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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: gossipgal

hey.i just read all three parts of your ff. too intense, very interesting. oh wow!! wats up with heer and her terms girly. wat have you been thinking about?lol..its really awesome, keep it up.

hiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!! where were yaaaaaa??????*muah* i missed u!!😳...i know its interesting..after all i wrote it😉😎!!! as for wat i've been thinking abt!! ur in my brain...so u kno wats on my mind!! u nvr check ur email idiot and u nvr come online...i lost ur number stupid!!😆😆😆btw..wat happened abt sam and cassie's wedding?😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bd670816

hey, i read ur update now. it is awesome.
cont.soon.
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hi..thanks..glad u liked it..hope u like da nxt one too..😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey jus read the three parts of ur ff n i must say em impressed! ⭐️⭐️u have done a wonderful job here! every thing is just perfect!! mindblwing!! 👏👍🏼cant wait to read more plss do continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: premeerrock

hey jus read the three parts of ur ff n i must say em impressed! ⭐️⭐️u have done a wonderful job here! every thing is just perfect!! mindblwing!! 👏👍🏼cant wait to read more plss do continue soon!!!

love,
Hiba.

hi hiba..thank u sooo mcuhhhhh...glad u liked it😃will try and update soon..hope u like the nct part as well😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shruti11

pls post next part soon

hi...will try and update soon...i;ve been having horrible migraines, for the ff i really gotta think..lol..does not come naturally to me...😆😆😆...but as soon as i get well i'll try and update..hope u understand😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi i am new here i just read ur ff n loved it pls continue soon whe u r felling bette ofcourse
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hil4eva

hi hiba..thank u sooo mcuhhhhh...glad u liked it😃will try and update soon..hope u like the nct part as well😛

ur welcum dear n em sure ill love da next chapter since the cliff hanger tht u left for us is too gud!😉😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: vruls

hi i am new here i just read ur ff n loved it pls continue soon whe u r felling bette ofcourse

hi...welcome to my ff😃 glad u luved ittt...i'm gonna cont. soon...hope u liike da nxt prt as well😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part4
Prem tried to hide the shock that went through him. He could not believe the words that he had just heard. Had those words really come out of her mouth? Those words kept ringing in his ears " no strings- no commitments" , "lust", Prem swallowed the lump forming in his throat and he observed Heer, while trying to keep a straight face. He tried to think that this was the alcohol talking rather than her. Heer just kept looking at him with an answer, she set te glass down on the table.

Was Prem ready for this? Would he really do this? His mind began to spin out of control, he felt as if he was the one who was drunk rather than her. He was not expecting her to make such a twisted proposal. Well, for one thing he now knew that she did not feel the way he felt about her. What was he feeling for her? He was not sure himself.Yes, she was beautiful, sexy, intelligent, charming, had an attitude but there was much more to her. She gave him that feeling. The feeling....he never felt before.

" So Prem....What do you think?"

Heer asked him a little impatiently.

" Do you need an answer right now?"

Prem hardly manged to croak out the words.

" What do you think?"

Heer leaned forward and smiled at him and batted her lashes at him.She was completely wasted.

" I need to think about this Heer..."

Prem said with a little more confidence in his voice.

" You know most guys would kill for this type of a situation.... many guys go for a temporary fling..no-strings, just fun...."

She had a sultry tone to her voice.

" Well I'm not most guys..."

Prem sounded much more in control right now.

Heer stood up and the entire room spund around her, she saw twos and threes of everything because of the alcohol. As she stood up and tried to move from the table, her movements were very shaky, she was barely able to walk, her voice was still cofident " You think about it..." Heer knew that he would not simply say no. This was Heer, and she knew Prem.

" Let me drop you off..."

Prem took control of her and drove the car. They left Heer's car at the restaurant and took Prem's car.

All through the car ride, Heer was silent, she was drunk but sober enough to grasp the proposal she made to Prem. Prem, on the other hand had a frown on his face and he was trying to still get a grasp of the situation. Finally after a long silent ride, they reached Heer's apartment. Prem managed to get her out of ther car but due to her wobbly steps, he took matters in his own hands by sweeping her off her feet. He picked her up in his arms and carried her upstairs all the way to her apartment. Heer did not object to him holding her in his arms. Here was a place where she felt safe for a moment, for a minute she felt someone actually cared about her. But she knew the truth about life, that no one ever stuck around. Everyone left one day or another, just like that. People only thought of their convenience. Yet, her fantasy at this time overpowered the reality. For a minute she felt Prem was someone she could depend on , no matter what. She had never felt that way in many years. Even in her early teen years, she had managed to take care of herself, be indepdent. Truly no one knew how lonely she was deep down. She was in a desperate need to be truly loved by someone. She never showed that part of her. She never wanted to be vulnerable around anyone, especially to this man.

As he walked up the stairs, Heer eyes were set on Prem's face. His lean jaw, his heated eyes, his sensual mouth. His ruffled hair, that she wanted to run her fingers through. Yet, he had this strength and power that made her need him even more. At a moment Prem caught her looking at him, their eyed locked for a minute, but Heer looked away and out of her purse, she shuffled the keys out of her purse. Prem put her down for a second, gently took the keys from her hands and unlocked the door. Heer put a hand on her head, she closed her eyes for a ew seconds, the next thing Heer knew was he was carrying her into her room.

Prem laid her down on her bed, took off her heels, covered her with the sheets. By now Heer was starting to drift into sleep, Prem looked at her one more time. He was making his way out of the room when he heard her say " Think about what I said Prem...."

" I will... Belive me Heer I will...." Prem knew that this would be the toughest decision he would ever have made.

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Prem was in his office, he was spinning the pen in his fingers. Heer's words kept coming to him last night. She had to be kidding, he thought. She was only foolong him, there is no way she is serious, not Heer. Heer was not that type of a woman. She would never do something like that. But how much did he know her, but from whatever he knew, last night was something she would be regretting. That's it, he thought. She's not serious, there's more to this. It defiinitely cannot be this. Prem convinced himself and went to her salon. Kidding or not, he had thought about this all night. He had not gotten any sleep but he had made the decision.

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" Were you serious about what you said last night?"

Prem asked her calmly. He was standing in a room with her, where only the hairstylists were allowed to go, but somehow he had manged to land in there. Now, he needed an answer to his question.

Heer was stocking something in the room, she paused for a minute and turned towards him and said softly " What do you think?"

" Do you answer every question with a question. Is that a habit? Or do you do that just with me....just to aggravate me...?" Prem asked her impatiently.

A smile appeared on Heer's face, even when he was impatient, there was something sexy about him " No habit.. I just do that with you... As for what I said last night... I was serious.."

The small smile that had started to appear on Prem's face vanished. He moved to the side a little, knocking into a small balck shelf with hair sprays in it, making everything fall.

" Look what you did! You're not even supposed to be in here... For christ's sake!! Please leave..."

Prem ignored her request for him to leave, instead he bent down with her to clean up the mess he had made. " Heer, you really meant what you said last night..."

"Yes! Do you want me to write it down on paper!!???!!!" Heer snapped at him. " Why is it that you find this so hard to believe!!???"

"Because...." He started to stumble on his words " Because its you Heer...."

" What do you mean its me.. I'm a girl aren't I? So why is it so shocking. I mean I understand that mostly guys propose such a thing but girls have also come a long way in this department... " Heer told him.

" You're not just any girl Heer.. ."

They way Prem said that, got to Heer. He said it with such confidence and admiration. His eyes were expressive as always, telling her that he cared. She knew that this deal was not jsut a deal,or a proposal. To him, it was much more. " You are not any regualr girl, at least not to me. There is more to you than meets the eye. There is more to you that is hidden beneath that facade of sarcasm and attitude. Something that runs deep within you, that you won't show anyone."

Where had that come from? Prem could not belive he had actaully said this to Heer but every bit of it was true. He had understood that much about her. She was closed off towards people, she did not show herself. Something told him that the day she would let the real Heer out, everything would be different. He knew that would be a long way with her.

" Prem you don't know me... Its better if you don't try to get to know me..."

Heer said looking away from him, as she piled the hairsprays on the bottom shelf. They were both still on the floor.

" Yet, I wanna know you. I want to get in there..."

With his finger he pointed to her heart. A place,where Heer never let anyone in, not even he closest friends. She knew that no one every stayed there forever. Everything was an illusion...

" You're complicated, You're hard headed.... yet along with other things that are beautiful about you, these things attract me towards you.....Why? you might think. I am not sure yet... But what I am sure of is there is more I feel for you than lust.... Thats okay if you don't feel the same way but you will eventually feel the same way...."

Prem looked her in the eys when he said this. Heer was standing up, Prem facing her and she was stocking the things on the shelf, her ears were ringing with Prem's words, "hard-headed", "complicated", "beautiful","more". Heer looked at him and simply said " I don't do love...."

Prem put a finger on her lips adn said " Just hear me out...... I know you don't belive in love, but you will very soon Heer...."

" How can you be so sure?" Heer wanted to believe his words, she wanted everything that he said to be true, but she knew that when reality hit, it hit hard. She knew fairy tales were not real, at least not in her case.

" Let's just say I believe in myself..."

Prem smiled at her , his eyes sparkled and they were promising something. Something completely foreign to her, a promise she wanted him to fulfill. " So I agree to you terms, to your conditions. From this moment on, I am yours Heer..."

Heer heart skipped a beat. She replayed the words in her head again to be sure that this was actually happening. He was hers? Her mind was running, her heart fluttered. She was going to have Prem?

" There is something I've been wanting to do.... Its about time I did this...".

Prem's voice was husky, he cornered her into the wall. His lips took hers.

The kiss began slowly and was gentle. Prem's lips were warm and firm against hers. It was slow and gentle about five seconds. Heer's hunger matched his as he kissed her with a passion. her fingers reached the back of his head and ruffled his hair. Heer parted her lips for him, and the kiss took a more erotic feel. Heat was pulsing through her entire body. The kiss continued with a wild heat. His hands cupped her face and he deepend the kiss. Her hands shifted from the back of his head to cup his face, and she felt the slight roughness of the light stubble against her fingertips.They both continued the kiss with raw passion....

Prem's cell phone rang and they both broke the kiss. Prem anwered the phone with his heated gaze in Heer's direction. Heer put a finger on her lips, as if to seal the kiss there forever.

Prem turned to her after finishing his coversation and said " Listen I've got to get back to the office....Now that that's out of the way..we can talk about something else..."

" Excuse me? Out of the way?" Heer gave him a small smirk, he had big grin on his face after what he had jsut said. " What's something else?"

"Move in with me...."

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To this day Prem remembered everything about that day.He remembred everything about her. At that time he was so strong, so sure, so confident. Today, he regretted the decision he had made that day.... Only if he could go back and say no to her that day...If only....

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey guysss...i have updated part 4..shortter than the other parts..but hopefully u'll like it...*phew* ...as always will be lukin 4ward to comments and viewssss.....i plan on keeping this ff short...but cant help but add details..lolzzz...u guys like it ?rite?*crossing fingers*

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