FF: Hostage- PG 45- Part 19 (11/22/09) NEW!!! - Page 28

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Posted: 15 years ago
fantastic update...made my day!😊
can't wait to read more....
plz update soon............
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
continue asap
thaanks for the pm
pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago

Not a problem palchin. Thanx for this update. I was curious to know where prem would take her. Good that you decided to update soon.

So this was prem's favourite place and there they fed each other. Soooooo sweet. What prem and heer did for the old lady and her grandson was truly good.

They both feel the same for each other but still cant tell the other. I hope now understand that why heer reacted in the way she did. I hope this brings them together. Really an awesome update.

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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwww
awesome update dear! loved all the premeer scenes.....that was a really pleasant surprise!
waitinggggggggggggg eagerly for the next part.....update soooooooooon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
oooooooooooooh god!!!!!!! hey tel us soooooooooooooooooooooooon what he realized?????????????????????? plsssssssssssssssssss cant wait to read the next part 😃 very well done...thankssssss 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update. I really liked the ending a lot. could you plz add me to pm list? thanks for the fantabulous update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update n a long one too plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanku for a surprise update yaar😃 ur update as usual was eeeexxxceeellleeeenttt dear palchin 👏 our premeer part was marvalloues i just can't express my feeling yaar but in the last it was kind a sad as heer cried but i am sure prem would fine a way to make her happy😃 and something would happen that both can know their feelings 😃 well take care and plz plz plz update soon bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update!!
Glad preet's back in action!
Prem & Heer scenes were really cute
btw - what happened to Prem's ma? Gaya3?
Thanx for updating!! & the PM!
Do continue soon! - I wonder where Prem brought Heer...?
-Sadia
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: iditri

wow...nice update....very eger to knw wat happens next.....:)

Thank you so much for taking the time to read. I am happy to know that you enjoyed reading it. Will post the next part soon. Thanks!

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey it was long wait to read ur next update bt it was worth it........... amazing update thanks for adding me to ur pm list

Thanks for commenting. I will pm when I put up the next update. I know that I take a long time to update. But I will post a long part to fill that up. Story's going to move on fast so stay tuned. And you are welcome for bing added to my pm list.

Originally posted by: Premeer_chahat

Hey awesome update!!! Hope prem tells heer how he feels soon!!! Thnxs for the pm

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. I will try my best to show something good and something bad. But at the end, it's going to be Premeer as one. Take Care and thanks!

Originally posted by: meeshi.

hiiiiiiiiiiii hey

awesome update thank you!!!
i think now prem will tell heer about his love well you will find out in next update!
thanx for the pm your welcome
update soon Will do so!!!!
Palchin

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

hiiiiiiii Palchin! Hi Nikita

awesome update! Thank you sooooo much
loved the prem-preet scene in the beginning....it was written very well....and even the premeer scene towards the end! Thanks a lot for all the compliments. I am happy to know you liked it!
wonder where prem took her.... That can be answered in the next update!
waiting for the next part.....update soon! Will update soon for sure.
and thanks for the pm! You are always welcome!
Nikhita Palchin

Originally posted by: bd670816

wow...nice update. Thanks
loved prem-preet scene in the beginning. I am happy to know you liked it
update soon! Will update soon

Palchin

Originally posted by: yasu09

Hey Palchin..............Hey!!!!
awesomeeeeeeeee update................Thanks you sooooo much!
can't wait to see premeer confess their feelings...........Me either. I will post next part soon
thanx 4 da pm ...............your welcome
can't wait 4 da next part.............will post soon
so plz update soonnnnnnn..................will try by tonight!

Palchin

Originally posted by: mithalio

excellent . THANK YOU!!!

Mithiya Palchin

Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat

superb
*speechless* Wow thanks you soooooo much!!
loved prem heer and Preet part Me too. I loved writing that part!
continue asap will continue soon
thanks for th epm your welcome
pm me for sure

Palchin

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314

omg........prem's going to propose to her????? or is it just going to be a thank u from him You just have to wait and read! But trust me, you will love everything that happenes. Even the bad things that happen!.............really waiting for u to update Will update soon........thanks for the pm Your welcome...........

Originally posted by: --Sarah--

Hey Palchin...that was an awesome update..loved it 👏 👏 👏 THANK YOU!!!!!!
beautifully written... Thanks you sooo much!
Loved Prem and Preet bonding and their conversation I am happy you liked it! Had fun writing it myself.
umm...where did he took her?.. That's in part 17...
can't wait for the next update

I will try to update!
Palchin

Originally posted by: Mus@

👏👏such a excellent update yaar mindblowing too good 👏👏

Thank you sooooooo much for the compliments. I am happy to know you enjoyed!!!!
⭐️love the bro's part preet how sweetly he was telling about heer to prem just great and the phone part where prem was talking to maya & arjun was also too good
Wow I am soo happy. I knew that you guys would like their bonding. It reminds me of the old kis desh times with prem and preet.
now just waiting ur next update deperatlely and also for the place where prem has taken heer to as what is the place that prem think that heer would not like update soon dear and thanks alot for pm byr
Everything you want to know is in part 17. Hope you read it and comment on how it was. Thanks once again for taking the time to read.
take care😃 You TOO!!!
Palchin

Originally posted by: sugi77



hi palchin! thnk uuuuu soo much for the pm...😃 You are always welcome!!!..lovedd both parts.Thank you!..prem preet ash scene is excellent.Thanks once again! Aren't they just too sweet?..enjoyed it soo much. Happy to know you enjoyed! .cnt wait to read wht will happen next...plzzzzzzzzzz continue asap...Will try to post soon!!!

Palchin

Originally posted by: cutii

finallyyyy i got to read dis 😃 thank u soooooooooo much..No thank YOU soooo much for reading and commenting!!!! I am happy that you enjoyed reading!!. dis is really cooool and d update is ssoooooooooo long... thanks one again... 👏

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

Awesome, too good, minblowing update. I loved it. what a long update. Waiting eagerly for premeer romantic scenes now. Thank you soooooo much for all the encouraging comments! I will surely make the next part full of major twists! Just stayed tuned.

the prem and preet conversation was soo good. I truly enjoyed reading it. I am sure preet would love his bhabhi. Prem and Preet will always be admired by all of us. And of course Preet would love his bhabhi. I am happy you liked the way I described it!

Arjun is very funny and maya throwing pillows at him was so hilarious🤣. I know I wish they were this funny in the show!

Maya do teen aur maaro.There will be more puches that Arjun gets from Maya in the future!
Maya knows her brother so well, knowing fully well that he wouldn't have disclosed his feelings to heer yet. I love this character, I hope she with preet makes biggggg plans to get heer more closer to prem. She WILL make big plans in the future! Preet will also help. Now the story will move in a quicker pace. There are many twists and turns coming up so stay tuned!

Prem giving her treat was cute. Vaise now where has he got her, that heer is getting scared. Do clear the confusion by updating soon😉Your confusion must be cleared by now after reading part 17. Will post part 18 soon so do read it!

Loved it, thanx for pm. Your Welcome and Love you too!

Sia

Palchin

Originally posted by: Orion

gr8 update!!!👏Thanks!!!

can't wait to read the next part! Will post soon!!
thnx for the pm! Your welcome
Palchin

Originally posted by: angel82

oh wow palchin, that was such a lovely lovely lovely update....Thank You soooo much!!

loved the prem-preet moments in the hospital...then the preet-heer scenes, all the prem - heer scenes .....Maya and arjun are such sweeties here....I knew that you all would like it! I guess I was successful!!
hmm wonder where prem has taken heer to .....
plz do update sooooooooonnn Will do so soon!!
cant wait to read ahead....
Palchin

Originally posted by: zaibun

great update after a long w8 but totally worth it keep up the gud wrk Thank you so much!! I am happy that you enjoyed!!

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

very nice Thank you!!

update soon
Kamal
Palchin

Originally posted by: Happy_pretty

awsome update soon THANK YOU!!!

Palchin

Originally posted by: missindia26

Hiya Palchin 🤗Hello!!!!!

Thnx 4 PM 😃You are always welcome!
Ana aww Preet will be Heer's chamcha - love it! 😛Happy to know you loved it!
Another fantastic part 👏THANK YOU!!!
Haha perfect how Preet has already chosen Heer Happy to know you liked it!
Awww Preet is such a cutie pie 😛Like always, Preet will always be Preet!
Hehe I love Maya and Arjun! 😃Me too!!
Their little pillow fight was so cute! 😛Pillow fights are always fun.
And I agree with them..I want a full Premeer love confession 😍Me too. Why don't they just tell each other??😳
Yoiu're right. Heer is too beautiful to describe but you did pretty well She is Undescribably beautiful!!
I could totally imagine her beautiful suit 😃
Aww what a happy family night 😛Yep. Happy happy happy cute sweet happy!
I love how Prem's changed and now always refers to heer as "my wife" Yeah now the only ting left is him telling her how he feels!
And awww what a cute surprise 😍Wasn't it cute?
Cant wait to read on! 😉I am so happy that you liked it so much!
Love TJ 🤗Love Palchin

A BIG HUG TO YOU ALL FOR THE WONDERFUL COMMENTS! THANK YOU SO MUCH!
PALCHIN

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