||Jaane Kya Chahe Mann|| Meet One Shot

Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: jamune
awww that was so cute loved it

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk
this was simply beautiful!....great job!

Thanks so much! 😛

@shafaq: no problems! 😳😃

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ZN

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

hey sooooooooo cute luved it

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Meera

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: zaibun
hey sooooooooo cute luved it

Thanks a lot! 😃😳

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Anza

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

aww...meeru i loved it

it is soo cute, really loved the confessing part

awesome one-shot

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Thank you sooo much Anza! 😃

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Aradhna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

I was going to comment immediately, but Merlin just started. So this is my spot!

*edited*

I love Merlin. The show, and the character (but character-wise I love Arthur more. He's such a prat! 😆)

The shot started out so sad, and depressing, for a second I thought you'd changed your mind and written tragedy rather than fluff. It nearly brought tears to my eyes, reading Preet's thoughts on the situation. He really is just like his PB here. And he knows it! 😆 His attempts to cheer himself up, and then being brought back in front of Meher unwittingly by Ash.

Him confessing his feelings to her was very well done. He was both parts apologetic and passionate, and it was superbly handled. I loved that Harman and Ash accepted it, and Harman wanted Preet to take his place. It showed the bond between the siblings, and the fact that neither were evil. (And Harman indicating that he would take care of Ash, hinting to a possible Harman-Ash sequal? 😆 Should I bug you to write that now?)

I absolutely loved how the family just accepted them, because they loved one another, and the other people involved were good people who wanted them to be happy, and the utter contentment that emanated from the couple was palpable even beyond this computer screen! If that does not tell you how amazing this was, I don't know what will!

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

awww... Meera... this was choo chweett 😳

Me Loves it! 😳... My favourite Meet one 😃

I loved the way you described Preet... =)

oh...and I'm so happy that Harman is sad 😆.. lol...I'm so evil 😆

Keep writing more =)

-Shivani

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shikha87

@shikha87

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

ahhh that was so good atleast you made bander positive thats a big applause for you please and please do your one shots i love it and also thankyou for using my favourate song ahhhhhh

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