New FF:*Aitebar* (trust) 24april part2 on page5

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title is made by Sara 😳 thank you sweetu you made your di smile and di liked your gift 🤗
My dear Friends and Silent readers...
Assalam u alykum, hi ,namasta

Everyone I am back with a new ff *Aitebar*( Trust )this is just a Fan fic nothing else .If it resembles with some one life I am sorry.

Concept

Net Friendship

As now days net is very common or necessary my ff is on Net friend ship. Can any one fall in love just because of chatting. can in this fake and materialistic world you can find a trustworthy friend.,with whom you can share your sorrow and happiness. and with passage of time that person became must for you .
Two people met on kdmhmd forum the started chatting and pm each other they discuss each and every episode and every scene between prem n heer every ff..

*Aitebar*

Aitebar Bhi Aa Hi Jaye Ga

Milo To Sahi Raasta Koi
Mil Hi Jaye Ga

Chalo To Sahi

Aitebar BhiAa Hi Jaye Ga

Dhoop Mein Khada
Jal Raha Hoon Main
Saaya Do Mujhay
Yeh Mera Junoo'n
Yeh Meri Jalan
Hai Meri Saza
Meri Yeh Thakan
Keh Rahi Hai Kya

Suno To Sahi
Aitebar Bhi Aa Hi Jaye Ga

Kya Hua Agar Zindagi Zara
aluchl Si Gai
Socho To Zara
Jungalon Main Bhi
Raastay To Hain
Humain Bhi Koi
Mil Hi Jaye Ga

Chalo To Sahi

Pyar waar Bhi
Ho Hi Jaye Ga
Milo To Sahi
Raasta Koi
Mil Hi Jaye Ga

Aitebar Bhi Aa Hi Jaye Ga

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Character sketch:

Hero of the story..... Prem eldest in Juneja family

2nd Son of Juneja Harman

3rd Son of Juneja Preet

and

Only 3 bros

Weird but caring father n wonderful mother in earth for prem... Lallit n Gaya3

Kulraj Prem cousin

Heroine of the story.... Heer elder in Maan Family

Heer is Maan's first wife daughter

Emotional person lil angry man....

Heer step mother........................ DJ

Heer 1st step sis, she is very good in nature........ Ashlesha Maan

Heer 2nd step sis, she is proud....... Meher Maan

Prem office:

Veera his Secretary... like him very much

Veera brother's Rshab Rampal and Dheer Rampal

(Rishab Rampal is competitor to Prem's business....to know his business secrets he kept his sister in Prems office)

Nihal...Manger n friend of Prem

Note it is bit confusing

As it is double role when ever they will discuss the will use HC and AG and they them self are Prem n Heer faces are same .

If I will get a positive response I will add part one. if you all like do tell me if not even then tell me i will not start this

sorry for mistakes

links
Part 1:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1163958&TPN=2
Part 2:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1163958&TPN=5
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Edited by brokenheart26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waiting to read it nice charater sketch
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Posted: 16 years ago
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looks interesting, i'd like to see where you are going with this!! =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Cool lets see how it turns out lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sounds cool!!!😃 please continue!! ohh and heer is already married? and Veera likes...erhmm Prem? woah sounds interesting!! do continue!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

sounds cool!!!😃 please continue!! ohh and heer is already married? and Veera likes...erhmm Prem? woah sounds interesting!! do continue!

😳heer is not married she is from khan first wife Dj is her step mom
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow...chalo finally u agreed....nice luking forward...to read...it...well u knw tht i m not at all intrested in reading ff...lol...but this one i surely read...for u...
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Originally posted by: mireen19

wow...chalo finally u agreed....nice luking forward...to read...it...well u knw tht i m not at all intrested in reading ff...lol...but this one i surely read...for u...

yes i know you dont like to read ff it will be my pleasure if you will 😉read my 😳 boring ff . you force me to start how i can say no
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part 1
Heer : love to live alone she does not make friends as she is scared they will leave her and go. Her best friend is her laptop. Her step mother is very strike in her matter. She ask her thousand question to keep her self away from all that she made her own world. she sees kis desh mein hain meraa dil and a great fan of Harshad and Additi. She jointed India forum and spend her most of day in Kis desh mein hain meraa dil forum.

After watching

Additi & Harshad Scenes From June 18, 2008

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=imnW8vxooYw

(With permission of premheer1 I am using scenes from her channel you all must have forgotten lets again see few scene)

Heer was depressed and very sad does not know what to do she sign in forum replying to few topic.

She added a topic:" Is there an angel in everyone life? "

After watching to day's episode I am very depressed . Why always nice people are to be suffered I feel like crying after seeing Harshad and Additi acting. How she was beating poor Additi. Is there an angel in everyone life? Does everyone find that person? Is every girl rescued?

Heer a known member of forum.

Prem; a business man and he has his own way to spend life he does not have many friends and he is very reserve. he does not share his feeling with any one.

Prem was searching for a file he could not find it on his table he called Veera to come inbut from there he did not get any response he had to go to her cabin

Prem: "Veera what are you doing? For last 10 min I am calling you and you are not replying where is the file?"

Veera: who was busy in reading some thing and crying?

Prem: "why are you crying? What happen?" He stared at her

Veera: "woh Harshad and Additi are kicked out of home."

Prem: "what?" he passed her tissue paper

Veera: cleaned her face:"1 min I will clean my face and come" she left her desk

Prem: who is very kind to every one got worried why she is crying he turn her laptop towards him self and started reading

kis desh mein haim meraa dil forum window was open he read

Topic :Harshad and Additi kicked out of home

Next topic was Heer's: Is there an angel in everyone life?

Prem read and it attracted him he was about to open that topic Veera came

Prem: left it like that "Veera this is office"

Veera:" I know" as she saw him reading

Prem: "you are watching serial in office time?"

Veera: "yes do you have any problem."

Prem: "yes I want that file ."

Veera : bang that in front of him : "take this"

Prem: smiled "by the way it was very sad to hear Harshad and Additi kicked out of home

wink her"

Veera: "you go and now don't ask me any thing."

Prem: "I know you want to cry crazy girl bye."

Prem left the cabin

Prem and Veera brother were friends and to keep herself busy she was working here.

Late night

Prem finished his work he was about to close his laptop but some thing was disturbing him.

He open india-froums site .He forgot what page was open on Veera's laptop . After searching he found Kis desh mein hain meraa dil

Prem: I want to read that topic only what was in that? He found it

topic Is there an angel in everyone life?

Prem got emotional after reading it he trying to reply but

"Error members with permission are allowed to reply"

Prem: "what is this? Now I have to make an account here. Mr. Prem what are you doing? No I will reply to this person why I don't know? ''.talking to himself

Id :H&A fan right he made and account and smiled

Prem added

Yes there is an angel in everyone's life. One day he sure came .in few person's life that angel come early and in few late. But we have to wait for that angel. And we should never loss Hope.

After sending he smiled at himself

Prem:" what I am doing I don't believe in such things. What happen to me suddenly ".he rested his head on back of his chair and closed his eyes

Heer :who was about to sign out check last time her topic

Heer: wow newbie reply to me she read and a smiled '. Let me Pm this newbie

Heer

Hi thanks for replying to my topic it is my pleasure that your first reply is on my topic. I want to reply what you added but right now I am sleepy take care see you again sure

Prem : woke up with some sound out side his office he checked time "now I better go home" he was about to close his laptop he saw one new mail

Prem: shocked who mailed me ' he read and smiled.

"Ma'am I will not come here again " he said to himself and he sign out .

To be cont

Dear friends please for give me for mistakes if you like do reply the I will update next part after many months starting a ff I am scared you will like or not . if you want me to add you in pm list tell me please .

Edited by brokenheart26 - 16 years ago

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