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Originally posted by: zaibun

great update pb s in town and pignake wat a name goes well wiv preet

Originally posted by: Iqra238

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Hey Iqra!!!😛

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*phew* and I thought I was the only Ib person Here! As you can tell i am an Ib student..well pre-ib and a new reader! Pre-IB? 😆 I've never heard of that before..lol..love how all these IB ppl come online, (no we're not procrastinators rite?😕😆) Anyways, YAY!!! new reader! 😃 I just caught up with your ff and your doing any amazing job! love the first update .. even though it was confusing ..but it was so well written! And the whole act of Heer beinging water to her mom is so cute! She is so smart for her age at that time!! I know!!!😳 erhmm ur the first person to comment on that 😆 *psst..i don't think many other people understood the first two chapters😆..glad u did!! It was suppose to be confusing...i was going for that effect...Heer will have more of these confusing dreams lol..her day still isn't over yet..and its been 6 chapters now? lol..the story is SLOW.. thanks so much for putting up with it!!😳

i love Preet- Meher and Heer relationship!Me too! lol..the only thing I like about this thing..😆 It is just so cute! Especially that name of preet"Pignake😆😆"its very..unique!! Yay! so glad u like it, I thought ppl would just roll their eyes at me..erhmm *darn I can't see if you were😆!! Oh Meher thinks Prem is hot! Of course he is ! But I bet Heer finds him more attractive but won't admit! Yes Meher thinks Prem is..erhmm hot, and Heer, well..what can i say/?😉oh pb? So does that stand for "Prem bhai?"or somethin else?darn..i didn't make that clear now did i? ..yes it does..lol..unless u want it to be something else like erh,, pagal bhai or something😛 <ignore that lol too lazy to erase Now I know you are craving for criticism but to tell you the truth I love the way you write this it makes this ff so interesting and so unknown of what you will be writing about next! 😭No not u too!! u guyz r WAAAYYY to nice..gosh* critisize! But *shucks😳 thanks for the compliment!! So I will be waiting for your next update!Yay!!! thanks so much for commenting Iqra!! hope u'll continue to like this FF..!!!

~Love Iqra

"...The most annoying person you'll meet. You might wanna keep your distance from her." Preet added, with a grin that was waay to wide for even a normal Preet. Meher reached over the bench and smacked Preet on his shoulder. The 'PB' person laughed out loud, and Heer instantly just knew that he was 'the guy', the guy she already hated.

Another Pignake, that's just what I need in my life! Just Great! Thank you GOD!

None of your Business- Chapter 7

"I'm Prem, nice to meet you ." Prem replied after getting his laughter under control. Meher gave one last glare to Preet and then turned to Prem giving him the widest smile she could. He smiled back at her and then felt his eyes wandering towards a certain someone...Meher caught him in action and grinned. 'Erhmm..ohh!!! So he is looking at Heer eh? Cool!!!...this is going to be so sweet, get ready Heer, its my turn now!' Meher cleared her throat at which Prem instantly looked back at her, blushing a bit 'Oh ho...'

"This is..."

'No you idiot! Don't!!!! Please!!!!' Heer yelled in her head, and then let out a loud sigh at hearing the sound of the bell.

'Saved by the bell! How clich' Heer thought and quickly grabbed Meher's arm with her left hand and their stuff with the right, dragging Meher out of the classroom, not giving her a chance to even react.

***

After Heer reached Meher's locker, she let go of Meher's arm and looked at her shocked face. "Meh..." Heer tried to say

"Do you mind? Look at my arm!" Meher began to yell. "It's all red!" Meher yelled at which Heer replied mentally, 'oh yeah? And what about MY arm?' ...

"What has gotten in you today, you've NEVER acted this way! You're lucky that everybody was running out the classroom too, or ...do you even care about my image...Gosh I wonder what Prem must be thinking of us now, or Preet!!" 'Oh no!!! What would I do if the Pignake's started to hate me! Heer thought sarcastically while mentally gasping. And Image? What image...your an IB NERD! What image could you possibly have!

Meher glared at Heer waiting for her response at which Heer just yawned "You done?"

"Done? You're asking me if I'm done?"

"Yep. So are you?"

"Your impossible Heer!"

"Tell me something I don't know." Heer said while smiling, 'Oh gosh, that smile...there ya go, boosting about herself again...quick topic change!' Meher thought while grimacing.

"So...are you going to tell me what all that was about or are you going to make me guess." Meher said casually, while putting her binder in her locker and taking out her lunch.

"Nah...I think I'll let you guess." Heer replied, leaning back on the line of metal lockers. "By the way, this hall is sure u-g-l-y! Mine isn't much better though" Heer added while glancing at the light, chipping off yellow walls with the contrast to the bright red lockers.

"I know! Their seriously so cheap here aren't they?" Meher replied, starting to walk down the hall, making her way to Heer's locker. "So...What do you think of the new guy? He seems nice eh?" Meher asked while munching down on her sandwich.

'Nice. And damn hot too! His name is so adorably cute too...Prem'

"Heer!" Meher said a bit louder.

"Huh? Oh. Um. I don't like him." Heer replied casually and dropped her binder and her new History textbook on the ground to open her locker.

"What? Why? My gosh Heer, how many times have I told you to stop throwing the books down on the floor, could have asked me to hold them!" Meher yelled out, irritated.

"Chill! They're just books." Heer replied casually, this was a routine really; Heer would drop her books everyday to annoy Meher and Meher would say the same thing 'Could have asked me to hold them!' Heer rolled her eyes.

"And why do you always roll your eyes! It's so annoying!"

"I know..."

"Gosh!" Meher replied rolling her eyes as well. "Oh yeah! Why don't you like Prem? Did I miss something? Cause as far as I know, he doesn't even know your name yet."

Heer shrugged "I don't know, I just don't like him. It's a shortened lunch today isn't it?"

"Quit trying to change the topic. You know what I've noticed? You don't like any guy what so ever, nor Preet or anybody else."

"That's not true. I love Jappu...aww man I miss him. He's so excited to go to school, he already has a girlfriend! Their so cute!" Heer giggled at the thought, he could always make her smile. Jappu was her little 6 year old cousin, and he was her jaan. Gosh I love him to guts.

"You know what I mean Heer." Meher sighed. 'I know' Heer sighed as well. 'How can I tell you about how much I've been hurt by all the men in my life? How they have always made me and my mom cry tears of blood, how they always made us feel darn special in the begging, making us feel loved for once and then crushing all our hopes like every other man...There is not a chance that I'm going to let another one come into my life and hurt me or my mom again.

"I don't!" Heer replied angry.

"Heer why don't you ever tell me whats wrong with you, I know your hiding something from me." Meher said in an accusing tone.

"Quit being so paranoid Meher, I..er..have to go meet Ms. Millers about my bio extended essay. See you in next block." Heer yelled out the lie while almost running away from there.

***

As soon as she was out of Meher's sight, Heer let out a breath she didn't know she was holding in. There was no meeting of course, but she had to get away from there. I shouldn't have burst out at Meher like that, its not her fault. Heer walked out to the back of the school, and stepped out to the soccer field, relieved of the icy air that seemed to almost smack her across her face. She smiled, always loving the wind, and walked silently staying close to the fence and hugged herself. But why does she always ask me to tell her stuff about my life? I mean it's not that i don't trust her...or maybe it is, but I haven't even told my mom about my disgust for men and I tell her EVERYTHING.'

Ring Ring...

"Hello."

"How are you my tiny Teji?"

"Gayatri? I missed you so much!! Why didn't you call before, I had been waiting forever! Is everybody alright there? Prem? Kulraj and her kids? How is Lalit Bhaji? Oh I haven't been able to contact Preet yet. Why don't you just give me his address, I hate it when you play games with me." Teji ranted on.

"Chup! Calm down! You always over react! Everything is fine here, I was just really busy. By the way, why didn't you call me if you were so concerned?" Gayatri inquired.

"Japreet came here for the summer, and you know how tough it is. Gayatri, he is finally getting better; he actually eats now, I think if he keeps this up, his food pipe will be out in no time. Oh by the way, have you started your Gandhagiri there too? How's your reading club going?" Teji teased while quickly blurting out everything she had wanted to say for the last month to Gayatri. Even though her friend lived in Ontario, they managed to call each other every two weeks, this month was odd, Gayatri hadn't called her for such a long time!

"Ha...Ha!" Gayatri said in a monotone voice. "Oh I had to tell you something."

"Why am I not surprised? What is it?"

"You're going to be so happy! I finally convinced Prem to come there to stay. I even made sure that Preet, Prem and Heer go to the same school... I know, I know, Heer is still in school, and will never agree to marry Prem, that's why I sent him there."

"Really? Oh thank you baba ji! Finally you gave her some brains! Are you telling me that Preet and Heer went to the same school all around? You're good! I can't wait to meet them, I'm dying to see them!"

"Keep your mouth shut Teji! Don't you dare tell Heer that you know Preet or Prem. She is my daughter-in-law, and I just wanted to let you know that."

"So we're having trust issues here?" Teji teased.

"Absolutely, chal, your Lalit Bhaji is calling me I'll call you later, and remember Teji, don't say a WORD about this to Heer. I know her well now, and she'll avoid him for sure if she found out."

"I know Prem and Heer will fall in love the instant they meet. Oh Gayatri I'm so excited. But you leave now, bye!"

"Bye" Gayatri replied giggling.

***

"Ah, sorry! I'm so sorry! We were just..."

Heer looked up at the culprit in shock and found herself staring at him, mouth open. She stared at the white shirt that clung to his muscular body and his wet flattened hair. He changed, just to play soccer? "Ah that's fine.." Heer blinked her eyes to bring herself back to reality and looked around who he was playing with. Heer's eyes went wide in shock when she saw Preet running towards them grinning.

"PB!!! Wha?! Ohh...very well done, nice target! Gosh why didn't I see her first, I wanted to take the aim!" Preet complained

"Ha ha! Very funny Preet!" Heer replied bitterly and tried to get up but slipped. Prem put his hand forward to help Heer up but Heer refused and grabbed the wired fence instead, pulling herself up.

"Wanna play?" Preet teased.

"In your dreams." Heer replied and walked away.

"Nightmare..." Preet yelled out to the retreating figure of Heer "You mean in my nightmares!" and then he broke into a fit of laughter smacking Prem playfully.

Prem stared at Heer walking away, grinning, 'fiery there aren't we?'