Pyaar Ki Yeh Dastaan: Chap 36-Page 144 (11/05) - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys. Thank you so much for the comments and the support...really means a lot. And to those silent readers who took time and read the FF...thanks for reading. Here is the first chapter and a little background to the story. I am starting a PM list guys...so plz let me know if u want me to add you. Hope u have fun reading!

Background

Lalit and Gayatri want prem to get married and settle down in life, but prem always put off the talk of marriage because he is too in to his business life and doesn't have time. Lalit and gayatri have asked him many times if he likes a girl or what type of girl he wants.but prem being the silent and shy person he is, doesn't even talk to girls other than for business matters. So, gayatri decided that she was going to choose a bahu for her and has been looking around for a girl, who will understand prem and bring him out of the worm hole of business. At the same time, lalit decides that he wants to go back to ambala and visit his country which he has left 30 years ago. So lalit tells gayatri and they together decide that they will look for their bahu in India. So lalit and balraj announce to the family that they are leaving to India. Everyone is excited because they have never been there before. Preet and meher are in summer vacation; kiran and prem are ordered by lalit to take off from business and to come with them. Kiran is happy because he will be able to spend time with his kids, but prem is not sure whether he will be able to live without his office. He stills aggress because he cant break his parents' heart. So everyone leaves to India. No one in the family knows about the bahu selection thing other than lalit, gayatri, kiran, and kulraj.

Chapter 1

Ambabla:

It was beautiful morning outside, the sun was rising and peeking in to someone's window and falling over two admirable eyes. The eyes flickered open and looked at the clock, it was 6:00 in the morning. She got up from bed and smiled. her lips are shown. They were soft and delicate. She got up and went to the bathroom. 20 minutes later, she came out wearing a white salwar kameez with a little bit of pink embroidery near the neck and on the dupatta. And as she was drying her hair, she went to the mirror and her face is shown. Her eyes showed her love and respect for others; her face showed her simplicity and innocence. She added pink earrings and bangles to match her outfit and went downstairs. She then went in to the kitchen and decorated the pooja ki thali with some color, a lamp, some kumkum, and some flowers. She went out towards the veranda outside and drew out a rangoli. By the time she was almost done. Some kids who have woken up early came up to her and said, "didi aap yeh kya karahi ho" heer turned and said, "kuch nahi. Aaj holi hai na isliye main ragoli daal rahi thi aur aab mandir jaa rahi ho" the kids said, "didi, hum bhi chale". Heer replied, "theek hai but raaste me no badmashi, ok" the children agreed and they all left to go the mandir.

Edited by premeer928 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
very nice....
I really like ow you kept the essence of their actual characters.... Do Balraj and lalit know each other??
I'm wondering if there is going to be anything between Preet and Ash??? I wouldn't mind...
I'm sure Heer and Ash wil fir right in with these guys!!! Story looks good so far!!!
Hope you update soon again!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey it was an awesome start.i liked it.waiting eagerly for the next update.pls cont as soon as possible.😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great update!👍🏼

can't wait to see how prem can handle being without work..lol
plz do continue soon!
-Sadi*
THANK YOU so much for adding me to the PM list!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear...character sketches are awsum...nice...hey i read d first too....nice yaar...prem a workoholic here too...hehe.....lols....waiting for d part when premeer meet....keep it up...very nice
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey all i can say is great start i found it to be very gud actually luved it keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: riddhzie

hey it was an awesome start.i liked it.waiting eagerly for the next update.pls cont as soon as possible.😛




thanks dear...will continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadizzle

Great update!👍🏼 thanks for reading.

can't wait to see how prem can handle being without work..lol wait and watch
plz do continue soon! will continue soon.
-Sadi*
THANK YOU so much for adding me to the PM list!! 🤗ur always welcome





Edited by premeer928 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Parth Garewal

hey dear...character sketches are awsum...nice...hey i read d first too....nice yaar...prem a workoholic here too...hehe.....lols....waiting for d part when premeer meet....keep it up...very nice




thank you so much for reading bhai....will continue soon. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaibun

hey all i can say is great start i found it to be very gud actually luved it keep it up





thanks dear....😊

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