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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey
that was awesome. manmeet butting in again between premeer....cant wait to read the next part. continue soon 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

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kk heres my reaction

OMG luved it sooooooooooooooo gud

thanx alot

do continue

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Nikita

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey, me new reader.. very good start.. i hope u continue... manmeet just kinda proposed to heer.. OMG!!! wat is with this guy.. i tell u😆. awww but i feel sry for him.. he actually liked heer..but as always.. he ends up knowingly-unknowingly between premeer!! but im loving this ff already..please dont stop.*puppy face*please do continue..as u progress ur story, more ppl will read it... do update..and take care..

~nikki😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

super update
loved ash heer convo
manmeet like heer noo
soo glad that heer left
wonder what will happen

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: pooji123456789
super update
loved ash heer convo
manmeet like heer noo
soo glad that heer left
wonder what will happen

Hey pooja..thank yu so much for reading and specially for appreciating the conversation.i always stress on convo rather than shifting scenes in a hurry.

God bless yu.

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Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~
hey, me new reader.. very good start.. i hope u continue... manmeet just kinda proposed to heer.. OMG!!! wat is with this guy.. i tell u😆. awww but i feel sry for him.. he actually liked heer..but as always.. he ends up knowingly-unknowingly between premeer!! but im loving this ff already..please dont stop.*puppy face*please do continue..as u progress ur story, more ppl will read it... do update..and take care..
~nikki😳

Glad to know that yu liked it.and yu r right i alsofeel sorry for manmeet.i'll update in day or two.

god bless u.

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Posted: 16 years ago

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@intellienough--- Thankx a lot.

@ghia--- i'll continue and update soon.

@zaibun-- Thank yu for being so kind to me.

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sugii

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Posted: 16 years ago

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awesome update.i like the way you proceeding ur ff like our normal life.iam very eager to know the scenes of premeer.i often visit IF to read the updates.i want to thank u for entertaining😊 us with ur ff.

-sugi

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Originally posted by: sugi77

awesome update.i like the way you proceeding ur ff like our normal life.iam very eager to know the scenes of premeer.i often visit IF to read the updates.i want to thank u for entertaining😊 us with ur ff.

-sugi

Thank yu for appreciating my efforts and i respect readers like yu.

God bless yu.

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part-3

Lalit juneja searched for his son in the whole mansion,but he was nowhere ....releasing a deep breath he headed towards his son's favourite place in the house....his study. the study was drowned in darkness but he felt his presence .

"prem.. is everything okay?" he asked with genuine concern.

"Yeah " his answer was brief.

"but i do'nt think so...."

Prem did'nt say anything,just stared at his face.

"prem...do'nt let sumone be a priority in your life when in their life....yu r just an option.yu've to move forward and start a new life." he said firmly

"to aap kya chahte hain mujhse" he asked resting against the railing of window and gazing far out to sea.

"tum ek baar mr.maan ki beti se baat kar lo...."he replied.

"dad..i'do'nt think " he tried to say but felt helpless.

"fine..par pehle use mere baare mein sab bata dijiye..." he said absently.

"okay..tum jaisa kahoge waisa hi hoga..and trust me heer buhut achi samajdaar ladki hai." he said in a assuring tone.

After getting the approval of his son..lalit dialed balraaj maan's number and talked to him regarding prem and heer's rishta.

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Maan House.

Balraaj called his only daughter heer in the lawn.he not only wanted to tell her about meeting with prem but also about his condition that their
business is in trouble and how this marriage could save his name and business as lalit juneja offered him fainacial help.
heer listened everything carefully.

"Heer..maine tumhe ye sab isliye bataya kyunki ye sab tumhare liye bhi zarrori hai..par tum par shaadi k liye koi pressure nahi hai."

"yu r my princess and i want yu to be happy. prem is a nice guy and i think he's suitable for yu."his voice was thick with emotions.

"papa..if yu think he's the man for me then i trust yu completely and i know yu will always think good for me " she replied in a sober voice and left.

He was satisfied completely.for a father..its the biggest achievement in life to have a daughter like heer.she had always been proud of her parents.

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Next day..lalit gave prem heer's number. He was not sure about himself that whether he should do this or not..after thinking a lot,he finally picked up his phone and dialled her number.sumone picked up the phone.

"Yes" it was a sweet and feminine sound.

"hi..this is prem..may i talk to heer plz " his voice was deep.

"i'm heer..." she replied nervously.

After a brief silence he broke the ice.

"well..i guess yu know everything about me.." he said.

"jee.." words took great effort to come out of her mouth.

"well..the thing yu do'nt know is that i'm a very boring man...." he tried to make her a little comfortable.

"Some people dance in the rain, others just get wet" she answered in a soft voice.

but her answer baffled him.he was not
expecting this kind of answer.

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