||Meera's Memos|| New OS Pg. 66 (10/17) - Page 2

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Hey,

WOW!!!! That was great!!!! I love how you didn't have to use any physical actions to convey the love they both felt for each other in the end.... if you catch my drift (Not trying to make it seem like i'm pointing at other one-shots, because i'm not!!! I loved ALL of them the way the are, just think your approach was different and definately successful 👏)!!!! Wow Maddy, thank you sooo much! 😃 I just felt Premeer always convey their emotions through their eyes more than their words or their gestures!😛😃 I did catch your point, it makes sense!😳😳 Thanks so much!😃

The title is so appropriate for them. Dard, pain, anguish (i think you get my point 😆😆😆). It was perfect how Heer simply had to let a few tears escape so that Prem realized what was going on!!! It's amazing how they can convey everything through there eyes.... *sigh* Did i mention how i love it when Prem is angry and to a certain extent possessive of Heer? It so..... sexy!!! 😉😳😆 Really? You think so? I couldn't think of a more exciting title, so I felt this would work!😳😳😳 Ahhh yes...I just can't believe that THE Prem can see HIS Heer crying like that!😆 Awwww thank you, I know EXACTLY what you mean!😆

Loved how you described what Prem was thinking. He couldn't even bring himself to say something like physical needs or um..... cravings!!! *totally blushing and grinning here*!!!! I wonder how they brought themselves (especially Aditi) to say these lines when they were shooting!!! God i think i would have a very hard time controlling my self from bursting out laughing or blushing like crazy!!! Awww yeah, I just couldn't imagine them saying it, it was crazy!😆😆😆

And Thank You for not including a slap, becuase personally i felt we could have done without one in the epi!! But it was still a fantastic episode all together!!! Awwww! A premer hug in the end!! 😳 It's always khali khali without one right?? You're welcome, because I just can't see him slapping her, it hurt so much when he did it the first time!😳😳😳 As for the hug, I agree completely!😃😳

That was another great one by you!!! 👏👏👏 Thank you so much!😃😳

Hope you keep writing and waiting till you update Pyaar Ki Daasan!!! Will update it soon!😃

Originally posted by: shabo24

Yeaa Meera, I'm so glad you put this together, going to be so much easier for all of us! You're very welcome!😆😆

omgg....Dard. What an apt title. It honestly sent shivers down my spine, I love all your titles, somehow they always play a huge part in the story and this was no exception! Awww really? I couldn't think of a good enough title for this😳😆😆 But I'm glad you think it worked!😃😳

I agree with you, while this scene was just WOW, it was just something lacking, couldn't put my finger on it! But you wrote it so well, with all the emotions playing right, THE Prem would have never been able to live if Heer was crying and all... Thanks...I'm not sure if I did even fix the thing lacking...but I just wanted my own version of it!😳😳😳 And you're SO right! THE Prem wouldn't be able to stand it if HIS Heer was crying!

Outstanding Meeru!! Thank you! 😃

--shabz

Originally posted by: muqualp

holy mackeral! omg great job meeruu! love loved loved it! ur writing style is soo great...its like u can actually feel it! great job yaa!

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
that was really goood
awesum
loved it

Originally posted by: zaibun

i think dis was very gud but i actually like bt s part i think they shuld hv mixed da two ideas den it wuld hv been betta

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

this was soo good, yaar. loved it really did👏.

awsome scene!!!loved it!!

~nikki😳

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Reserved =)

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Heya Meeru! This is really a wonderful idea, putting all one-shots and fics in one place...I'm thinking I might do that too, what with all the one-shots I have floating around here somewhere...Thanks, I saw everyone else do it, so I figured it'd be the best thing!😆 and yes, put all yours together! 😃 That'll be a thread getting bookmarked!😉😆

Anyway, *SQUEAL* I have to say I loved both versions (yours and the original one) in different ways. I loved yours because it pretty much got straight to the point, there was no beating around the bush and stuff. I liked the original one because Heer was fantastic. I like yours more because that's the only reason I like the original one. 😆 There was too much hugging there. At least here we have a little more dialogue! Thanks Bhav!😳 There was nothing wrong with the BT one, because it had everything we needed, I just got upset with the slap, and wanted to see if it could in fact happen without the slap😳 But thanks!😆😆😆

Shall keep waiting for your next fic! Thankoo!!!😃

Love, Love you too!😳

Bhav :D

Originally posted by: kimmu

... found it! For some reason, this really confuzzled me. I thought it was the gallery for the fics and you had it posted somewhere else, so I was looking everywhere. 🤣AWwwww sorry Kimz!😆😆😆

Anyway...

AHH THAT WAS AWESOME!! I'm so glad there wasn't a slap incorporated in it, rather Heer used her tears against Prem. I loved how you explained there feelings. It was just amazing Meera! I really didn't like the slap. it was one of the main things that made me mad, I felt that the connection between Premeer was so much more emotional!😳😳😳 thanks Kimz!😳😃

See, i told you it would turn out awesome! My favorite part was the last, where they were able to understand eachother. They didn't need words. Thats's premeer's essence. *sigh* I have no words. Really, awesome job! Thank you so much!😃😳 I'm really glad you liked it!😳😳😳

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

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