Pyaar Ki Yeh Dastaan: Chap 36-Page 144 (11/05)

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Hey guys. I am Afreen. I am starting a new FF on premeer. This is my first time writing something big like this for a big audience.....so please bear with me. This FF will be about premeer and their journey of love. Please comment and criticize me so I can improve my FF. thanks! 😊

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Character Sketch


The Juneja's:

Lalit Juneja: One of the Canada's richest business man, yet a very humble and simple man at heart. He moved to Canada 30 years ago with his wife, Gayatri. He loves his wife and children a lot.

 


Gayatri Juneja: she is the wife of lalit and mother of Kulraj, Prem, Preet, and Meher. She is very traditional woman and has given her children all the Indian traditions even though they were brought up in Canada. Lalit and Gayatri fell in love and got married.

Kulraj Kapoor (Former Juneja): she is the oldest daughter of lalit and gayatri. She is married to kiran and has 2 kids. She is a very supportive and understanding person even though she can be a like a little child sometimes.

Kiran Kapoor: he is a kind-hearted and loving guy. He used to work in one of the companies of the Juneja Industries. Kulraj and him fell in love and when lalit and gayatri found out, they got them married because kiran was a nice guy and was perfect for kulraj. Currently, he is the CEO of one of the companies.

 

Prem Juneja: he is the main lead of the story. He is a man about whom every girl dreams about. He is a shy, kind-hearted and handsome guy, for who every girl would die for, but prem's life lies is business. His mother wants him to get married, but he thinks that he will not have time for his better half because he is always busy in his work.



Preet Juneja: he is the younger brother of prem, a naughty and spoilt guy. He is similar to preet in the serial. He is pampered a lot by prem who always saves him from his dad. He is in college right now. He loves prem a lot and will do anything for him.


Meher Juneja: the baby of the juneja family, she is a young, bubbly and fun-loving girl who enjoys life whole heartedly. She is in high school right now. Preet and her play a lot of tricks on people together and tease them a lot. She loves her family a lot.


Viskas Kapoor: he is the oldest child of kulraj. He is 4 years old. He is a naughty fellow just like his preet mamu.


Tannu Kapoor: she is kulraj's 2 year old daughter, who is nice and cute little girl.


The Maan's:




Balraaj Maan: he is a retired army general, who lost his two legs in a war. He came back home and in a few days, his wife died. He took care of Ashleesha, his only daughter, since she was 3. He has opened the SukhVilas Ashram in order to help orphaned kids.


Ashleesha Maan: she is balraaj's daughter. She is college. She is similar to ash in the serial who is modern girl but still believes and knows the values of Indian traditions. She is been best friends with heer since she was 4, they are more like sisters. She helps her dad with the ashram.


Heer Maan: the female lead of the story, she is a shy, innocent and traditional Indian girl. She lost her parents in a car accident when she was 6 and was bought to the ashram by balraaj. She was the first kid he bought to the ashram. He took her as her own daughter and adopted her. She is in her final year of college and helps balraaj in running the ashram too. She loves balraaj, ash, and all the kids in the orphanage a lot and considers them her family.



PM list.

    1. blackdaughter
    2. sadizzle
    3. -Pooji-
    4. sweetshab
    5. purplestar22
    6. firza
    7. zainab.A
    8. PremleoManav
    9. ayushma30
    10. sweet_gurl93
    11. Crosby
    12. PremHeer_Chahat
    13. shininggal2008
    14. eternalbeauty
    15. NAKSHFANATIC
    16. Sunehari*Rose
    17. resham12345
    18. aspatel2
    19. Star-Crazy
    20. mariyam91
    21. Nazneen006
    22. sanju_veni
    23. happybrar
    24. shirlys
    25. buttercup123
    26. TerrificTina09
    27. yasu09
    28. reenasv
    29. MissSweetyPie
    30. sweetanu2314
    31. sknra
    32. Sweet_Kandy
    33. prempadmasujal
    34. Additi...
    35. Heerbeauty
    36. Prem4everRamsha
    37. -Sky-
    38. mish1996
    39. rit435
    40. harshaitixoxo
    41. Kamal_23
    42. meeshi.
    43. premeeristry
    44. xoHarshaxo
    45. hottieaminah13
    46. Orion
    47. reshamlovely


CHAPTER INDEX


  • Chapter 1 - Page 2
  • Chapter 2 - Page 4
  • Chapter 3 - Page 7
  • Chapter 4 - Page 10
  • Chapter 5 - Page 13
  • Chapter 6 - Page 16
  • Chapter 7 - Page 19
  • Chapter 8 - Page 22
  • Chapter 9 - Page 26
  • Chapter 10 - Page 29
  • Chapter 11 - Page 33
  • Chapter 12-Page 36
  • Chapter 13 - Page 40
  • Chapter 14 - Page 43
  • Chapter 15 - Page 45
  • Chapter 16 - Page 50
  • Chapter 17 - Page 55
  • Chapter 18 - Page 58
  • Chapter 19 - Page 61
  • Chapter 20 - Page 64
  • Chapter 21 - Page 68
  • Chapter 22 - Page 70
  • Chapter 23 - Page 73
  • Chapter 24 - Page 76
  • Chapter 25 - Page 80
  • Chapter 26 - Page 84
  • Chapter 27 - Page 89
  • Chapter 28 - Page 93
  • Chapter 29 - Page 101
  • Chapter 30 - Page 109
  • Chapter 31 - Page 116
  • Chapter 32 - Page 122
  • Chapter 33 - Page 126
  • Chapter 34 - Page 132
  • Chapter 35 - Page 138
  • Chapter 36 - Page 144
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blackdaughter thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very interesting.......
Like the character sketch so far!!! Glad you kept Harman and Veera out of the picture!!! Veera is a pain in th as* and Harman is Maya's puppet!!!
Are there any 'villians' in this tory, or is it more pyaar mein obsticales like family and relationship type of story????
Well whatever it is, i'm eager to read this story, because i love Premmer!!! Like how you have made Ash positive in this story... don't feel they do proper justice to her in the serial sometimes... *shrug*
Hope you start this FF soon, you have my best wishes and if you make a PM list, add me!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww great characters outline
omg preet and meher are bro and sis??!?! - ah..ok..lol
so sad to heer about Balraj..really tough life.
btw are Balraj & Lalit friends? do they even know each other??
so can't wait to read the next update
plz plz plz do continue!!
Good Luck on ur very first FF, Im going to start one too..for the first time too!! Soon!!
If you have a PM list plz add me.
Much Love
-Sadi*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very interesting sounds relly gud ill suppport u
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Very interesting.......

Like the character sketch so far!!! Glad you kept Harman and Veera out of the picture!!! Veera is a pain in th as* and Harman is Maya's puppet!!!
Are there any 'villians' in this tory, or is it more pyaar mein obsticales like family and relationship type of story????
Well whatever it is, i'm eager to read this story, because i love Premmer!!! Like how you have made Ash positive in this story... don't feel they do proper justice to her in the serial sometimes... *shrug*
Hope you start this FF soon, you have my best wishes and if you make a PM list, add me!!!



thanks for reading dear and I am happy you liked it. it is a pyaar and relationship kind of story. no there are no villains. thanks for your best wishes...really means a lot and I will add you to the PM list.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadizzle

aww great characters outline

omg preet and meher are bro and sis??!?! - ah..ok..lol
so sad to heer about Balraj..really tough life.
btw are Balraj & Lalit friends? do they even know each other??
so can't wait to read the next update
plz plz plz do continue!!
Good Luck on ur very first FF, Im going to start one too..for the first time too!! Soon!!
If you have a PM list plz add me.
Much Love
-Sadi*



thank you...no balraj and lait dont know each other as of yet. I wll add you to the PM list. the update will be posted in a few min. good luck on ur 1st FF.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for reading....will post the update in a few min.
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thank you for reading....the update will be posted in a few min.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetshab

nice FF..
do continue soon




thanks....I will update the next part soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaibun

very interesting sounds relly gud ill suppport u



thanks...really means a lot. I appreacite ur support a lot. 😊

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