NEW FF....Milan jo likhya..NOTE.......Pg38........ - Page 21

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx happybrar ................Glad u enjoyed this one too dear............next part asap..............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx purplestar22 ..............Glad u enjoyed it dear.............and don't worry...........main hoon naa.............next part coming soon............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx pooji..............Glad u enjoyed this one too dear.............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Sweta............next part coming soon dear.............😊just posting............
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello everyone............Here's the next short part........hope u enjoy this one too..............and send n ur valuable comments............😊

There Prem was getting desperate to hear his Heer say something……….and worried that this all might not take a toll on her…………..he holds Heerby her shoulders and then he says angrily--- Kuch toh kaho Heer…….iss tarah chup matt raho………….dekho…………dekho meri taraf!...............(and he makes Heer face him and says further)………….Nihaal abb nahiin raha………….he is gone……………do u listen to me………….vo abb kabhi waapas nahiin aayega!..................😭

Heer stares hard at Prem………………trying to get what he was saying……………trying to let what he meant sink down her mind……………..

There Maya and Harman r in their room…………..

Harman was saying--- Yeh sab kya ho gaya Maya……….ek hii pal mein…………..sab kuch bikhar gaya………pata nahiin baujii lauteingey toh unnpar kya beeteigii…………kya jawaab deinge hum unhein?................

Maya smiles wickedly after Harman leaves from there…………..and thinks to herself----Tum nahiin toh aur kaun jaanegaa Harman kii yeh sab kissney kiya hai………….yaa phir mainne kiiskii wajah se aisa kiya hai?...................Kaheen naa kaheen iss sab ke liye tum hii toh zimedaar ho…………….tum mujhe mere dad kii bezatti karkey iss ghar mein laaye the na………….mujhe iss ghar mein………….inn logon ke saath milkar zindagi guzarvaana chahtey the naa😡?................Dekho mainne kya kar diya?............Tumhaare iss aashiyaaney ko bikher ke rakh diya……………..waise………….aggartum mere saath mere dad ke saath rethtey……………toh shaayad mujhe yeh sab nahiin karnaa padhtaa…………….😔

Maya says loudly making sure no one was around---- Mera badlaa toh poora ho gaya Harman!..................Lekin abb jis barbaadi ka aagaaz main karney waali hoon……………..usse tumhaari iss galti kaa koi lenaa denaa nahiin hai………….aur naa hii Prem aur Heer kii zindagi mein aaney waaley toofaan ke liye tum zimedaar ho!.................Kyunkii abb toh mujhe unn donon se…………..kisi aur apney ke badley ko anjaam dena hai!.....................😲😕

Maya gives her usual Cruela smile and laughs to herself…………..elated as she could already imagine Prem and Heer's miserable life she had planned ahead!........................😈

Prem soon noticed Heer's body stir………….as tears welled up in her eyes…………and the next instant…………she was hugging Prem tight……………and crying bitterly in the arms of the man she loved the most!.................

Heer sobbed--- Yeh sab kyun hua Prem?!............Nihaal bhaiya…………….hummein chodkey kaise jaa saktey hain!...................vo…………..vo aisa kaise kar saktey hain Prem?!...............KYUN!?………………….😭

Prem embraces Heer's head with his hand…………….and gently stroking her hair with his hand ………..as Heer cried inconsolably!.................and it was that one moment………….Prem felt light within…………as he realized that he had taken the RIGHT DECISION!.................Heer needed him the most!...................😭

The next few days were the toughest for Preet and Prem……………during theday the two of them went to work and as they had set up a new business the job demanded more hardwork from them…………..and dedication which the two brothers put in well…………….while at home Kuldii would manage everything trying her level best……………….trying to get Heer and Meher come out of the grief of losing their only elder brother!.................never leaving them alone for even a second………….KD was more than a helping hand for Preet and Prem……………….😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeee too goodvery nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update.thanks 4 the pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
awesum super
loved it every bit of it
thankz for pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great update yaar!!!!!!
I can see that your writing skills have majorly improved over the course of your two stories!!!!!!! *thumbs up*
*Giggle* Gosh, this shrimp (Maya) is absolutely crazy!!!!!!! Talking to herself and evil cackles all the way!!!!! These people are so wierd, talking out loud!!!! ROFL!!!!!!
Oh no, poor bauji, i wonder what he is going to do when he comes back!!!!! Poor guy is in for a shock!!!!!!!!!
I feel so horrible for Meher and Heer, with Nihall gone......... poor guys!!!!!! *sob* I'm so so so glad that Prem and Preet made the right decision and so did Kuld di!!!! *thumbs up*
*sigh* If only the serial people had brains like yours!!! You should be a creative seriously!!!!!!
Great update and i can't wait till the next part!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx sweta............glad u enjoyed this one too dear..............😊

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