||Khudaya Khair|| Last Part Pg. 5 (4/7)

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Yes it's a new one shot, but it's going to be basically a three part shot thing! 😆 Does that make any sense to anyone? Anyways, Shifu wanted a song fic type short story on this song, and me being a sweet person, (not modest at all am I?) wrote it for her! 😃 So Shifali, this is all dedicated to you, I just hope you like it...

It's very rushed, but that's because I've got nearly 10 other things I've got to work on, and so I hope you all will forgive me! 😃

Enjoy!

Chapters

Pt.1 Pg. 1

Pt. 2 Pg.3

Pt 3 Pg. 5


"Di, I can't do this without you!" Meher cries into the cell phone she was balancing between her shoulder and cheek. "You haven't even met Preet yet. Aap jaldi aajao na?"


"Meher, I wish I could come," Heer replies in the phone. "Mujhe bhi to dekhna hain, ke meri choti behen ka dil kisne churaiya hain,"


Meher giggles. "I think you'll love Preet. He's just such a sweetheart di. I just hope ma aur bauji ko bhi woh pasand aaye,"


"Agar meri pyaari behen ne usse pasand kiya hain," Heer starts. "Then everyone HAS to love him,"


Meher smiles at her reflection in the mirror trying to re adjust her dupatta. "You always make me happy,"


"I'm glad. Ab chal, mujhe jaana hain, I'll try to be there as soon as I can. Love you," Heer hangs up her phone.


Meher slides her phone shut and sighs. "Kaash didi yahaan aa sakhti Preet ko dekhne," Meher starts putting on her green earrings to match her Salwar suit as she thinks back to when she and Preet first met. It was her first day of college, and she was walking all happily to class with her friends, but then she saw a couple boys standing on the side staring at her and her friends. She stopped in her tracks and turned to face them with what she hoped was a glare. All the boys immediately stopped smiling and started looking in different directions. All except the one in the middle, who pushed his hair back with his hand, still eyes locked on Meher's.


"Tumhe koi problem hain?" Meher asks.


The boy shrugs. "Not really, kyun? Aapko hain?"


Meher nods, and re-adjusts the books in her hand. "I don't think you and your loafer friends should be staring at girls like that. Ghar mein ma behen nahin hain kya?"


"Hain, ek bada bhai bhi hain," He answers casually.


"Kaisi baatein kar raha hain?" One of Meher's friends whispers to her.


Meher shakes her head and turns around with her friends ready to walk away.


"Kahan ja rahi ho?" He asks. "Won't you ask why we were staring?"


Meher turns around. "Why were you staring?"


He gets up and walks towards her, leaving barely any space between them. "I was telling my friends, ke agar meri shaadi hogi'to tumse hi hogi,"


Meher's eyes widen hearing him proclaim something like that, and then her heart nearly stops, seeing his lopsided grin.


After a few more meetings with him during their classes, Meher realized that this boy, also known as Preet Juneja, was just doing what his friends bet him to do. But he didn't know that day, that what he said, would ultimately come true.


Hearing the doorbell took Meher out of her memories; she quickly put her bindi on and rushed out of the door. Standing at the top of the staircase, she saw her prince charming come into her house, followed by his sister and parents. Teji, her mom, came up to the stairs, and brought her down into the main room.


"Namaste," Lalit Juneja smiles as he folds his hand in front of Balwant and Teji. His wife, Gayatri mimics his action and they all sit down, leaving Preet and Meher sharing glances at each other. Both of them could feel the tension mounting as they hoped both their parents would approve of one another's family.


"So it seems that are two children want to be together," Lalit says.


Balwant nods and smiles at his daughter. "Every wish of my daughters', I always try to fulfill."


Gayatri smiles. "Aur yeh humari khush kismati hain ke Meher jaisi ladki humare ghar mein bahu ban kar aaye,"


Meher starts blushing hearing her future mother in law say such nice things about her. Preet looks at her and as their eyes make contact he winks quickly at her.


"Meher beta, why don't you show Preet and Kulraj the house?" Balwant suggests.


Meher immediately jumps up and Preet and Kulraj follow her through kitchen.


"Meher, ek minute," Kulraj calls. "Mujhe aapni bhai ki pasand dekhne to do," Meher blushes as Kulraj puts her finger under her chin and tilts it from one side to the other. "Bahot aachi pasand hain,"


Preet grins. "Thanks di,"


"But Preet, yeh sharmati bahot hain," Kulraj laughs.


"Sirf aapke samne di," Preet grins as he puts his hands on Meher's shoulders. "You should see her in college. She's like a firecracker."


"Preet!" Meher turns around and glares at her. "You really need to learn what to say and when,"


"Don't worry Meher." Kulraj laughs. "When you enter the house, you'll be able to set him straight. Oh and I can tell that you two might want some time alone, so main wapas chalti hoon,"


"Di," Preet starts.


"You don't have to Kulraj didi," Meher says as well, but Kulraj was already outside with the adults.


"So'" Preet smiles.


"You know something Preet," Meher puts her hand on her hips. "Humari shaadi tab tak paki nahin hogi, jab tak di tumhe dekh na le,"


"Oh? Is that so?" Preet smiles. "Then you'll have to wait from my Prem bhaiyya to see you as well,"


Gradually after awhile, the parents called them all back to the main room.


"Bacho, hum sab ko yehi lagta hain'yeh rishta hona hi chaiye," Lalit says as Balwant looks on happily.


Preet and Meher both share a significant glance and smile at each other.


A few days later


Preet and Meher call each other and step up times for each other siblings to meet each other, and so they all decided to meet at a coffee shop. When they get to the coffee shop, Meher sticks Heer in front of her and hides behind a table, but unknown to them, Preet decided the same thing with Prem.


Prem couldn't believe his eyes once he saw the angel that was walking towards him.


mano na mano tum pari hai
woh pari ki kahaaniyan sunati hai


Heer wasn't sure if she should be SO impressed with her little sister's fianc.


zara sa saawra hain woh

zara sa baawra hain woh

woh surme ki tarah meri
aankhon mein hi rehta hai


"Hi," Prem puts out his hand.


"You're Pre'?" Heer asks.


Prem nods. "And you're Meh'" Heer nods before Prem can even finish his question.


Yup, that was the first bit of the SS, the next part will be sometime in the evening, even though it's all done!😛 😳 Hope you all like it! 😃


Love you all loads,


Meera😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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its awesomeeeeeeeee too good waitingggggggg for next asap.
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nice ,sound very
exciteing please do continue
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Oh ho!!!!
Heer and Meher's convo was so natural!!! Just the way sisters talk!!! *thumbs up*
Meet are so cute!!!! Preet is such a flirt!!!! lol
Awwww they think they are Preet and Meher when they are actually the brother and sister!!!!
This is going to be sooo interesting!!!!!! I can't wait till the next part!!!!!
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oh ho...loving the story! YAY Meet! dude update like right now i wanna know what happens!!! 😃 yaar this sounds interesting...heer felll... didnt she? hehe preet is soo cute!
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Thanks everyone! 😛 The second part will be there tonight! 😛
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I found it! Hopefully I'll remember to unreserve😆
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^^Even if you don't it's okay...I'll remind you! 😛 I have to re-vamp the whole thing! 😆
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Sorry Sweta, I ran into some difficulties, I won't be able to post it till either late tonight or sometime tomorrow! 😳
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Wow Meera.. this was a really sweet part.. I loved the concept a lot... so u r plannning a little bit of comedy of errors right??? it will be fun to read😃.... Loved the Meet flashback very much... post soon cant just wait to read😃

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