||Meera's Memos|| New OS Pg. 66 (10/17) - Page 3

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

OK, so I read Dard! 😳 Thankoo!!!! *hugs*

Man! *Slaps herself* How the heck did I forget to comment on this one-shot?😡Stop slapping yourself! 😔 Me no like that!

OMG...Meera, it was perfect!! This way was short and sweet, and your take on the whole scene was...dreamy! Just like the title of your shop!👏 Awww thanks Shifu, you really think so? I just wasn't impressed with it as much as I usually am!😳😳

The pain in Prem...the way he saw Heer slipping away from him..*Kisses Meera on the cheek*...AWSOME!👏👏 *blushes* I can't believe the compliments seriously Shifu! It means so much to me!😳

It felt as if I was watching everything first hand...like I was actually there, hidden in the room somewhere, when everything was happening!👏 Awww thanks!😳😳😳

The way, he retorts back to Heer, not being able to see her cry...and then answering her unanswered questions...that was sooo THE Premeer. really? That's what I feel, their eyes are enough to speak what they're hesitating to say!😳😳😳

And here, he even said, maybe she was deliberately trying to entice him...and the remark on 'Lost in the sands of Rajasthan'....👏 The Shiv Mandir...This is THE Premeer I want to see. The way Heer sat there crying, and Prem turns around and goes to her, feeling her pain..and then telling her, how much seeing her cry made him sad...that was just...AW! Really? You liked that, I had a moment of good metaphorism!😆 And awww thanks!😃

Awsome Meera!👏 I seriously think you are marvelous at Premeer's passionate scenes...and this time, you even proved it.👏 You are SUCH a sweetheart Shifu! 😳😳 I don't even have enough words to say thank you a billion times!😳😳😳

~Shifu