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Posted: 16 years ago

So I realised that I hadn't updated in a long time, so here I am!! So, so, so sorry!! *hold ears* Here is the next part, hope you like it! It's not a very long part, but I hope it is enjoyed nonetheless!

PART FIFTEEN


Prem and Heer stood for a few moments in silence before awkwardly making their way to sit down on his desk. Prem pulled out the seat for her and she sat down, giving him a small smile for his sweet gesture. She began taking out her pens and pencils and placed them in front of her. She watched as he laid out his stationary neatly and suppressed a giggle. 'I didn't bring any books with me as I thought you would have most of them' she said and he nodded. 'Yes, I have them' he said simply and leaned forward to grab a book from the adjacent shelf.

'Why don't we start with mathematics? Since you hate statistics,' he teased. In response she pulled a ha-ha-very-funny look. 'Yes, why don't we?' she said sarcastically. He put the book in between them on the desk and opened it. Starting with the basics he passed her a sheet of paper and told her to write anything that she knew about statistics. She took in a deep breath, and shakily held her pen to the paper, 'humiliation time' she thought to herself, feeling then heat in her cheeks rise.

Bracing herself, she wrote whatever she could bring to mind, jotting down a few notes on mode, median and mean, alongside basic ideas of correlation and graphs. She slid the sheet across the table to Prem and closed her eyes, prepared for the worst. He looked at the sheet and then at Heer. He smiled and leaned over, 'You don't need to worry- I won't bite!' he laughed, 'This is actually a lot better than I expected, you do know the basics, so it won't be too difficult to teach you more' he assured, hoping to give her the confidence boost that she needed.

'Thanks' she said meekly, looking down as a small smile tugged at the corner of her lips. They spent the next hour expanding on what she already knew about statistics and laughing about everyday things. She was surprised that she had not noticed him in class before, he was such a personality. His character just shone through, she hadn't met anyone like him, not only was he smart and sensible, but he was kind, funny and humble too. Slowly all the awkwardness melted away, and the barriers that they had created were breaking away.

It surprised him to see her without the facade that he was used to seeing. At this very moment he was seeing the real Heer Mann- The girl who was admitting her flaws, the one who would modestly seek for help. Everything was natural, neither felt the need to pretend to be someone else or hide who they really were. Strangely he was enjoying her company. 'Ur we should take a break now' he said and Heer simply nodded. 'When studying, it is important to take a short break after every hour or so. It's not good to over-stress the brain. That way it gives the brain to register everything you have studied' he advised and she smiled, wondering if he ever took the advice that he was giving himself.

'I want a tour of your room' she announced, beaming and getting up from her seat before he could get a word in edgeways. Heer walked around the room gazing at his collection of books, his music collection, his posters, and the pictures of him and his mother. Prem smiled and watched her. Suddenly Heer's eyes fell on a picture that rested on his bedside table, she walked over to look at it and smiled at the image of a middle aged man kneeling down, with his arms around a ten year old boy. She immediately recognised the boy to be Prem, with his shaggy black hair and the square rimmed glasses. She looked at the picture of the man and turned to Prem, 'Is this your father?' she asked softly, pointing at the picture.

Prem froze, unable to get any words out.

Oooh, cliffhanger! How is Prem going to react! Will try to update as soon as possible! Can't wait to read your comments!

Love Zahra xx

Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Cliffhanger! Z, that's evil! EVIL I TELL YOU! *clears throat* Right, I shall be back to edit this.

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago

wow excellent and fabulous..loved and enjoyed it vry much.....scene is soooo cute and sweet....vry excited for nxt part..plzzz continue asap....

Posted: 16 years ago
You evil, evil, evil.....*paused for dramatic effect* Z! 😆 What a place to end it, why do I have a feeling this is going to turn sour for them? Just when they realized who they truly are. *sigh*

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey awesum update!! pls continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
salsa!! =)
Awesome update Zaza!!!!!! 👏 I'm glad to see that finally Prem and Heer are starting to get comfortable around each other!!!! Prem actually teased Heer!!!!!!!!!! *faints* 😉😆
*dum dum dum* Heer saw Prem's dad's picture!!! Wonder how Prem is going to react!?!?!?!?! I hope he doesn't snap and get all defensive!!!!! *fingers crossed*
Great update, can't wait till the next one!!! Sorry the comment is small but i have too much hw right now!!!!
Love you!!! *hug*
Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hello! I am a silent and new reader and I really like this FF! Please update soon, can't wait!

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
that was awesum
sooo cute,sweet
yes cliffhanger
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Posted: 16 years ago
mine! 😛

I've gotta say I love when we get surprise updates on your ff's! 😛 and oye! no being sorry! 😃😳 We're just glad you're back again! 😃

I love teasing Prem and sarcastic Heer! 😃😳 They're so cute! 😛

The entire "short" update was cute Z! 😃 I loved the way she was nervous handing the paper to Prem, and then awww he's so shweet! 😃

The way you described it was really well done....

The cliffhanger however....was mean!😆😆😆 I'm dying to know what happens,....and now I have a weird feeling something or someones going to interrupt though!😆😆

Anyways...continue soon! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
Pyari_Zahra thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sugi77

wow excellent and fabulous..loved and enjoyed it vry much.....scene is soooo cute and sweet....vry excited for nxt part..plzzz continue asap....

Hey Sugi! 😃 Thank you, good to know that you enjoyed it! Will contiue soon! xx

Originally posted by: shabo24

You evil, evil, evil.....*paused for dramatic effect* Z! 😆 What a place to end it, why do I have a feeling this is going to turn sour for them? Just when they realized who they truly are. *sigh*

--shabz

Shabz!! 😃 Hehe, I am pretty evil aren't I? Ask Meera, she knows that I like to go into a devil-ish mode every now and then! 😈😆 You will see soon whether it turns sour for them, or whether it has the opposite effect! xx

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