PremHeer || Woh Miley The (a oneshot) - Page 2

Gosh that was sooooo sad.... but very well written!!! I wanna cry now😭

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Rawr. 😆 No comment.

Like I said, the ending part is just...spooky. And it was the only thing that really chilled me and gave me goosebumps. The rest of the story was just so poignant and sad...Not quite as bad as Yeh Vaada Raha, IMO, but then again I'm biased. 😉Aw, thank you. You really didn't like Yeh Vaada Raha, right? 😆 I gotta write something like that again. 😉😆

Love,

Bhav (:

P.S. WRITE A FLUFF THING!!! 😛Am working on the one I told you about that day!

Originally posted by: munam_13

Radz... now have you swore to write only tragedies???? this one was beautiful.. especially the last part.. it was really hear wrenching...the way she felt connection with Prem was beautifully potrayed...keep it up...

Originally posted by: shabo24

Damn woman. You could get a job writing tragedy because when you write, its stark, blunt and just shakes your core. That was painfully heartbreaking, my stomach was in knots, just the way you showed her waiting, desperately with ever step, every movement! That was just shuddering material, and then on course, there was Prem, how inside he was just so SURE!! omgg you write amazingly di! Loved it and for SURE write more.... =] Shabzie, you are making me blush. 😳 So sweet your words. I write tragedy well *shakes head* You write it better! But thanks you so much! And, I will, but not yet. Fluff first. 😉😆

That maang thing killed it. What an end! *standing ovation* 😳 Thank you so much!

--shabz

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I'm going to stay true this time to what I want to really say....

I'm totally speechless....no adjectives could describe how I feel right now Radz, that was just.....blah....superfantastic!!!! 😳 I don't want to smile, cus that was like soooo emotional, but I can't help it.... Ah thank you! 😳 So sweet. You write the sweetest things you know that?

HOW can you write so amazingly well? 😕 It's not fair! *pouts* Hey, you write just as well, if not better! 😆 Do you even read your own stuff? It's brilliant!

I LOVED IT!!! 😃 I LOVE YOU! 😆

Meera! 😳

P.S. I agree wtih Bhav....fluff please? Coming up, promise!

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

So I saw this earlier today and I was going to reserve but then I didn't cuz well, I'm a happy person and I don't like sad stories😆 But then Meera said how good it was and I kept going through pages to read something and this one shot was just staring at me and I was like shoot I wanna read it!😆 You are too cute Ravzie. I'm glad you read it though. It would not seem complete without hearing what you think. And you don't like sad stories my foot! Have you read some of the chapters of Dosti? 😆

Omg Radz that was...heart breaking. The way you described it and everything. It made me want to cry. Loved the way you wrote it and everything. And the ending with the maang part, that was just...wow. Honestly Radz, I loved it! Aw thank you so much! And this is why I love reading your comments. It just boosts my ego! (Which Bhav would tell you, is not a good thing. But don't listen to her. 😉😆)

Love,

Radz