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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
could take some suggestions gtom this link took
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
Thank you loads for this Siddy and Nans!
Lemme wreck my brain to see what I come up with!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
Great suggestions guys!!!! =)
But when will the 'creatives' look at this Sidhra!?!?!? How are they going to incorporate all this in, or some or any of it in!?!?!?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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well i suggest when gaya3 mom is about to tell heer and meher to leave the house when they decide to support their bro.prem to interfere and says ma ossme heer aur meher ki kya galti hai and gaya3 going on about saga sautela, and asks him to choose and then tries to say some of her dialogues
somehow when the doctor comes before ash's reentry she first tells the truth then changes saying nihaal paid her to say so and leaves,heer will support her brother and she will be asked to leave by gaya3 and prem will try talk gaya3 out by reasoning with her, but gaya3 will tell prem that if he wishes to support his wife he can also leave the house but his rishta with his mom will be over once he steps out of the house.heer realisng what gaya3 means to prem will reason out with him to stay back because his family needs him more but prem is reluctant.then gaya3 will say something like he wished he never got his children to marry the manns sibling and then clap clap by ash or daljeet ash or daljeet.and then them saying aaj aapne saabit kar diya ki aap mein aur mujhme(daljit) or meri maa(for ash) koi fark nahi hai.kitni josh mein kehti thi ki mere liye saga sautela koi maene nahi rakhta aur bahu is ghar mein humesha beti ki tarah rahegi lekin aaj aapne saabit kar diya ki maa maa hoti hai.and then she will go on and on and then she herself will reveal the whole truth about veera nad maya's plan to throw heer meher out of the house.and the truth about veeras abortion.
somehow i dont care about gaya3 now after the way she acted with heer and meher.ash can make a comeback and then they focus on nihaal not wanting anything to do with veera and saying that he doesnt want to be the reason his sisters' marriage lives to be ruined.the jzoo tries to reason out with him but he says veera aisi aurat hai joh kabhi nahi sudhar sakti aur agar sudhar gayee toh yeh umeed mat karna ki mein usse wapas apnaoga, kyunki woh meri bache ki hatyaari hain aur issliye mein usse khabhie maaf anhi karunga.then they can show maya trying her best to ruin the junejas and then rr might come and join her but the junejas fight toghether.mayas truth is revealed harman divorces her and then harman ash love story begin in between show meet's love for each other flourishing,and then so forth...................
only this much now
but please do not ruin prem's charcter for us,keep them premeer together always.
and yes really loved the suggestion posted by everyone,atleast better then what the bt people are showing us,and yes onereally caught my eye the one suggested by hope08.that one has some potential👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
Hi,
Ok Since my future script request has already been mentioned by prev posters, I would like to suggest some technical tips to The Director / CameraMan, The Editor and Dialogue writer of the Show.....
Please Use less Zoom Out Lens unless its a whole family scene.... We want to see the facial expressions of the Actors and not the CameraMan's Angling Talent... Eg: sometimes the scene is shot far from upstairs 2nd floor when the actors are saying dialogues on the ground. ... When we want to see their reaction, you are busy showing us their standing spot on the set with zoomed out lens. Another eg: Camera is moving in between the pillars distracting the view... Many times we miss so many actions because our view is blocked by these objects cos of moving camera... We are interested in Actors Talent and not the CameraMan's Creativity... This is the TV show and not some Remix Video to use such Angles... It's very irritating...
Please give us one scene at a time and not fragments scattered all over the show.... Eg: April 20th 2009 Epi.... Prem & Heer's first night was interupted by other tragic scenes.... You could have shown this in whole 1st part and Premeer's moment in whole 2nd part..... This would keep us glued to the show and not touch the remote to change the channel.
Please use Breeze in romantic scenes.... We used to love seeing those winds ruffling Heer's & prem's Hair.... But lately you are not using any Fans..not even on their first night... Very disappointing.
Please give good Dialogues to Prem like last year... These days he is hardly saying any Philosophical & Strong Dialogues which we loved...
Please If Possible give some rest to the Actors of the Show.... Their Face looks very worn-out specially Harshad... His eyes expression is his biggest asset and when they are swollen, all its effect is missing... I Dont mind if the show is back to 4 Days a Week.... As long as they get enough rest to look fresh in the show... They don't get enough time to sleep so forget about getting some time for their Body Fitness... If the show is 4 days a week, they will atleast get time to take care of their health cos they are into show biz and physical appearance is most important factor in this field.
Thank You,
Shabnam.
Edited by lilsasha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: nitzi

Suggestions

1.Plzz keep premeer together watever happens..u may follow saga sautela track but no misundestanding
2.Redeem gaya3..Don't spoil her character..plzz
3.Let Prem support his wife and give us a scene like 18June last year😃
4.Most imp thing is dat we hav seen dat dis show has a strong male character dan female..let it be soo ..its alwayz not necessary to potray women stronger than men..
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5. Less screen space for maya veera and oder characters dan premeer..dey r eating up d whole show
6.More happy and romantic moments in d family and for premeer
7.Send premeer to honeymoon allone so dey can hav more time 2gether
8.No leaps and no kids for premeer track now let them spend more time 2geher b4 we cum to deir kids..

I Agree with Nitzi in all points she typed down.. please creatives listen to us and we will be very grateful to you.. Thank You,,
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Sidrah, Thanks for this effort u r taking on all our behalf to get the show back on its track! My helplessness seems a little abated after reading ur post. I am sure so many of the members have put up some very nice scenarios or guidelines for the creatives to ponder on them. I don't know how they will incorporate them in the story thus maintaining a consistency with the current storyline or if they can't then maybe we will just ignore so far as simple bloopers like we did for the last 6 months after Prem was introduced as faking his memory loss. Anyway I will just try to jot down what we want to see & don't want to & maybe some guidelines along the way.
I don't want to see any KIDS at this stage of their relationship. Prem & Heer need to enjoy themselves & know & understand each other more instead of bringing a kid so soon. I know they r Premeer & each knows the other from their heart but still they have some misunderstandings now & then as we keep seeing. So all this can be sorted out in these initial years of their marriage. They r just too young to be parents now & definitely no LEAPS in their relationship for the time being.
Never ever I want to see Prem's character tampered in any way. We want to see that same old Prem with that same old strength, that upright Prem, that intense, deep, passionate, serious, loving Prem who never doubted Heer's judgement until now. We have seen enough glorifying of female leads who r always on the right & suffers in the hands of her loved ones & keeps shedding tears! Really I am pushed to boredom watching this innumerably. For a change we had a strong male lead who was correct & right in every respect & bore the burden of the show on his shoulders with the strong unwavering support of Heer behind him. That is why I fell in love with the show. Can u please retain this all throughout the show as long as it lasts? Thanks.
Please retain the essence & soul of the characters as we had seen in the beginning of the show. Now the characters have changed so much sometimes I find it difficult to relate or associate with the characters. Sometimes it just seems like we r watching 2 different shows with same name & faces, that's all. And I mean for both Prem & Heer here. They r more experienced & mature but the original basic characteristics shouldn't be transformed in any way or else the basics of Prem & Heer gets lost & we feel absolutely desolate!
I don't want to see Heer as another Tulsi, Parvati or Prerna. I want to see that serious, sincere, shy, docile, reserve, loving Heer with whom I fell in love with. For once I will overlook my feminist bone & will welcome it to take a backseat. Sometimes seeing this over worldly, all knowing Heer with some added attitude makes me squirm in my seat wondering who this girl is, is it that same girl from the village of Ambala who had led a sheltered life all throughout & was so docile & shy that I fell in love with her in an instant with her innocence & naivete!! An ardent request please maintain consistency in the characters & storyline at all times.
All along we have been shown & told time without number that Prem-Heer r one & that is the crux of this show so far & now we r shown just the opposite. What fate, destiny & death couldn't do 2 mere vamps have achieved to & this is simply ridiculous. I till the end of the show want to see this theme maintained.
We r ready to see both Prem & Heer facing problems from the family & solving it together but not get separated which is unthinkable & simply goes against every thing u have portrayed so far in the show for the last 1 year. A couple faces a lot of problems in marital life, they go through lots of ups & downs but they face all this together & not fall apart. If u can maintain some normal traits in the story which we can relate to from our daily lives then it brings a wonderful flavour in the storyline.
There can be family problems that will be shown but for that they don't need to be separated. U can show them like last year being thrown out of the house & they going to live in a small haven of their own. I would love to see it provided they r happy & not miserable. And I don't want this period to be rushed by any means. I felt all the good times everytime is always rushed be it their courtship days of unspoken love through their eye-contacts or their sudden confession, be it the good times in their small house, the memory loss track of Heer which could have been followed to show some golden moments of their love! Only the tormenting moments seems to be endless.
I also want to see the track of Preet & Meher to progress, would love to see their romance blossom from the bud. After the emotional roller coaster it would be a pleasure to witness some light moments.
This show has been unique in many ways & I will be ever grateful to the Late Garry Bhinder & the ex-creative head Vikas Goopta for this. We have seen many golden moments between our Prem & Heer & somehow I miss those old magic tremendously, can we experience them again in a similar situation re-invented? I loved those eye contacts which I miss a lot now.
Also this overwhelming presence of the vamps in the show who seems to hog almost half the show now is very disturbing to watch. It creates a negative mood. I am not saying they shouldn't be shown but in comparison these moods r so overtly prevalent to the lighter moments or happy situations. I am not only talking about Prem-Heer but even I enjoy the happy situations of the family in general in a simple scene as in on the dinning table all the members enjoying chitchatting. The vamps r given too much importance & we tend to lose the focus as to who the protagonists of the show r, Prem-Heer or Veera-Maya or Rishabh Rampal or Daljeet for that instance. The show ought to be balanced. It looks very illogical to see the omnipotency of these vamps who does the exact thing at the exact moment extracting the exact reactions from people around them. Its all very very unreal, almost uncanny!
I also want to see some repentance in case of Veera. Everytime she gets away doing all her evil deeds with her manipulative manoeuvres! For once I really want to see her hitting rock bottom & it will be wonderful to see it in the hands of Maya. Who she thought as her partner in crime just turns out to be her biggest tormentor. Let us see how Maya used her as a mere pawn for her goal in destroying the Junejas. Realising this she can grovel as much as she wants in front of her parents or for that matter to Nihaal & that will be one pleasing scenario I will wait to watch.
Junejas always expects from Prem & Heer but never give back in that sense of the word. They r selfish at times, they didn't even bother to ask about Prem's whereabouts when he came back after his 'supposed' demise & that was very heart breaking to watch. Can we see some repentance on the part of the family for misunderstanding Prem & Heer all the time, how they r always put on the pedestal for sacrifices! I want them to reciprocate their love in a warm way to Prem-Heer. Let Prem & Heer leave Juneja house & then the family can realise their worth specially Gayatri. And how desperate they become to get them back to keep the family all under that 1 umbrella. Everyone learning a bitter lesson in the hands of Maya & thus realised the importance of Prem & Heer & how they thrive to welcome them back.
Gayatri can call Prem her 'sautela' beta thus putting in the last nail in the coffin for Prem which will be the ultimate cause for their leaving the Juneja house together. This way the oneness of Prem & Heer can be maintained.
In short we always would want to see them as one & never separated or broken apart in any way! Please adhere to this. We have seen enough tears & now we would like to see some smiles for a change but in that Prem-Heerish style of the past.
And always we see Heer's pain super personified, for a change can we also witness Prem's side of the story? Usually his story is summed up in 2 episodes or 2 minutes. For the past 6 months we saw Heer dying every moment but what about Prem? He too suffered in the hands of fate & yet his pain was not even remotely touched by the creatives. We were cheated from sharing his pain & miseries. So an equal footing ought to be established & equal footage ought to be bestowed on both.
We still watch the show because of the lead couple & their onscreen chemistry & for the past uniqueness of the show so far. Please maintain these features for us so that we can reciprocate our love & loyalty to it as well. At present we r ready to throw in the towel for the show, I for one never want to experience such feeling. So penned down my thoughts, wants & requests. So please creatives take note of all the guidelines & requirements & wishes of us viewers to keep the show rocking like always.
Thanks from the bottom of my heart for giving me an opportunity to voice my feelings.
Sidrah once again thank u for taking this initiative. Genuinely am grateful to u.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i hope they don't drag the sequenses, 1 month is enough for us to hang, whatever u do, plz don't make us believe something else through ur so called reality shows, i mean, like saying harshad left for gud, when he was meant to comeback, that was obviuos, u did that to accomodate him in nach n drag the story
plz don't raise false alarms, no more wolf! wolf!
u can keep the story interesting without misleading the audience.
i think the trps drop more cause of the false propaganda created than the track,
u have kept the characters intact yet, we beleive u will do that in future too, the track is fine, it is new n different. i don't like gmom's new avtaar, but it is realistic, just dont let it last long
prem shud b pretending, i think that will show his strengh of character too, n heer shud be in this with him, both can do a natak to bring out the truth, lover doves don't really have to be brainless jazbati ppl u see,
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Posted: 16 years ago
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one more thing, let this bring meet closer, at this point preet n ash are out of order, i mean ab baat bahut badh gayi
harman is an interesting character, plz make him exist.
i mean he cud well pretend to b a pillar or door or something, he is an important character, isko jagaao.
veera is a nice character, it is realistic n true, but i feel sometimes they don't handle her well, she is a tad bitchy, but basically she is downright dumb, n that shud b evident, sometimes she seems to be more intelligent that komolika
yeh asaani se baton mein aaney wali hai, khud saazish karney wali nahin, that shud not b forgotten.
n nihaal, god help him
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Posted: 16 years ago
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1- Prem/Heer should be together no matter what happens...isnt that the backbone of the story.!!!?????

2- Preet also should support Meher when those witches turn their heat on her.
3- If Heer has to leave the house, Prem should be with her and dont cause any more separation between the two.
4- Nihaal should get a backbone and divorce Veera. Then Veera should have a tough time. They should introduce someone for Nihaal and he should have a good life with that woman.
5- Gayatri should realize what she is doing with her saga/sautela nonsense and correct her mistakes.
6-Harman should throw maya out of the house and they should separate.
Thanks Sidrah for giving us all a chance to give our thoughts to improve the show.

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