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update plzzzzzzzzzz waitinggggggg for it asap.
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oh so sad at the end hes goin to leave her but the start was fab and suprizin keep it up
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wow wonderful update....please continue..and yes please don't seperate heer and prem in the end
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hey gr8 FF..
i just caught up with this FF andi really liked it..
cont soon
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Hello everybody,

Thanks for the wonderful comments. Sorry couldn't update earlier due to some commitments. Hope you like this chapter.

Chapter 7

The beach was empty at this time of year especially in this weather. They walked in silence, thinking about everything that had happened here so many months ago, feeling the weight of lost time, of no time to lose, feeling the bite of salt and cold on the skin, the wet sand between their toes.

Heer shivered and Prem slipped his hand into hers. It seemed the natural thing to do. But neither wanted to speak, to give voice to their thoughts and break the spell, the strange sense that they were into the past, to a night one year ago, to something neither of them had been able to properly confront. Something both still had to deal with. Together.

The sun was rising high up in the sky. Prem brought out a blanket and the basket of food. They sat staring at the dark void of ocean enjoying their food. Heer felt more at ease with this man beside her than she'd felt in the past one year. Being with Prem felt natural - as ordinary and as vital to her well-being as the simple act of breathing. How strange it was to slip so easily back into the camaderie they shared when so many unexplained things lay in between. She looked at him.

"Tell me Prem, why are you back?"

"This is supposed to be a trick question, right?" said Prem smilingly.

"I am being serious Prem" replied Heer.

"To get you back, Heer." He didn't even blink.

"Do you mean that?" A dark thrill rippled through her.

"I always say what I mean."

"What about the army, the national security Prem? What will happen to me when you want to go back? Have you even thought about that? From what I see you love what you are doing now. Do you think you can give it up to be with me or do you want to have the cake and eat it too?"

"Let's think about all that later Heer. We are together, here, now. Let's just leave it at that." said Prem softly.

Heer stared at him, trying to read his eyes. She got up, went to the edge of the ocean and her eyes began to sting as the weight of what he had just said seemed to be coming down on her.

Prem let her be for a few minutes. He wanted her. It was the truest emotion in him. He knew why he survived the bomb blast. She was the reason for him being alive.

Prem walked towards Heer. He placed the palm of his hand against the side of her face, looked deep into her eyes, something so incredibly dear and gentle in his own. She didn't need the words. She didn't need to tell him. He understood. She could see it in his eyes.

"Please don't cry Heer. I cannot ever tolerate your tears."

Tears rolled hot down her cheeks. "I love you, Prem. So much."

His own eyes glistened sharply. The corner of his lip twitched. "I have always loved you Heer" he whispered leaning closer.

"Can you please understand why I had to be away from you for the past year?" asked Prem.

"Maybe some things can never be understood. Maybe they just need to be accepted. And maybe then we can move on."

He nodded.

"We have both been given a second chance here. It's what happens next that matters. That will be our test."

"What will happen next, Prem?"

Something shifted in his eyes and his features. So did the tone of his voice. "Do you trust me, Heer?"

Unease tightened her chest. "I.... I am not sure I like the way you said it, Prem."

"I need you to trust me, Heer." The intensity in his voice was alarming.

"Yes Prem. I trust you and I believe you."

Prem let out a sigh of relief.
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wow gr8 update.i was expecting a bigger update though
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Originally posted by: Intellienough

wow gr8 update.i was expecting a bigger update though



Hey,

Thank you. I am putting up another chapter by the end of the day. Hope you like it. 😆

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awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap with long part.
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Chapter 8

RR stared at the cellphone in his hand. His chest was tight, squeezing his lungs like a vice. He was losing control. His assistant had just called to say that the Government had somehow got a heed of his plans. He was told that the Government had managed to enlist someone who was operating out there in the shadows, working against him. He thought of Heer's cousin and wondered if he was involved in some way.He tried to breathe. He had to release the pathogen now. He had no other choice.

RR walked to his window, still gripping his phone. He had managed to get the entire Juneja family together, except Heer. She was still out there somewhere, out of his grasp. He had no antidote near her, no one to whisk her out of the country. He had to wait.

RR wondered what would it all be worth if he killed Heer - the person he loved. What kind of a man would that make him? He clenched his jaw thinking.

He turned suddenly, picked up his other phone and started punching in a series of codes that would set off a chain of events that only he personally would be able to halt. He hung up, feeling a resurgence of his power. He had just initiated protocol that would cause the bombs to blow at precisely five minutes past midnight today. He had just bought himself additional bargaining power - insurance - to search for Heer.

He wanted to meet Heer's cousin. He was not very happy about her connection with him. Once he had the chance, he will take him down. He would find a way to explain the man's disappearance to Heer. And she'd get over it, just as she'd gotten over Prem all those months ago.

RR stilled in mild shock. Why was he even thinking about Prem? It was because of Heer's cousin, thats why. There was something vaguely haunting about the man who called himself her cousin.


Prem looked at Heer. She was sleeping peacefully. He was driving back. He knew that he had hurt her a year ago when he disappeared. He'd broken her down and her had rebuilt her trust in the last few hours. And now he was going to have to smash it to smithereens. To get RR, to save the nation, he was going to have to pay the ultimate sacrifice - he was going to have to kill his dream. He was going to have to give up Heer for good.


Back home, Heer excused herself to take a shower. Prem used this time to make some phone calls. He looked at the sky seeing the sun sinking down tinting the world a shimmering copper. Today was the day. In few hours time it would all be over.

He went through his plan. Heer had talked to RR and made sure they would meet at 10pm tonight. Prem had conveyed this to his superiors and all his men. There were two teams waiting for instructions, ready for action. The choppers were on standby. They'd be in the air and approaching the target shortly before midnight. His team was also in position, strategically distanced from RR's office. He picked up the printout and studied the specs for RR's office again, committing the layout to memory.

Prem put the specs down. Everything was ready. He had a sample of the virus that RR was planning to use. He had the syringe ready. The antidote was also ready in his pocket. Prem inhaled deeply as he thought about that aspect of the operation. He was supposed to inject Heer with the virus so as to convince RR that Heer was really in danger and that he should abort the operation and surrender. Once RR surrendered, he had to inject the antidote into her. The medics would be on standby with the choppers. If necessary, they could get Heer into a hospital withing minutes. She'd be safe. But still, he didn't like the idea. Not one bit. For too many reasons to count.

Once the operation was complete, authorities would be notified and the CIA would take over. It would be best to eliminate RR in the takedown - a man with his power and connections was not easily contained behind bars. It would be simple enough to take him out with a stray bullet, and the world would be a better place and it would be a exact revenge for RR actions a year ago. But Prem could not do it. He had his conscience. He realised that after tonight a future for him and Heer together might never be possible.

Heer stepped out of the bath and started smiling. She felt alive after a real long time. She remembered spending time with Prem - lying in the sun, talking about everything and anything except about RR and what was going to happen tonight. It was a time of getting to know each other again, finding out that although time had changed them so much, something hadn't changed at all.

"Its what happens next that matters." Prem's words wove through her mind. But she felt better equipped for what lay ahead now. She was committed to confront RR and seeing him in prison.

Prem saw her and walked up to her. He came to her side an unfathomable look filling his eyes. He took both her hand in his.

Anxiety rippled through Heer. "What is it, Prem?"

"I wasn't going to say this, not until after, because I am not sure where we'll be after midnight."

Her pulse quickened.

"One year back I wanted to spend the rest of my life with you."His eyes held hers. "I still do. I still want you to marry me, Heer. This is what I want. I never want to lose you. Not again."

"Prem..... you're scaring me."

His eyes burned. He grabbed her and kissed her. And when he pulled away, she saw a raw anguish in his features.

"I love you more than anything, Heer," he whispered his voice gravelly with emotion.

"Prem..... you're not thinking of going and dying on me now, are you?"

His lip twitched. "Done that already ---- Now I'm thinking of how much living we still have to do, how much time we have to make up."

"Yes we do" replied Heer.

Relief sifted into his eyes and Heer was moved to see it. Her warrior was vulnerable. He cared so much about her that he was afraid. She could not have loved him more than at that moment.

Prem checked his watch and inhaled deeply. "It's time."

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey just went thruogh ur entire ff!! man its amazing!!!!! mindblowing!!! a very nice plot!! very unique and praise worthy!! love it!!! do update soon ...cant wa8 tto find out wat happens nextt!!
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