FF: Jinxed IMP. Note on Page 18 =D - Page 7

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

salsa!!! =)

Ramba!!!

Sorry i took so long!!! *holding my ears and then handing over your fav cookies...... Mr. fuzzles, was it??* 😳😆No problems!! ohh and i looked up my cookies..its Mrs. Fields 😆 I was waaaay off there..wonder wat i was thinking..ohh Mrs. Frizzles..magic school bus?? 😕*sctraches head...i haven't seen that show forever! does it even come on anymore..hmm...anyways, thanks for commenting maddy!!! 😳 OHH...and how do U noe about my favorite cookie????😲 this is scary..i think i've only told Meeru..erhmm but then again I have a horrible memory, i'm surprised I even remember the names I do here. *pats self..improvement= good. 😃

Oh ho!!! Meher thinks Prem is hot does she !?!?!? I second that!!!! 😉😆 Our Premu is very very hot!!!! ☺️😉😆 Ok, love the code name you have for Preet!!! ROFL!!!!! It's so funny!!! 😆 Awww, Meet are always teasing Heer, poor her!!!! 😭😉😆ohh rhetorical question 😆 i was about to answer it lol..i know, i love the code name too!!! hahahh..i actually call a person pignake in real life too!...he just doesn't know about it😆

Ok, so you said you wanted some critism..... but it won't be very helpful!!!! 😆 I like you FF becuase it is so wierd and funny!!! 😕😆 There aren't FF's like this one out there!!! I love how it's so unpredictable!!! 😉😆u noe..when i read that first line i was like YES@!!! *jumping with joy..and then u ruined it! aw thanks bud! *rolls eyes and says that VERY sarcastically😆 its unpredictable??? lol..i guess it is. I write however my mood is...so unpredictable eh?😕erhmmm

Suppose i told you that you should reduce how crazy Meet are, then i would make them less funnny!!!! Or is i told you to tone down Heer's crazyness, then it would reduce the essence of Heer that you have uniquely created!!! You get where i am coming from..... so far Prem seems like the ONLY normal one!!!! 🤣

Sigh..i wonder where all this craziness ur mentioning comes from. 😆 hey, wait...u calling me wierd??? grrr**** but i guess, prems the only normal one *sigh..wait* runs to knock on wood...erhm lets hope he stays that way 😆

I could totally imagine something like Premeer having a romantic moment and they are just about to kiss, when suddenly the thought of pink elephants pops into Heer's head!!!!!! ROFL 🤣!!!!!!!!!! That's the kinda stuff i like about this FF!!! It's great comic relief!!!!

hahah...thats funny! pink elephants..watch me put that in there when they do...! 😆😆 i'm glad u think its funny. 😛

I wasn't much help was i !?!?!? 😳😆 I like it so far and i hope you update very soon!!! *hugs and cookies* hahah..u made me laugh 😃 so that's a good one..and no worried..i NOE critism is there in u somewhere..i'll get it to come out *here boy..here...i have a treat... COME OUT!!! 😆😆 thanks *gives bear hug back and snatches all the cookies..yumm...munch munch...tha-nk- you!!! and runs away..i'll update..whenever lol.

Originally posted by: sadizzle

hey! cute updateThanx so much for ur encouragement! i think that right now ur intro-ing the peeps

beginning of ff's are always slow..yes, and this FF seems to be just a tad bit slower than all the others but oh well..😛

don't worry..you'll do great!!😳thanks Sadi! ur a sweet heart!

right now ur just getting them started..next parts will become eventfull..Thats what u think...lol..but hopefully they will *sigh😊

plz do continue soonI will!!!

thanx!

no Thank U!!! lol... u just made a huge grin appear on my face..lol.! thanks u *hug! -blahblah

-Sadi* yay!!

Originally posted by: shanu333

Darn! I'm not first!
YES!!! erhmm...i mean darn😆
anyways... reserved :)

😲 u purposely updated when i wasnt online?! ...
erhmm..no!?!?!? 😕 darn..i'm sorry, I wanted to win!!!! and erhm..*giggles..i did.! yes!!*
anyways... i'll let u go this time😆... coz i loved the part 😃
*phew! thanks..i hadn't realized that u were holding on to me there..😆 thanks for letting go..i'm free!!!! ohh and u loved this part???😕 woah! i thought it was the ..wait...counting..6th boringst one. 😆 love my grammer there? i do!
🤣 Pignake?! 🤣🤣🤣
😳yes..pignake...imagine someone naming their kid that!!! 🤣 ohh mi future cousins should watch out lol.
awww... poor Heer... Preet seems to bug her a lot.. and Meher too 😆
yep..meet...are horribly mean😃
😲 She thinks Prem's a pignake too? awww... but how... I mean Prem is so 😍... how can she call him a Pignake?! 😲Pignake is a pignake... what can i say...lol

anyways... update soon... and I'm gonna be online 24x7 so I'm the first 😆another challenge??? hmm...joking, I won't be so sneaky this time..(even though i rock at it! )😆 Thank you so much for commenting Shavani😳..erhmm i have to think of a nickname here..too long of a word to type out..*what? don't look at me like that!...i'm...erhmm lazy! *gosh! 😆 anyways, c ya around!

Originally posted by: leothebest9

Thanx dear............for the PMNP!!!😳............and sorry for the delay too............I don't know why the pg where u updated was not opening in the morning when I triesagain no problem!! thanks for commenting!😃..............anyways.............I just luveeeeeeeeedddddddd this part too ..............aww thanks...erhmm where is ur update for ur FF eh???😡 *grumble...i've been waiting!!! 😆Awsomeeeeeeeee.............waiting for the next part............Thanks for such a lovely comment!! and will update after you do 😆...😊