||Never Fade Away|| (FF) Note Pg. 17 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: v^.^v -aznpride

haha... i can soo imagine my parent's reaction to the "what boys" line... totally the same as balraj... hm... so prem and heer met... What a meeting yaar... he's already left an impression.... add me to the PM list please... and... oh ya... i almost forgot... UPDATE SOON!



Awww I'm glad you liked it! ๐Ÿ˜ณ This ff won't be updated regularly! ๐Ÿ˜† But I'll def add you to the pm list! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
Read and commented!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushi34

Reserved!!! what a fairytale......๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ Thanks Khushbu! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

*unreserved* Meeeraaa!!! That was awesome!! Oh.My.God. Heer met her prince charming already๐Ÿ˜ฒ...More like the SUPERMAN who saved her Lol...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Ohhh Hope she meets him again during her trip.....I loved the way you described her attraction towards the STRANGER lol....Loved her disappointment when he left her...wonder why that was!! Love at first sight???๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†....Pehli nazar mein kaisa jaddoo kar...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Eeeee Thank you, ahhh superman, he so suits the title na? All cute and adorable looking and then he can transform, based on this despriction of course *uhem* I love that song! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Reminds me a lot of Mahi from Bacchana ae hasino...Dnt ask me why....cause I have no clue ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
ooo..Maddys heers friend....Meera you're a fab writer...sorry for the late comment..guess m the last one lol๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ Oh I know why, don't worry, she was looking for her DDLJ Raj, Heer however not looking!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Awww yeah I used Maddy, Ravs, Shifali, and Zahroo! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Don't worry about being last! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Anyways..this part was fab...like a real fairytale story...update soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ Thank you so much Khushbu! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Khushbu
xx

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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Part 2


Ravjot envelops Heer into a hug the minute she put down her carry on luggage.


"Sheesh Ravs, you're acting as if I was about to die," Heer rolls her eyes as they let go of each other.


"I'm sorry," Ravjot moves away. "Don't blame us if you missed this flight."


"She's right," Madhuri chimes in. "Uncle would have killed the four of us if anything had happened to you,"


Heer shrugs and sits down in between Zahra and Shifali. "You two aren't saying anything."


Shifali casually flips the page in her magazine. "Is there something you want me to say?"


Heer looks at her and takes the magazine out of her hands and checks the cover and puts it back. "If you had just told me you were reading 'jiju's' interview. I would've understand,"


Zahra bursts out laughing while Ravs and Maddy are trying hard to not to laugh. Shifali just glares at all of them to stop.


"Just because it's an Imran Khan interview doesn't mean I'm going to ignore you guys, I just didn't have anything to say to Heer, that's all." Shifali explains. "And seriously stop calling him that. I've never even met him. He's just cute, that's all,"


Zahra shakes her head. "Yeah...right! You would always have something to say when ANY of us are late, as for the Imran Khan thing. Yes yes, we've been through this."


Ravjot shakes her head and sits down across from Shifali. "Have you ever wondered what you'd do if you met him somewhere?"


Shifali sighs as she shuts the magazine. "Nope, and we've been through this a few times, right girls?" The other four just look at her, waiting for an answer. "Fine. If I met himโ€”I don't know what I'd do; because I want it to be a special moment,"


"How cute is that?" Heer sighs.


"All passengers traveling to Paris by flight AF440 please start boarding at gate C43" The announcer says.


The five girls get their belongings and walk towards the gate. Heer trails after the group and just turns back to readjust her carry on when she sees HIM, standing behind a pillar, staring right at her. Instinctively she raises her hand, but then is stunned when Zahra grabs her hand and drags her into the plane with them.


"You couldn't wait a second?" Heer mutters as she follows Zahra through the plane.


"Why should I wait? We're all supposed to board together," Zahra whispers back.


"I know that butโ€”" Heer groans.


"But what?" Zahra turns and asks.


"Never mind," Heer mumbles.


"Okay guys this row and this one has our numbers," Ravjot points to two on one side of the aisle and three on the other side.


Shifali gets into the one with three seats, followed by Maddy and Zahra, leaving Heer and Ravjot to sit together on the double seat.


"You seem kinda distracted," Ravjot mentions as they get settled in their seats. Heer continues looking out the window while shrugging. "Well if you want to talk, we ARE sitting next to each other for the next 7 hours," she grins at Heer who just smiles back.


Who was he? I just couldn't stop thinking about him. There was something in his eyes that told her he'd always be with her, but how could that be if I've never met him before today. Yet for some reason I was getting the feeling that I have seen him somewhere. Heer stayed lost in her thoughts while Zahra and Shifali were having an intense discussion over Heer.


"I don't know Zahroo, for some reason I get the feeling she just wants to torment us by not telling us," Shifali says.


"That's stupid though." Zahra adds. "If we're her friends we should know too,"


"Maybe we should just wait for her to feel comfortable?" Maddy spoke up from between them.


Shifali and Zahra both stop and look at her.


"That's a really good idea," Zahra looks at her and smiles.


"Course it is. Who came up with it?" Maddy pretends to pop her collar.


"I find it weird though," Zahra adds. "I've never seen Heer so lost in thought."


"I know which is why the only question is, when will she want to tell us." Shifali wonders out loud.


Yes super short, but I felt bad in making you all wait soooo long! ๐Ÿ˜› So I've decided that I'll do weekly updates for this one! ๐Ÿ˜Š Every Sunday or Monday there will be an update ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Enjoy! ๐Ÿ˜›


Love you all loads,


Meera๐Ÿ˜ณ

Posted: 16 years ago
#55
BOO YA!

^^So cool. ๐Ÿ˜†

Anywhoooo.....cute update, with all the friends hanging around the lounge and all!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Specially loved Shifali in this update, she is so love - struck underneath all that practical look, there is one SMUSHBALL! ๐Ÿ˜† Aha, the friendship between all the girls is depicted amazingly Meera, and YAY for weekly updates! =]

--shabz
Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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salsa! =)
I'm sooo sorry i took so long!!! *holding my ears and then hands over a cookie* ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Awww, Ravz is so sweet!!! Heer is funny!!! ๐Ÿ˜† ROFL!!!!!!! Jiju's interview!!!!! That surely got Shifu's attention!!!! If anyone didn't already know, they do now; that Shifali loves Imran Khan!!!!! Yeah right, just cute!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜† He's perfect (but Shifu can have him)!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
No one was fooled by Shifu's aloof nature, Zahru made sure to point that out!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜† Awwwwww, she would want it to be a special moment!!!!! That is so sweet!!!!! I'm such a sap at times, i could totally imagine the violons, harp and someone singing DDLJ in the background if i ever meet my Rajkumar!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Ooooooh, we're going to Paris!!!!! *does a little jig* That is so perfect, going to Paris and Heer's special someone following her there!!!!! *cough cough* ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† How Romantic!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ OMG, 'He' was staring at her was he!?!?!? *wiggly eyebrows* Haha, Zahra dragged her away!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†
I like Heer's and Ravz in that interaction!!! You potrayed there friendship so well!!!! How Ravz noticed Heer being a little distant and lost *thumbs up*!!!!!! ๐Ÿ‘
๐Ÿ˜† I had the GOOD idea!!!!! I really liked how i always chirp in conversations and say what i think!!! ๐Ÿ˜† Like in the beginning with Ravz and Heer and now between Zahru and Shifu!!!! This is what i gather so far, Shifali is like the calm and collected, Ravz is the one Heer seems closest to, Zahra is the sensible one and i'm the baby!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜† I think i am probably the youngest in all you guys!!!!
Great update and i hope Heer meets 'HIM' soon again!!!!! I can't wait till the next chapter!!!
Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: shabo24

BOO YA!

^^So cool. ๐Ÿ˜† You really are!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

Anywhoooo.....cute update, with all the friends hanging around the lounge and all!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Specially loved Shifali in this update, she is so love - struck underneath all that practical look, there is one SMUSHBALL! ๐Ÿ˜† Aha, the friendship between all the girls is depicted amazingly Meera, and YAY for weekly updates! =] Awww thanks! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ I'm glad you like her character so far, and thanks! ๐Ÿ˜› I've tried to keep it completely normal! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ

--shabz



@Maddy: will wait! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
i read yor ff
it's awesomee
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
awesome update...i liek how all friends are close togetehr!!! Update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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*new reader*
amazing!! luv it
OMG so prem knows heer? - or they have met b4?
plz do continue!!
this is kinda like DDLJ - where simran is off with her friends to europe too!! lol and she finds her raj..(luv that movie!)
anywayz great update..can't wait to see if Prem is in the plane with them? ..or finds himself in Europe too!!
plz continue!
thanx
-Sadi*

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