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Posted: 16 years ago
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Alright eveyone this is my first one scene one shot????.Hope u enjoy it????..Actually I have been thinking to start one for quite long????lekin after Friday's episode????I think I oculdn't have found a situation any better than this??????

Aur waise I don't know what's happened to all the clocks at my place..............abhi its still Saturday night............phir Sunday morning.....afternoon......evening.........night............phir kahiin jaake it will be Monday morning............afternoon............evening............and then Prem Heer😳............Boy this weekend is soooooooooo long!😔

And I'm getting terribly bored.............šŸ˜•
Anyways hope u all enjoy my first attempt and send in ur valuable comments..............😊

Its dawn????..Heer has made her wish???..as the gurbani plays in the background-- Mujhe mera Prem chahiye?????and she opens her eyes?????..standing right in front of him is the man she luved more than anyone in the world????..Prem????.šŸ˜‰

They both take a step towards each other????..Heer is all tears and Prem too finds tears welling up in his eyes????.Heer kisses his hands????unable to believe he was actually there!.............She sobs-- Main jaanti thi tum????tum kahiin nahiin jaoge????.😭😊

Prem nods his head as he too cries????..and he embraces Heer's face with his hands????..saying-- Tumhaara vishwaas jeet gaya Heer????tumhaara pyaar jeet gaya????..ek baar phir????vo Prem ko waapas tumhaare paas le aaya?????..iss baar humesha ke liye!šŸ‘

And Prem hugs Heer tightly????..like someone clings to his or her life?????.as in the background plays the title track of KDMHMD???????.šŸ‘

Its morning????..the morning rays fall into the room onto Heer's face?????.she gets up instantly????.wondering if she had just seen a dream?....................šŸ˜•

But when she turns to see Prem sleeping besides her with an unusual calm and serenity on his facešŸ˜›????..Heer can't help but smile???..as she stares at him lovingly??????.and she remembers how she and Prem had sat at the entrance of the house last night as Prem told her how that BOL (sorry I called her this againšŸ˜†????..lekin kya karoon that lady made our sweet Prem cry khoon ke aansoon😔)?????.

Then the two had made their way inside with Prem telling Heer as he held her hands-- Abb kabhi tumhe chod kar nahiin jaaongaa Heer????.jitney gham???..jitni takleefein thi????.sab khatm????..main tumhaari zindagi uss har khusi se bhar doonga jo kabhi tumne chahi hogi????..(and then he had kissed her hands????.apologising for all the pain and suffering he had caused her)????..šŸ‘

The flashback ends and Heer looks at Prem?????who was still fast asleep????..after the anguish and fear of all these days he seemd to ba soundly asleep???..as Heer embraces his forehead with her hand and smiles thinking to herself-- Dekha Prem????mainne tumse kahaa tha???..meri kismet mujhe kabhi dhoka nahiin de sakti????.tum meri kismet ho????.aur mera Prem mujhe kabhi dhoka nahiin de saktaa??????.abb we both will be together ?????foever?????..😳

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Nitty2910 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow it was romantic... very well written and i wish that we get to see some good romantic scene of prem and heer..

and ya i agree monday seems so so so long....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww......that was sweet

very good workšŸ‘šŸ¼


me too.......this weekend is like sooooOOOOOoooO lOng...........................................................................................
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can't wait till Monday......OMG m so excited
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very good work dearšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ and ya its becoming more and more difficult to wait till monday..dying to see mondayz epi..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It is so beautifully written
Awesome workšŸ‘
Would love to see this happen
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woooooooooooooooooow dear very nice keep it up dear...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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we would be lucky if we could get something like this pls pls pls creatives, if u havent done this u still have time monday is still a day away get on it this is what we want to see
i was wondering what we would like on monday and this is it... thanks for sharing this with us

fatima
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
awesum romantic sooo cute sweet
loved it
every one is waiting for monday me too
but i don't want my easter break too over

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow very well written I just hope creative can do something like this
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OHHHH that was really nice and romantic.šŸ‘
It seemed you are a professional. But it was too short.
Plzzzzz continue it na.
And yes I agree this weekend is very long at everyones' places.😳😳
Well Done
Hina😊

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