya suggests that she'll somehow get into the family and break it. She befriends harman and acts as if she can't leave without him. She almost manages to break the family with Harman walking out of the house during his wedding but Heer manages to keep everything together and that is when RR plans the whole marrying him to save the family which is spoiled by Prem. So both Maya and RR decided that they'll need to get Maya into the house and once there she needs to get the family against each other and for that she needs one member who can be easily manipulated. RR with his history with Veera knows how much she hates heer and what she feels, So they decide to use Veera and the rest we know what has happened.

Once Prem finds this out he decides to have a chat with Heer and tells her to just go along with him but doesn't tell her what he's planning to do. He tells her to just trust him and no matter what happens he'll never do anything to hurt their relationship. He also tells her that his actions may seem harsh at times but she has to trust him. Then he decides to act the way Maya wants. He decides to throw Heer and Meher out of the house shocking everybody including Heer (but since they are one she'll know that he's doing it for everybody's good). But somewhere along the line he knows that Heer will understand him. In the meantime he creates circumstances where slowly Veera will realise how good Nihaal was. He'll also do things to get Preet to realise how important Meher is for him. Slowly everything will be solved and Gaya3 will realise her mistake and decide to get her bahu's back. The family will also realise that Heer's pregnant adding to the happiness.

In between all this they realise that Harman's very miserable. They decide to get him together with Ash.

1) Prem and Heer need to be each other's support. Prem needs to show that he loves Heer and he HAS to listen to hers and Nihaal's sides of the story. That would be good...

2) More MEET scenes! It would be nice if Preet stuck by Meher too, though judging by last night's 'angry young man' thing, that might not happen. But at least have them come closer together. Meet HAVE to confess that they love each other!

3) Less screen time for Veera and Maya. Yeah, it is about the family, but seriously? Maya and Veera have WAY too much screen time. Ooh I wouldn't mind if they get sucked into a black hole or get eaten by rabid chipmunks or even get shot down by bazookas, either! 😆

4) I would like to see Harman and Ash get together. I definitely would like to see Harman and Maya break up. Maybe Harman realises what Maya is trying to do, and he confronts her and they break up somehow, then Ash comes in and becomes his sahara and they fall in love and get married and have a happy ending!

Hmm...That's about all I can think about for now...I'll add more if I think of any! Once again, thanks so much for this!

Love,

Bhav (:

2.) Make preet mature! Sometime he is the sweetest guy and growing up to be like prem..but Im tired of his irrational tantrums...its almost as if he cant relate the fact that meher is his wife and nihaal is his bro in law and they are siblings...walk with caution like prem, preet!

3.) Redeem gaya3 ma...She loves prem the most ( and rightfully so! 😊) so there should be no saga sautela from her end ..i dont care if prem leaves b/c veera has some trick up her sleeve and he doesnt want gaya3 ma to get hurt in veera's games...but gaya3 ma should stay gaya3 ma...

4.) Bring ash back..and with her bring a cute, funny, charming guy who loves her more than life...and show their love story...and itll bring back the laighs too!!

5.) Have harman to be the one who figures out maya and tells her to get out! This would seriously give him so much needed brownie points..

Also some tidbits:

Make a prem-heer honeymoon..I'm talking 2 weeks of honeymoon episodes where we can also "sight see" india..

And if they leave, yes orig. I would want them to leave alone...but if eventually meher-preet and kuldi-kiran jiju came I wouldnt mind..

Also, please develop meher-heer rela., I want more sister scenes like there are preet-prem-harman scenes..

Lastly and most importantly, there always doesnt have to be a villain in a story for it to move forward (aka daljeet, kuljeet, manmeet, veera, maya, rishabh)

There can be other drama (aka sanjana)

Or even everyday life problems...that are simple yet thought provoking and learning experiences..