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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: shanu333

Aviii when u updating?... hehe... i'm so used to being the first one now 😆... i even know u usually update at this time 😆

🤣 oh no! that doesn't creep me out at all 😆 joking lol...I kinda realized that everybody knows I'm gonna update soon and so arn't commenting much. So me got an ebul thought... i'm gonna make u guyz wait this time lol..i have soo much homework this week so that should keep me busy. lol 😉 me = ebul!!! yay!😃 lets see if u'll be first when i put up a surprise update 😆 c ya ltr!!! -blahblah
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
^^hehe...okie... that means i have to work hard to be the first again 😆

but it's okay... homework comes first =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sadizzle

hey new reader here!

Yay!!😃 Welcome Sadi!!!🤗
omg love the story..really cute 😳 thanks!!! glad u like it!
what is IB? never heard of it b4.Its a program that students take up like in grade 11? to get more of a challenge..it basically prepares you for uni. well thats what i'm told anyways..correct me if i'm wrong IB people..lol...there are TONS here.😆
Plz do continue soon!! Will do!!!
-Sadi*
If you have a pm list - plz add me!! Of course, it'll be my pleasure! Thank you so much for taking out the time to read this FF and commenting! -ur the best! -blahblah

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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
@shivani..*shakes head...omg! i see that we're a bit competitive here? 😆 no worries...i like that..me gonna try to make this update really irregular..and we'll see if ur first..no cheating ofcourse. *i could never do that *smirks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^^lol...tht's okay... no cheating of course 😆... yeah... and remember to PM me... if I get a bit late =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: shanu333

^^lol...tht's okay... no cheating of course 😆... yeah... and remember to PM me... if I get a bit late =)

of course...if u give me a chance😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
Well, it seems like not many people are interested in this thing...me too, its boring!..*sigh but thank you to the people that are commenting 😆 seriously, this is for u guyz...(let's see if Shivani is the first one to comment lol..this is so fun, I made SURE that she was offline though *sigh hope...nvm) lol anyways, here's another boring part.
Chapter 6: It's all HIS fault!

That was when I saw him. Following Meher's gaze, I finally saw what was causing me so much pain( through Meher of course) and found myself getting lost in the dark chocolate brown eyes looking at me, the amusement evident in them. Amazing how my whole body just went numb, no pain, no nothing...except for my pounding heart.

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I continued to stare into his eyes for a moment and then in a split of a second, looked away at Meher, trying desperately to distract myself from those amused yet piercing eyes. The pain from my arm came back again and I looked down at it to see four clearly visible nail marks, obviously, they would stay there for a while.

"Ah geez... Thanks Meher, I love you too," I said bitterly.

"Ah...um...sorry, but the new guy is damn hot nah?" she said dreamily.

I looked at her in disgust. "This is you speaking right? The person that is also head over heels over that stupid Pignake?" Pignake was a name I had come up for Preet, he was selfish like a pig, but sneaky and dangerous as a snake, especially when it came to him making other people fight, which he tended to enjoy very much. And not to mention dodge ball..ugg, I clinched at the thought. Plus, it sounds funny, P-I-G-N-A-K-E.

Meher elbowed me for the second time today, making me groan again, this was not my day! "Shut up, he'll hear!"

Preet cleared his throat, at which I quickly turned to the back to face him OH NOOO!!! Does he know our code name for him...darn! "So I see that Meher gave you a new tattoo,... you must have... enjoyed it." He managed to say without laughing his head off. I sighed with relief of our secret being kept...well, a secret, but then turned mad. I shifted in my chair again to face Meher again, throwing in a couple hundred deadly glances along the way, but the nerve! She just smiled at me! That's right, SMILED!

This just made me get even angrier and out of complete rage, I smacked her across the arm and gave her a bit of my mind, "Meher! Fudge* Look at my arm, it's completely red with four huge marks on it? You're such a loser seriously!" Preet laughed out loud at my comment, making smoke almost come out of my ears. Without even turning back, I replied, a furious "You just shut up NOW!"

"Gosh Heer, chill! It seems like you're possessed by some pooth booth or something." Meher said cheekily to which Preet added, "It's no ghost Meher..." and they both broke into a hysterical laughter.

I groaned inwardly and laid my head on the bench closing my eyes shut. How come THEY are allowed to laugh like crazy but when I was merely giggling Ms. Millers went all crazy on me. Stupid idiots! I swear the whole world is against me, isn't it? Ugg...no, it's ever since 'he' came in here...everything was fine before.

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Right then Heer heard someone high-fiving at the back while she kept her head down. She listened to an excited Preet asking some PB person how his first class was, and how they were going to have so much fun. After a while, a grinning Meher joined the conversation too, "Hey, I'm Meher..."

"...The most annoying person you'll meet. You might wanna keep your distance from her." Preet added, with a grin that was waay to wide for even a normal Preet. Meher reached over the bench and smacked Preet on his shoulder. The 'PB' person laughed out loud, and Heer instantly just knew that he was 'the guy', the guy she already hated.

Another Pignake, that's just what I need in my life! Just Great! Thank you GOD!

Ugg...you guyz, I seriously think you guyz are just trying to be nice when u guyz comment...I don't like this FF at all! please critisize? maybe that will help me improve?!? *hopefully? anyways, do comment good or bad...will be waiting...😆-blahblah

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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
*sigh* Guess what I'm going to do? read all of this sometime tomorrow and edit this spot! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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salsa!!! =)
Sorry i took so long!!! *holding my ears and then handing over your fav cookies...... Mr. fuzzles, was it??* 😳😆
Oh ho!!! Meher thinks Prem is hot does she !?!?!? I second that!!!! 😉😆 Our Premu is very very hot!!!! ☺️😉😆 Ok, love the code name you have for Preet!!! ROFL!!!!! It's so funny!!! 😆 Awww, Meet are always teasing Heer, poor her!!!! 😭😉😆
Ok, so you said you wanted some critism..... but it won't be very helpful!!!! 😆 I like you FF becuase it is so wierd and funny!!! 😕😆 There aren't FF's like this one out there!!! I love how it's so unpredictable!!! 😉😆
Suppose i told you that you should reduce how crazy Meet are, then i would make them less funnny!!!! Or is i told you to tone down Heer's crazyness, then it would reduce the essence of Heer that you have uniquely created!!! You get where i am coming from..... so far Prem seems like the ONLY normal one!!!! 🤣
I could totally imagine something like Premeer having a romantic moment and they are just about to kiss, when suddenly the thought of pink elephants pops into Heer's head!!!!!! ROFL 🤣!!!!!!!!!! That's the kinda stuff i like about this FF!!! It's great comic relief!!!!
I wasn't much help was i !?!?!? 😳😆 I like it so far and i hope you update very soon!!! *hugs and cookies*
Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
Noooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! please don't!!!!!! its horrible.....ugg seriously...if u call ur writing bad...then it's not even worth calling this writing..please meeru>>??? *puppy face..

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