New FF: Sau Dard Ch17 pg67 Apr 19

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

441240

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#341

another amazing........⭐️ and phabulous .......⭐️......update as usual..................
wonder what Heer lied about.................
can't wait for the next part..........
so plz update soonnnnnn.............
and fnx 4 da pm...........
ps: did i tell u what a phantastic writer u r????? Well give urself a pat on the back Jaz..... tussi great ho............👏

Quote

poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#342

Hey

Awesome update

can't wait for next update

thankz for pm

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Unknown

@_Maneet_

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#343

Omg jaz!!!!
Too much suspense.... I really wanna know wat heer lies about!!!! Thnxs for the update and u can't wait to read more!!!!

Quote

Dolly

@kptl

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#344

wow.....luved it ...cant wait till next chap...thank you..for da wonderful update..

Quote

Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#345

Did I update my comment the last time?

Heh, did I even comment the last time? *hug* Hope you're feeling better Jaz!

And hopefully, I remember to update this.

Love,
Radz

Quote

Nitty

@Nitty2910

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#346

you know this FF of yours kind of make me happy and also sad... happy because prem and heer loved each other so much.. and sad because heer left prem and we still do not know the reason and prem seems to be really hurt abt it... the lied that heer told prem I am sure it must have been abt her pregnancy.. she must have told him that she was and will be fine throughout her pregnancy.. but in real she wasn't and heer didn't want to loose the baby... please update soon....will be waiting for he next update....

Quote

Cess-

@Cess-

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#347

oye, hoye!! both FFs?? i know you are absolutely fine abhi nah?? warna i am warning u... more negligence is gonna make u weaker!!! take ful bed rest jazu... even if ur fine already... i wont hurt!! for the mean while... reserved... this time will update it... pakka...

*reserved*...

p.s. uff jazu... i dont even need to ask what that lie you were talking about is... i know it too well... i can so imagine it... she lied!! heer lied seeing right into prem's eyes that she was fine... she is pregnant, and wants to give prem a child... coz she knows even if he denies it, he wants one!! and so she lied she would be fine... the child would be safe, alas she would be gone, or in comma, or something of that sort!! *sigh*... i hope i am wrong... really, coz i prefer a betrayal than death!! 😔

😆... i know my predictions are usually so stupid and never happens... for the first time, i actually hope the fact remains... ...

take care jazu... will be back...😆

Edited by Cess- - 15 years ago

Quote

stunninstar

@stunninstar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#348

jaaz... heer is pregnant again...yayyyy...but what is that at the end... she lied to him???..man.. is it nt good for her??.. 😒dont tell me she risked her life for the sake of the baby..!!❓

the way the story is going it sounds like that..but then..khair...i can wait in this case.. i love Prem here too...but frankly my favourite Prem is the violent prem from Heers secret...lol...

well.. i always like violent ppl.. he he.. but i love this one too.. he is very normal.. all your Prems are different.. love that... all yr three ff's are three different types...but i can see one similarity in all the three.. that everywhere yuh have separated them fr a while.. and that too about 6 or 7 years.. Ek Paal had seperation.. this one has..and so the other two..

and yr niece..she s so sweet ... and her room is cleaner than yrs..haila.. 👍🏼.. learn somethng from the li'l one...😆😆😆..

heers Gift reminded me of something i had.. even i had a gift with P and S initials... sad that i dnt have that gift or person in my life anymore..!!

and this part too was small..i undderstand your hand is not in proper condition after the accident and i wont demand for a long one from yuh.. only problem is i wont be able to type in a long comment..!!

neways.. love yuh...update soon.. tc...🤗

Quote

meeshti jain

@meeshti.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#349

hiiiiiiiii

awesome update

prem's gift was really sw8

wat?

heer had lied to him

why she lied to him

pls update sooon

Quote

Sarah

@--Sarah--

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#350

*biting nails* Jaz suspense is killing me!! what happened between them
Phantabulous update Jaz and i really loved it. the update is beautifully written!!!
Heer lied? i don't think so....may be she lied about her condition or she came to know after (Assumptions)
waiting for the next update

Quote

1 ... 33 34 35 36 37 ... 51

New FF: Sau Dard Ch17 pg67 Apr 19 - Page 35

Related Topics

Explore Topics