Sholon Si (one-shot). Please read! =)

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Pst! Maddy! I'm not Radz😆 I think you meant Ravz😆

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-
Pst! Maddy! I'm not Radz😆 I think you meant Ravz😆

😳 I'm hiding under my bed becuase this is the second time i made this mistake*!!!!!!!!!! First i called Radz Ravz, and then i called Ravz Radz!!!!! (that sounds confusing)😕 ......................... You know what, I'm going to call you Ravjot!!!! There, that settles the problem!!! Gosh, i'm so ashamed of myself right now!!! 😳😳😳

Thanks for liking the song by the way!! I thought it was appropriate for something which has salsa!!! And yes, guys dancing to salsa is very hot!!! 😳😉😆

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

It's ok Maddy =) You can call me whatever name you want =) Some call me Ravs, others Ravioli, Ducky...you can make up your own name if you want =)

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Kashish

@..kashish..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

wow loved the shot! hai shifu is so lucky!...loved it...romance, passion everything is there!

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ash08

@ash08

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Maddy, a great job!! Awesome. 👏

Loved the song.

I loved the way you built up the scene.......... keeping us glued to the story and the way you described the dance and the feelings between the both of them was wow......

You should really write more.

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: ..kashish..
wow loved the shot! hai shifu is so lucky!...loved it...romance, passion everything is there!

I'm glad you liked it and i tried my best to capture the emotions above!!! =)

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: ash08
Maddy, a great job!! Awesome. 👏

Loved the song.

I loved the way you built up the scene.......... keeping us glued to the story and the way you described the dance and the feelings between the both of them was wow......

You should really write more.

Awww, i'm so happy you liked it!! I promise to write more, i'm definately planning a few more one-shots!!! 😉😆