- |Meet| - SongFic - Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai - - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Rani-

That was amazing..lil details how they understand even without words..just amazing!! 😃

Originally posted by: jaan 234

wow lovly post

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I shall edit this tonight! 😊

*unreserved*

Okay so firstly...I hate my laptop, it randomly deleted all my comments! 😔 So I'm just gonna wing it now!😆😆Aww that sucks!

Anyways....firstly thanks sooo much for dedicating it to all of us!🤗 I only show this much enthusiasm for yours and Bhav's ff's because I'm not a crazy fan of Meet....it takes some time!😆No problem Meera...I love your comments...and of course your avi's are just a bonus! 😉

The way you described the evening dying down....is fantastic Shabo! 😃 Seems so real! 😛 Awww his smile followed her everywhere?😳 how totally romantic is that?😃Very romantic...😉 Kaash yaar....kaash...😆that SMIRK....dammit 😆

OMG PREET!!! I could sooo see that happening, poor guy walking into the post!😆😆 *sigh* have I mentioned I love him? 😛 sho cute! 😃I think you mentioned that a couple of times! 😉 I love him tooo *sigh*

Awwww....he could "hear her walking" just shows how intune he is with her! 😃 *sigh*😳😳😳 They really do fit like two peices of a puzzle!😳 ooo and before I forget, I love the way the lyrics all mesh in with the paragaphs really well done! 😃They truly are meant to be!! 😉😆 Thanks Meerrrrrrrrrra! 😃

I really love the simplicity you're showing them "fall in love" I wish you'd write a ff with them!😳 But it's okay! 😛 I won't be mean and try to blackmail you!😆Subtle Meera...very subtle...you never know naa? I think I am saying this cuz I had time this week with no school and all....next week I'll be horrified I had time. 😆

Write more soon Shabo! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Shabz! Another one-shot! Yay! And awwwww thanks for the dedication!Yups. And nooo problem-o. 😉

What can I say but that I loved it? Overlooking the fact that Preet and Meher are just so sweet together that I could probably become diabetic just watching their scenes over and over and over again (not that I mind or anything!)...I don't quite recognize the song, but their routine is just so sweet, like how they kinda know what the other is thinking, with the whole window thingie...Oh and OMG the shirt part just cracked me up! I can honestly see Preet struggling like that..Why does Preet have his shirt off in both of your one-shots? Why am I even asking that?!

Ohh I love that thought. 🤣Getting diabetic over Meet?? So true...all their scenes...specially the one with Preet holding her hand and then raising his eyebrows, with that smirk on his lips.....*SIGHHHH* ☺️That is true ... why are you even asking...if I were you...I'd not question it....😉

Anyway, yeah like someone else said, do write more! I know about the whole time thing, because it's the only reason why I've got like nine parts of my own FF in one week...Haha...

LOL, maybe...I missed writing.....when I get time off, I definantly will! 😉

Take care!
Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

Another one?? 😛 Hehe!! I loved it, 'twas PERFECT!! And that song, one of my all time favourites, loved it on Sujal and Kashish in KTH!! Anyhoo, this one shot was sooo cute- loved the part when Meher helps Preet take his shirt off- cheeky cheeky!! I wonder what was going through Preet's mind at that point, hehe!! ☺️ Shabz, I love your shots, they are just so good!!!! Please continue to write them once in a while! Aawww, the ending was so sweet too, him watching her, absorbing her image in his mind, so sweet!! And she let him sleep on the same bed? How adorable!! Great job 👏- I loved it!! Love Zahra xx

Originally posted by: Garima93

Awwww shabzie!!!

That was soo sweet!! Love the song!! It totally fits Meet!! They're such a cute couple, keep making such cute song-fics! Ur great at em!!!

Luv ya
Garima

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

It seems like everyone is updating today😆

Yay! Another one-shot! And yes I know it's not a FF since you made it very clear last time😆Thank the heavens for that. 😆

Btw, I LOVE this song!😃 You know which other one I like? Tu Hi Mere Rab Ki Tarah Hain =) Oh and Jiya Dhadhak DhadhakYou suggested JDD didn't you? I love the guys voice in that song. ☺️

Anyway, I'll send you my song list later😆 'kay.

Aww thanks for dedicating it to me😃 I feel special =) You should. 😆

I love how Meher imagines something, or someone. And how Preet can't do a single task without her. So sweet =) LOL...aren't they?? *pinches cheeks*

I like how Meher looks at Preet without him knowing and how she doesn't admit how special Preet is to her. She's in denial! But I love how you distinguished the difference between other people and Preet and where he stands in her life. And I love how Preet looks at her chori chori chupke chupke. They both have feelings but don't admit it. Sorry I read the word deinal and couldn't stop laughing. 🤣But I'm glad you like it Ravz...*chokes with laughter*

Me loved it Shabz😃 Loved how you portrayed their relationship. And I'm sure you can tell cuz I even expanded my vocabulary and used the word distinguished😆 Ohhh now I feel special! 😉

*edit*

You're the one who makes Preet be shirtless and say stuff to me. Hypocrite😆 My sister loves using that word =)
Hey I'm the author. It's my world....😆

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

OMG SHABZ! Thank you so much for the dedication! 🤗 I absolutely adore this song, especially after the Sujal-Kashish days. 😉 And it really suits Meet. Did you see last night's episode? *squee*No problem di! 🤗YESSSSSSSS! Omgg I so am hating that smirk. 😆

Aw, Meher is seeing him everywhere? Or rather his smile? Just like in the last one you had Preet dreaming of her. How adorable are they? And Preet, shirtless again. You trying to give me a heartattack at this young age? *fans self* But he really needs his wife for every little thing. How cute. *pinches cheeks*
Ohhh you made the connection. 😆 Smart girl...*ahem* young? *smiles cheekily* ily2 di 🤗 Yup he does...and that makes me wish...I was in Meher's place...*pouts*

And both chori-chori look at one another, reflecting on how important the other person has become to them. Very nice, because it really defines their relationship. They are more than friends, that's for sure, but they're both also scared to label their relation, because it isn't so defined yet. Their friendship is still growing into something more.
*sigh* This reminds me of the HSSH days....you anaylazing every sentence and thinking up of things and ideas that I didn't even think off when I was writing it...but bulls eye nevertheless. 😉

Absolutely adored it Shabo!

Love,

Radz