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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
thanks to everyone..
nd the silent reader..
thanks...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Character sketch..

Heer mann: (additi gupta) fondly known as pari..actually pari called by mahi..but everyone in friends call her with the same name PARI heer is a very sweet.good looking girl..but always..silent..she with her cousin study in Canada.

Mahi mann(sanjeeda sheikh) shes a very bubbly girl..heer's cousin..cant see heer upset..always wants heers happiness..

Prem juneja:(harshad chopra)tall,dark handsome guy..dream of every girl..fondly known as p.j..he study in the same university as heer..

Meet kapoor:(amir ali) another handsome hunk..love of mahi..he study's in the same university as heer nd mahi..bet friends with prem..

Preet juneja(suhant rajput):fun loving,handsome,full of life..prem's younger brother..

Kulraj juneja:fondly known as raji..prem's younger sister..apple of her parents eye..pampered by three brothers..

Karan juneja(karan hukku)prem's cousin brother..his parents died in car accident when he was a kid..after that..his uncle aunt brought him uop..he helps lalit with the business

Lalit juneja(same as in the show)big business man..left his country 12 yrs before..today he is bid name with textile industries west..

Gayatri juneja(same as in the show) house wife..has three kids..

She refers karan as her own son..typical Indian women..

Other characters..

Dheer(same as in the show) common friend of premheer..

Harman chatwal(same as in the show) fondly known as harry..commom friend of prem heer..love of maya..

Maya(same as in the show) she is not the bad one as in the show..but quiet little proudish..loves Harman..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i came across ur FF today and just finished reading all four parts...

its too good... just luved it
the concept is excellent...
will be eagerly waiting for next part... update asap...
regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

hey everyone im back with another update..plz check the previous page..i have updated character sketch...

hope u all like it..


Part 5

Prem turns to the ringtone of heers.."bepanah pyaar hai aa ja ..tera intezaar hai aaja"

Prem turns nd see heer standing at the enterance..with mahi..

Heer ..is looking stunning

Wearing saree.. a small teardropper diamond pendant'

With diamond studded earrings..

Prem is totally speechless ..

Mahi is wearing this


Meet:arrey mahi..(goes to mahi) kahan reh gayi thi..itni dair kyun laga di??

Mahi:who meet bas late ho gayi..

Meet:u looking gorgeous'.mahi blush to the compliement..

Prem came forward..prem:ab andar chalne ka iraada hai ya yehi thairey rahogey..

They all get in..

Then the wishes time..everyone wish mahi'nd compliment heer on her very much Indian look..

Meet:lets have some music..

The music begans..

Meet:I request all of u to get scattered on the floor..

Meet mahi goes to the floor'

Heer is standing at the corner.. prem comes to her side..

Prem:hii..

Heer:hii..

Prem:u looking gorgeous..

Heer:thanks..

Mahi comes..mahi:arrey pari..idhar hi thairi rahogi..kya..chalo dance floor par..

Heer:nahi mahi..i m fine..

Mahi:what I m fine tumhe chalna padega..aur p.j tum bhi chalo..

meet nd mahi grabs both premheer to the dance floor..

The lights get dim..d.j plays a slow romantic song..all the couples are dancing..

Prem heer are just standing..

Kahin to.. kahin to.Hogi woh
Duniya jahan tu mere saaath hain

Meet gives prem hand into heers nd leaves..

jahan mein jahan tu
Aur jahan bas tere mere jazbaat hain
Hogi jahan subah teri
Palkon ki kirano mein

Prem heer starts to dance..
Lori jahan chand ki
Sune teri bahon mein..

.Heers feels un comfortable
Prem makes her swin..
[Jane na kahan woh duniya hai
Jane na woh hai bhi ya nahi
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse
Inti kafa nahi ] - [2]

Heer runs out side
Mahi:pari..pari
Mahi runs after her..meet after mahi.
.Outside:
Heer sitting on the bench outside in the lawn nd crying
Mahi is about to go'when prem stops her
Mahi:pari..
Prem:can i'
Mahi nods..
Prem goes to heer nd sits beside her..
Meet keeps his hand on mahi's shoulder..
Mahi turns nd hugs meet..
Meet:yeh pari ko baar baar kya ho jaat hai??
Mahi:shayad kisi ki yaad..
Meet:huh???
Premheer:
prem:hmm..akele main rona is injurious to health..
Heer:huh..tum yahn??
Prem:wo actually mujhe bhi party main bore ho raha tha..thanks to u..tumhare peeche chala aane ke waajha se..mujhe boring party attend karna nahi pada..
Heer smiles to his comments..
Heer:wo actually mujhe akela rehna pasand hai..
Prem:really '.???or just to
Heer:no..just to be silent..
Prem:okay toh main tumhe ek tarikha bata ta hoon..(he points to the moon)Wo dekho..chand..akelepan ka best friend..u can talk to him..cry with him..smile with him nd the best part is..he wont interrupt..
Heer smiles again..
Prem:tum smile kartey hue acchi lagti ho..

Meet mahi:-
Meet:dekho saath main kitney acchey lagtey hai..
Mahi gives a cold look to meet
Meet:ab kya galat keh diya??
Mahi:aisa sonchna bhi math..pari kisi aur ki hai..
Meet:huh???
Meet nd mahi goes nd sits on the other bench..
Mahi:pari hamesha se aisi nahi thi'.pari bilkul bubbly..fun loving girl thi..ussey kisi se pyaar hogaya..bachpan main..
Meet:bachpan main???
Mahi:haan ..bachpan main'wo dono ek dusre ko bahut chahtey thay..but achanak us ladkey ki family ko bahar jaana pada'.magar jaaney se pehle us ladkey ne..pari se promise kiya tah ki.woh wapas aayega..shayad unka pyaar itna atoot hai ki..in 12 saalon mein pari nekisi shikayat nahi ki .aur in 12 saalon main us ladke ke yahan nahi koi call nahi uska ya uski family ka pata..par phir bhi meri pari..uska intezaar karti hai har pal'
Meet:main ab tak pari ko bahut hi reserved samajh ta tha..wo kisi se baat nahi karti kyunki wo shy..par aaj samajh aaya..wo kitna dukh sehti hai..she's a very strong girl..
Mahi:haan'
Meet:us ladke ka naam kya hai??
Prem nd heer is coming to mahi nd meet
Mahi:prem..
Meet looks at prem..(he thinks that mahi is talking about p.j,that they are comig towards them)
Meet:arrey pj..
Prem:andar chaley??
meet:haan chalo..pari??
Prem:who abhi aa jayegi..
Heer comes..
Heer:ab chaley..
Mahi wipes her tears..
They all go in..
Prem takes the mike..
Prem:guys..now dance toh kahtam ho gaye..ab kyun na cake cut kiya jaaye..Mahi cuts the cake..give it to heer ,meet,prem,maya nd Harman,dheer nd others'
Mahi goes to heer..
Heer is standing near window.
Mahi:pari..Heer turns.
heer:haan mahi??
Mahi:pari sor..
heer interrupts'heer:thappad khayegi..agar ek aur baar aisa kaha toh..
mahi:pari..main tujhe aisey nahi dekh sakti..
heer:hastey huey???
Mahi:stupid..rotey huey..
They both hugs..
Meet comes..
Meet:Hogaya bharat milap???
Mahi:bharatmilap?? Meet:okay correction deviyon ka milap??
Maahi:haan hogaya..
Meet:toh ab accha sa song suntey hai jo'
Mahi:jo?
Meet:main gaaney waala hoon..
Mahi:tum ???gaana gaogey???
Meet:nahi p.j..
Mahi:haan chalo suntey hai..
Prem is playing his guitar..
(kuchh is tarah teri palakein meri palkon se mila de
aansu tere saare meri palakon pe saja de) ' 2

prem thinks of pari,,when she was crying..he wasn't feeling good..
kuchh is tarah teri palakein meri palkon se mila de
all the couples are dancing
kuchh is tarah teri palakein meri palkon se mila de
aansu tere saare meri palakon pe saja de
prem is thinking of the day he left his heer at the farm
tu har ghadi har waqt mere saath raha hain
haan ye jism kabhi door kabhi paas raha hain
heer thinks of prem(the actual prem not p.j)
jo bhi ghum hain ye tere unhe tu mera pata de
kuchh is tarah teri palakein meri palkon se mila de
aansu tere saare meri palakon pe saja de

mujhko ko to tere chehare pe ye ghum nahi jhachta
jaayas nahi lagta mujhe ghum se tera rishta

meet nd mahi thinking of the timethey spend together
sun meri gujarish ise chehare se hata de - 2
(kuchh is tarah teri palakein meri palkon se mila deaansu tere saare meri palakon pe saja de) - 2
everyone claps
prem:this song was dedicated to mahi by meet..
mahi:meet..she turns to meet..
mahi:thanks meet'love you..
meet:love you too..they hug..
after that..all enjoy the party..
after party prem decides to drop mahi nd pari at their hostel..
while dropping..mahi went straight way to hostel..coz she was terribly tired..heer..was leaving..while closing door..her pallu stuck in the door..she was trying to get it..prem came out of the car..helped her to take it out of the door
heer:thanks..
prem:pari'no thanks yaar..freindship main no thnks no sorry..nd I want you to remember these points..
heer:I 'll surely do..
heer left smiling..
prem(in mind);why I cant see her crying..whenever she smiles..i feel happy..whenever shes near I feel..happy'..what im thinking??yeh mujhe kya ho gaya???


hope u all like it..

plzz do comment

Edited by sweetshab - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
too gud yar...
cant wait for next part...
continue soon!!!
n for the first ever time, I AM THE FIRST ONE to comment on someupdate... so really happpy about that😊
regards,
Suhana.
Edited by Suhana Ahmed - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
wow pj ko kuch kuch horaha hai amazing update keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
oh..loved part 5..Premeer scenes and dialogues were awesome..And thanx a lot for fulfilling my request..loved the characteristics..and seriously cant wait for part 6...whats goin to happen??Any more Premeer scenes??Oh plz update soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
hiya read all the parts
it was awesome
cant wait for the next part
Posted: 16 years ago
#50
hey shabani
sorry for late comments
was busy with studies..
wow awesome..
hey i liked the costumes...
hmm premheer dance....
tumney mahi ko rulaya...haan aur heer ko bhi..
aww prem is so concerned about pari..
kuch is tarah..i love it...
do cont soonn! aur agli baar se bade bade parts update karna yaar! yeh wala toh bahut hi chota wala tha!
muuah!

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