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Posted: 16 years ago
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part 2

next day
Heer woke up with a phone call

Heer to her dearest friend kulraj :" I will not be able to come why don't you understand my situation Kulraj"

Kulraj on other side:" Heer try once for my sake please"

Heer:" you some time act as if you don't now anything about me."

Kulraj: "Heer I know but I want we spend these days together."

Heer:" ok for you I will hear my mom talk but what is the use if she gave me permission you all will leave after 2 hours "

Kulraj : "you try I am sure you will get this time"

Heer university friends were going on a trip before they say bye to each other as this was last few days together for Heer freedom days were coming to an end after that she will be totally at home 24 hours in cage of her mom.

she went for .breakfast 'cont thinking how she will take permission from her mom as she try to talk to her but she strictly said no. with permission letter she walk to dinning room . Heer gain all her courage

Heer: mom

Mom who was busy talk to ash and Meher ignore her.

Heer: again "mom"

Mom:" can not you see I am talking to them."

Heer: quietly turn back but at same time her father enter he had heard DJ harsh tone

Papa: "Heer how are you? "

Heer: wipe her eyes" I am fine "

Papa: "today you have breakfast with me."

She sits with her head down playing with fork

Papa: "heer your exam are finished now what is your future plans?"

DJ: push the chair and left the dinning table. As she never like Heer and her Papa talk. Meher and Ash follow her.

Heer : "nothing papa I will stay at home."

Papa: "why you are not eating?"

Heer: "I am not hungry."

Papa: "Heer why don't you join me."

Heer: no I am fine she was folding the permission letter or trying to tear it

Papa taken that from her hand "let me see this"

Heer: "papa it is just a page nothing in it." Heer was sacred if mom fine out she will not leave her she will think she stop her but she did not gave any weight age to what she said .Her face color change.

Papa: read and taken out pen and sign ......... at same time DJ enter room she saw him keeping his pen back and folded the paper and gave her back with a smile but Heer was really worried as she saw mom standing. and staring at her

Papa:" Heer go and get ready in ten min why you didn't told me before I will drop you to your university he completely ignore Dj present Heer confused looking at his face.

she was in state of shock how suddenly she got permission as she was trying her level best for last 1 week but her Mom every time scold her. she walk in her room an quickly start packing

DJ: "why you gave her permission? You always say house and children matters are my problem

MR Maan: DJ (she does not like her name and want everyone call her DJ) why you did not gave her permission? Last week Ash went in her friend wedding you didn't stop her."

DJ: "Ash is Ash and Heer is Heer don't compare Ash with Heer. Heer is coward she don't know how to face world."

Mr Maan: "she is not you stop treating her like that. I don't have time this does not mean you do what ever you want to do? When you will treat her as your daughter?"

DJ: in anger " Mr maan if any thing happen than don't ..... Walk away in her way she met Heer coming with her bag she stop there " you come back i will see you"

Heer:" if you don't like I will not go mom"

MR maan : who was seeing DJ talking to Heer called her "Heer you are already late."

Heer with confusion walk behind her papa he drop her to her camps before she left

Papa: "Heer fight for your rights and enjoy your life."

Heer: smiled "thank you papa."

kulraj saw Heer coming shouted in joy : "Finally you made it I knew she ran and hug her"

Heer sheepishly my lucky dear papa came and he gave me permission.

kulaj: you reached in time they both seat on back seat

All girls sing song busy in talking. Heer feeling free like a bird looking out side busy in watching road side landscape. She had taken her laptop and sign in forum just to see what's going on at her second home.

Heer let me reply to this newbie she pm

hi yesterday you were right we have to wait . Every thing will be fine we should not lose hope. now I am 101% sure miracle do happen in this world. Take care see you soon.

Topic miracle does happen

She sends it and sign out

Prem has a habit when he had to concentrate on some project he heir a caravan and move out of city at some quiet place. As he had to start a new project to work on that he was traveling out side city. His cell buzzes while driving he check a new mail from India-forums

Prem :"uff what I did yesterday? I added my this id there I was totally out of my mind .Mr Prem was acting like a fool. He read "Miracle does happen "

Smiled

To be cont ''''..if you guys like only then. and if you want me to add you in Pm list do tell me

our sweet Sara made this as a gift hope you like it a suprised for me 😳😳😳 from her 🤗
Edited by brokenheart26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
oh so sweet cant w8 to read more
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
nice update.waiting 4 the next part.add me to the pm list plzzzz.
Thanks
lots of luv
Edited by luv4bb - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Wohoo....!! plzz continu..waitin 2 read moreee......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
soooooooo sweet keep continue waiting for othere part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
that was awesome dii great ff
waiting for part 3
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
Awesome update... and i really like the siggy!!! Update soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
sorry exams now days as soon as exams over i will leave commnets please dont be angry always keep smiling . as i got my old apu back .
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
Hi naadia, i read ur part 1.

To tell the truth. I was expecting something like ur 1st ff. When i started reading. It was not fulfilling my expectation. But later on I was able to see the ff writer whom i like the most.

Its so nice. go ahead naadia. Let me read ur next part and comment.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
wow, naadia
I love the way the story is going. Its so nice. pls do continue. me waiting.
I think prem and heer r going to meet soon.
can't wait. make it fast.

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