My Imagination :Discover He is prem

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Heer Is sitting in her room alone.Today is Holi.Every one is downstairs celebrating holi.The juneja's has lavished the holi festival because prem is back and There is full hope of kiran coming back due to evidence that heer has now.juneja's has called many people from near by.They had arranged caterers for cooking lavish food.
Heer is in her room resting her head near the window side.She sees the bird flying and slowly tears started falling from her eyes as she against her will gave prem's sacred thread and kurta to gaurav.She wished silently Happy holi to Prem seeing the sky .She closes her eyes and feels prem beside her.She's in trans.

Here below there was loud sound of explosion and the juneja house backyard is on fire as the cylinder got burst.The caterers started runnning fire fire.Soon panic is created.Fire reaches the building and building is on fire. Everyone just runs out of the house.
Gaurav starts looking here and there and he is relieved that everyone is there.But suddenly he is frozen at his place.He is not able to see Heer there.

Gaurav gets panic and his heartbeat starts beating faster.He immediately rush inside the house.gy3 and everyone tries to stop him but by the time any one could stop him he is already inside shouting heer , heer.

He starts looking here and there.He searches his room she is not there, he looks into heer's room.What he saw there just took his breath away.Heer was trapped amidst fire.She is holding prem's white shirt and his photoframe and smiling.Gaurav rsuhes towards her and tries to pull her outside.she just jerks him out.

gaurav:heer, what are you doing ...can't you see that fire is all around.Come lets go.

heer:Leave me alone.I don't want to go from here.

Gaurav : but why??

Heer: Because my prem died the death this way only.He was also caught in the fire.While she was crying said ..Now i can feel his pain, so much he must have gone through when he must have been caught in fire.How alone he must have been when he saw his death.He died remembering everyone.He was so helpless.I can feel him .See gaurav, God has given me this opportunity to die the same death as prem.I am so happy .I am going to meet my prem today.THIS IS DESTINY.

Hearing this gaurav is just shocked .He is not able to utter a single word for few seconds.

Suddenly he grabs heer's hand and said:

Heer, listen to me i don't want to loose you again.I don't want to die again this death.I have already suffered so much .I am Your Prem.I have not gone any where.I was always with you.I always cared for you.But my meaning of love and care has changed with that incident.I didnot wanted you to suffer in the hands of outside world.I did not wanted you to become weak beacuse you love me so much that you sacrificed your self and was ready to be ruined.Please heer, I will explain you everything..Lets move out.

Heer: why should i believe you that you are my prem as you showed me so many colors .some time you were prem, then gaurav , then married me pretending to be prem, again you said you are not prem but gaurav and now again to save me you are saying that you are prem.why should i trust you when you always hurted me .

PRem :I can give you those incidents that has occured only between you and me.He tells all the incidence right from his confession to last talk.Heer believes him.She becomes happy but she faints ....Prem carries her outside safely.

So tell me how did you liked this story.Iam not good writer as you people are...This is my first attempt.I hope prem is discovered soon and i stop imagining these weird things.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome your Imagination is great
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Excellent writing and imagination. I would love it to happen, and i hope it happens today but i am for sure, BT cant give us relief and happiness so soon. It would be better for them also if they show something like this soon, this way they can get higher trps also , their other shows are already going off air and i seriously dont want this to happen to kis desh, but it seems that they are not interested in learning from their mistakes, why cant they let us live in peace. When all the way they have brought back Harshad on viewers demand, why just can they fulfil viewers demand of showibng him as Prem, with memory back. WHY??? Are they so stubborn that they dont want to learn, even if it costs them their show going off air, even when they know that the solution of low trps is soooo simple. Just show him as Prem with full memory. And show romantic Premeer scenes. I am afraid that they are dragging the story soo much and by the time they wil reveal him as Prem, the trps would have already gone so down that SP might have taken some tupid decision and it would be better. The sooner they realise it, teh better. ANd pleaseeeeeeeeeeee start a petition soon to reveal him as Prem.
Farah.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I loved it!!It was very nice=]

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: brokenheart61

awesome your Imagination is great

Thanks for the appreciation
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: farahs_6

Excellent writing and imagination. I would love it to happen, and i hope it happens today but i am for sure, BT cant give us relief and happiness so soon. It would be better for them also if they show something like this soon, this way they can get higher trps also , their other shows are already going off air and i seriously dont want this to happen to kis desh, but it seems that they are not interested in learning from their mistakes, why cant they let us live in peace. When all the way they have brought back Harshad on viewers demand, why just can they fulfil viewers demand of showibng him as Prem, with memory back. WHY??? Are they so stubborn that they dont want to learn, even if it costs them their show going off air, even when they know that the solution of low trps is soooo simple. Just show him as Prem with full memory. And show romantic Premeer scenes. I am afraid that they are dragging the story soo much and by the time they wil reveal him as Prem, the trps would have already gone so down that SP might have taken some tupid decision and it would be better. The sooner they realise it, teh better. ANd pleaseeeeeeeeeeee start a petition soon to reveal him as Prem.

Farah.

Yes yaar, we should wait for today and from tommorow lets start petition to SP first to stop them for making TSPLS going off air and request to continue KDMHMD for atleast 1 year.Lets mail Ekta also for good story line.they have beautiful story in hand which they can bank on and make success if they really wish.They have one of the best of best actor HC and AG in hand.IF SP is adamont we can send mail to EKta requesting to continue the show TSPLS and KDMHMD in some other channel may be in Sony TV or Zee TV or colors.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@heerhann :Thanks for your comments.I hope they show soon that he is prem and show us some romantic touch .

@luckyluv:Thanks for the comments.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Intellienough

Thanks for the appreciation

you are well come why dont you start an ff on it or a short one as we know nothing like this will happen in today's episode we can be happy by reading each other ff as in that we can do what we want to do think on this please a request .😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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No, no please i dont want it to be shifted to any other channel. Because i live in Pakistan, and my cable wala doesnt show NDTV or Colors or Zee tv. So i have to bear Star Plus. But yes we should start emailing Star Plus and Ekta , tomorrow atleast . But if we start emaiing to Ekta and only she accepts our demands then the trp will already go so high that Star Plus will not termoinate the shjow. It is better if Ekta listens to us. So be ready to start emailing from tomorrow. And its not that we should send them once, we should continue emailing them.
Farah.
Posted: 16 years ago
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your imagination is awesome .I wish ,hope and prayer this will happen soon.you wrote every thing ,I want to happen in this show.please mail your imagination to kdmhmd creative team.so they can come up with some thing nice.

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