FF: Dill Mile [part 1-pg. 5] 7/1

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Dill Mile

Hearts meet all the time, but when hearts meet in different countries and are forced to separate, what happens to the people?

Preface

Italy

"Shiya, this article is not finished! Where's the pull? You must, and I mean it, must pull the audience in with your words! Now go and edit this, bring it to me when its properly done, and that means, tomorrow at 8 on the clock" she said calmly from her seat, her hazel eyes glinted in the light as she watched the other girl pale slightly and run off in haste to finish the article like it was wanted.

Meera sighed as she turned off her laptop and placed it in the bag; she zipped up her bag and walked out of her office, turning the bright lights off with a single flick of her finger. The employees greeted their boss as she walked down the hallway, it was lunch time and they were all excited to go out to eat with their groups. She was happy too, lunch meant going to her favorite cafe and drinking coffee with her little sister. Today felt different somehow, as if something was to happen; whatever it was, she was sure it was going to change her life dramatically.

She greeted the waitress with a small smile and ordered her usual, turning her back to the window and taking out her laptop to log in to her email to check new messages from other companies. A few minutes went by as her fingers flew across the keyboard while she typed up replies. Someone fell in the seat next to her with a huff; she did not turn to look, knowing already it was her little cousin, Rinki. "So you're here" she commented as she hit send. Raising a brow she lifted her head to look at the younger girl who was waving at the waitress, ordering her own usual frap.

It always amused Meera when her cousin would order a caramel frap even when it was freezing, the girl loved the drink a bit too much in her opinion. But who was she to say anything, with her always getting her coffee made with extra care? "Umm, sorry?" her cousin said with a sheepish smile, making the answer seem more like a question. She continued to explain her excuse, "See, I was coming and then out of nowhere this dog comes in front of my car and I--" Meera shook her head and raised a hand to silence the girl. Her expression told Rinki all she needed to know and she became quiet with a shrug and half-smile.

India

He grinned at his best friend as they walked through the sets of their show. His chocolate brown eyes captivated the females of all age working around him to stare and sigh. Suddenly laugher from his friend caused him to stare at the younger man with wonder. "What's wrong with you?" his voice seemed to ooze huskiness as he asked confused. His messy brown locks falling on his forehead as he tilted his head to the side. "Harshad, did you see the way the ladies in this place look at you? It just gave me a picture of you as a piece of steak and them as rabid hungry wolves" Sushant replied before beginning to laugh loudly.

Harshad glared at his friend, "oh like they dont stare at you!" he answered with a huff. Sushant nodded his head with a smirk, "You're right! Besides, why would they stare at a buddha like you when they can have me? The jawan!" he posed and winked at Harshad who was trying to fight down a smile at his antics. "Buddha huh? I'll show you what this buddha can do!" he replied, raising his hand and running after Sushant.

The two friends came to a stop when their bosses, Ms. Shabo and Ms. Kiran came in view. They stuttered for a minute before bowing their head like two kids getting caught red-handed at stealing from a cookie jar by an adult. "Our office you two...pronto!" Shabo said with a grin and turned to leave, followed by Kiran. The boys looked at one another, wondering what was going to happen to them now, they were still wary of the two girls after their "joke-condition" to work under their production house.

Entering the large and uniquely decorated office, they sat down in the chairs carefully, eyeing their manager, Ravjot or as she liked to be called; Ravs. "Okay boys, lets get down to business. You're going to Italy for five months to shoot some scenes for the show, get your packing done by tonight. Your plane leaves at 6 in the morning and Ravs will be going there with you as well as the whole team, obviously" Kiran said bluntly, rolling her eyes at the end to herself with a "duh" expression. The guys stayed quiet for a few seconds before jumping up from their seats excitedly, their wide smiles seemed like they could fall of their face anytime as their eyes twinkled with mischief and wonder.

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Aloha! How's it going? Okay first, lets get to business. My Boss and Me, and Woh Mile The are going on a hiatus for a while, not sure how long...but they are. I will update sometime this week with a long-ish part and then they will officially be on hiatus. Don't ask why guys, i won't be able to explain it, just know that i will continue them slowly...but i will continue them for sure.
Now, getting to this new FF in front of you. This is my and Meera's new project. Its for fun, so no harm meant to anyone, the actors are simply borrowed...their not really doing this, we cant pay them enough *sigh* darn us not being rich! *snaps fingers* heh. ur comments are like always loved and much needed *grins* ill give u chocolate! okay, jk! heh, but rlly ur comments mean a lot to us both...so please do leave some! ; ]
Ravs, Kimz, Shabz- dont be offended...if u dnt to be used in this ff as a character, let us know and we'll change it...please dnt hesitate! = ]
- Aways
Meera and Rinki

Disclaimer- Ahem, never got to this, but finally got reminded by Shabz. So here i go. Anything said or used in this fictional story is my thoughts or Meera's. They are in no way associated with the actor and we don't mean any offense to them. If someone comes off in a bad way, that does not mean that is what we think of the actor in real life, we don't even know them, so their role in here is being potrayed in a way that best suits the plot. Please don't go and sue us, because well im broke. The most i would give you is a lecture and a good fight. =] -- Meera and Rinki
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Index

Preface- pg. 1
Part 1- pg. 5
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mine! 😊

*unreserved*

Okay so yay!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ That was me being super "excited" about you posting it!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I love how this idea came up though!πŸ˜ƒ Random pm's and then "I should write a story" That I was ofcourse you!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I'm a little hyper right now, if you couldn't tell!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† It's cus I'm listening to one of my fav songs again!😳 Anyways, as we've discussed I love love love the name of it! And the little way you introduced the main story!😳 *sigh* when will the hearts meet? They can seperate away later!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

I could see "myself" doing drastic hand movements with the first part, specially "you must and I mean it, MUST pull in the audience" πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† That of course reminds me of Mr. Jai Walia on Kasamh Se, have you noticed how much he uses his hands when he's saying his dialogue, it makes me wanna like bind his hands together and see what happens!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Okay anyways!πŸ˜•πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

YAY! I love that I have hazel eyes!😳😳 thanks again for that!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† and ahhh she feels something drastic's going to happen? I wonder what!😍 Harshu and Sushant should hurry it up!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

YAY Rinkz is here!😳😳😳 I loved the Caramel frap addition, suits you perfectly!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† But aww she was making up excuses on being late, I'm sure I wouldn't mind TOO much!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I also love the fact that they meet together for lunch/coffee every day it's just so shweet, oh stupid question, Do they live together, or in the same around the same area? Or maybe we'll just discuss that part later?πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

His chocolate eyes!!! 😍 Okay I shud stop!😳 *shakes head to get back into reading mode* "
Tumse Hi from JWM! ooze huskiness" I'm dead!πŸ˜† absolutely, completely!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† 😳Hungry wolves?? Poor Harshu!πŸ˜† And God...sushant sounds jeal--ous! *sing song voice*😳 It's okay, he'll feel better in Italy!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† He called my harshu a buddha?? Yeah go Harshu show him what a "buddha" can do!πŸ˜•πŸ˜† or uhem, what you can do!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Go Shabo and Kimzie, stopping them right in there tracks!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Hmm do I sense a more sarcastic kimz in the ff?😳 Love the "pronto" Do ppl still use that word?πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜† oh and what about retarded? cus I said it the other day and my 15 year old cousin was like, god who uses that word? It's called mental now! I was like...πŸ˜²πŸ˜•πŸ˜† okie then!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Back to the ff!πŸ˜† You added the joke condition!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Loved it!😳 oh another question...are additi and mihika or vaishali in this ff as well?πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Woot woot Ravs is there too!πŸ˜ƒ And yay! They're coming to Italy!πŸ˜ƒ *jumps for joy* I'm very excited, but you already knew that!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† love the obviously from kimz with the roll of her eyes!πŸ˜† mischief in their eyes? I sense more of it in Sushant's eyes!πŸ˜†

As you already know, My Boss and Me is one of my FAV stories that you've written, maybe cus you've added yourself in it!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† But I can't wait for the "longish" update for that one! As well as Woh Mile The!πŸ˜† you left at such a cliffhanger on that one!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† As for this project, it's totally spontaneous and slightly insane on our part?πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† But yes...we should be rich enough to afford those two crazy guys!😍 Ah yes can't wait to see what shabo and kimzie have to say about this "new project" of ours!😳 Mainly yours though!πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³

Can't wait obviously for the upcoming parts!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Love you loads,

Meera😳😳

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^^That may as well be one of the longest comments I've written! 😳 Wow! πŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

^^That may as well be one of the longest comments I've written! 😳 Wow! πŸ˜ƒ

its ur longest comment tht im reading! πŸ˜† love it...will reply to it rite now...πŸ˜ƒ
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hey, great start.. i like that this different.. and u r using harshad, and sushant in this other than prem and preet. do update soon.. and by the way i love ur two other FF's absolutely amazing!!! i m sure this one is going to be just as great..!! any way takecare..
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*sigh* Wow Rinkz, how the hell you manage to do this is BEYOND me!πŸ˜†But one q, is this your ff or something you and Meera are writing together??πŸ˜†

First off all I LOVE the title, makes you anticipate love, passion....love.β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜†

Ohh ITALY!!!!!πŸ˜ƒI've been there before, loved how you are using it, really quaint lil place AMAZING...!

🀣Meera the workaholic? *raises eyebrows* Hard to see especailyl as she is feeling too lazy to find a job *cough* but I really like how she was introduced in the first paragraph...but why do i have the feeling there is more the Meera then meets the eye?? πŸ˜†

Ohhh so RInki is her lil cuz? Cute, I can see that happening! OH OH OH! In this ff I can call the CHARACTER cute naa? Or is that too much?πŸ˜†Ohh Frappe...loving it, so strange too I just had one today at lunch...and it was snowing outside.🀣🀣

meanwhile...in india....two hot guys, strolling up and down the street...loving how you used the names Harshad and Sushant...adds a new type of essence to the character naa?πŸ˜‰ohh but htey are FINE!☺️How come you two get the hot guys? *pouts* what do we get stuck with? riksha waale?πŸ˜†

Ohh I LOVE how me and kimz and ravs have so much AUTHORITY! *rubs hands in glee* and awww harshu and shuhu are choo chweet! ohh coming to italy? all of them or just the guys?πŸ˜•ohh spark are going to FLY!

Awww other ff's coming ot a halt? no worries, life gets in the way..or u just lose the passion for sthe story...waiing for ur super long update but this ff has so much potentioal...dunt drop it jaanu finish it...!πŸ˜‰

ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!?! I am so not offended... i love this...im starring a ff...😎...well nto really but close enough! ohh and pm's if i dunt reply/comemnt for like a week tell me but im sure ill find my way here!

^^ woah that was a long comment. now gotto go work on english esaay.🀒

continue soon!πŸ˜ƒ

--shabz
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oh yes.. please add me to ur PM list if u r going to have one.😳. thanks in advance..
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😊
of course πŸ˜†
*unreserved*
yayy!! heh, thanks

Okay so yay!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ That was me being super "excited" about you posting it!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I love how this idea came up though!πŸ˜ƒ Random pm's and then "I should write a story" That I was ofcourse you!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I'm a little hyper right now, if you couldn't tell!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† It's cus I'm listening to one of my fav songs again!😳 Anyways, as we've discussed I love love love the name of it! And the little way you introduced the main story!😳 *sigh* when will the hearts meet? They can seperate away later!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
yesh? lolz...ur always excited but super excited!! wah wah! so nice to be on the receiving end of tht πŸ˜† hehe, thats how us geniuses work πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† nahin nahin, i could not tell at all meeru! lolz...aww is it tumse hi? like u mentioned somewhere down there..heh. aww thanks meeru! ily! ahh...they will be meeting soon meri jaan, intezaar karo! πŸ˜† haii? u want to separate frm harshu?!! 😲😲 chi chi! πŸ˜† jk

I could see "myself" doing drastic hand movements with the first part, specially "you must and I mean it, MUST pull in the audience" πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† That of course reminds me of Mr. Jai Walia on Kasamh Se, have you noticed how much he uses his hands when he's saying his dialogue, it makes me wanna like bind his hands together and see what happens!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Okay anyways!πŸ˜•πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
ah u know urself better than me, so ill agree! πŸ˜† but yea, using ur hands is like a instinct, especially when ur saying it with such "Passion" πŸ˜† ah srry! i've never seen tht show, but i know who ur talking abt..heh woww!! i would love to see tht happen, heh, lets see wht harshu has to say to tht side of u πŸ˜†

YAY! I love that I have hazel eyes!😳😳 thanks again for that!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† and ahhh she feels something drastic's going to happen? I wonder what!😍 Harshu and Sushant should hurry it up!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
ah yea, they're cute! heh. no probs! 😳 hmm yesh, thts the question of the year! πŸ˜† ah dnt wrry, they will...remember ur meeting him through a lift...*sigh* im so evil! heh, and im meeting shushi...through...umm starbucks? πŸ˜†πŸ˜† not sure yet..still thinking abt tht prt πŸ˜†
YAY Rinkz is here!😳😳😳 I loved the Caramel frap addition, suits you perfectly!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† But aww she was making up excuses on being late, I'm sure I wouldn't mind TOO much!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I also love the fact that they meet together for lunch/coffee every day it's just so shweet, oh stupid question, Do they live together, or in the same around the same area? Or maybe we'll just discuss that part later?πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
yesh i am! *poses* u know i love the frap, so cnt miss adding it πŸ˜† thank-you! heh yea sure u wouldn't! πŸ˜† but i guess its like a normal routine, since i always come late and u got used to it...its like our sister thing πŸ˜† umm...yea i think we live together...didn't i tell u abt the music thing, us going to boy's room and yelling at em..? πŸ€” never mind then, but yea we do live together...just across or next to the boys...*sigh* smexxy πŸ˜† heh, we'll tlk more abt this in the pm's yea? πŸ˜† plus i just had this cute scene for u and harshu in my mind! if he lives across...ahhh! will tell ya in the pm, remind me? say harshu across frm out room and in a towel...πŸ˜†
His chocolate eyes!!! 😍 Okay I shud stop!😳 *shakes head to get back into reading mode* "
Tumse Hi from JWM! ooze huskiness" I'm dead!πŸ˜† absolutely, completely!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† 😳Hungry wolves?? Poor Harshu!πŸ˜† And God...sushant sounds jeal--ous! *sing song voice*😳 It's okay, he'll feel better in Italy!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† He called my harshu a buddha?? Yeah go Harshu show him what a "buddha" can do!πŸ˜•πŸ˜† or uhem, what you can do!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
yesh yesh his chocolate eyes *sigh* nahin, nahin! keep going, i wanna see ur inner fan-girl πŸ˜† haii, ready to die so soon?!! πŸ˜† u still have much more to see and read missy, so stay alive kay? dnt faint on me now πŸ˜† yesh! have u seen the way some ladies stare at poor hotties like harshu and shushi? πŸ˜† ahh, u think he's jealous?! heh...maybe he is! yup, ur harshu is called a buddha πŸ˜† but he's joking ...i think πŸ˜‰ jk lmao wow, meeri!!
Go Shabo and Kimzie, stopping them right in there tracks!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Hmm do I sense a more sarcastic kimz in the ff?😳 Love the "pronto" Do ppl still use that word?πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜† oh and what about retarded? cus I said it the other day and my 15 year old cousin was like, god who uses that word? It's called mental now! I was like...πŸ˜²πŸ˜•πŸ˜† okie then!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Back to the ff!πŸ˜† You added the joke condition!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Loved it!😳 oh another question...are additi and mihika or vaishali in this ff as well?πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
ah, heh maybe? πŸ˜† lets see how kimz likes herself first though πŸ˜† hm, yea they do...mostly...heh. ah ppl still say "retard" ur cuz must be with some other crowd πŸ˜† i always hear ppl calling someone retarded...*sigh* like across the room πŸ˜† ah coudn't resist! heh, hmm see i was thinking yes...cuz it would create jealousy...*ebil muh* πŸ˜†
Woot woot Ravs is there too!πŸ˜ƒ And yay! They're coming to Italy!πŸ˜ƒ *jumps for joy* I'm very excited, but you already knew that!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† love the obviously from kimz with the roll of her eyes!πŸ˜† mischief in their eyes? I sense more of it in Sushant's eyes!πŸ˜†
yesh she is! heh, someone's happy! πŸ˜† hmm okay, so shushi's more mischievious while harshu is excited πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
As you already know, My Boss and Me is one of my FAV stories that you've written, maybe cus you've added yourself in it!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† But I can't wait for the "longish" update for that one! As well as Woh Mile The!πŸ˜† you left at such a cliffhanger on that one!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† As for this project, it's totally spontaneous and slightly insane on our part?πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† But yes...we should be rich enough to afford those two crazy guys!😍 Ah yes can't wait to see what shabo and kimzie have to say about this "new project" of ours!😳 Mainly yours though!πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
aww *blush* it is? ur sooo sweet meerii! yep, lets hope i finish writing those parts soon *grins* wmt, i think this one will be a kinda-ish cliffhanger too...tannu gets engaged and the gang finds out abt it, zaib sings a song in memory of his and tannu's relationship 😳 and yep...some other things...*muahaha* hey! we have the right to be crazy! we're US! duhh πŸ˜† i know, i wish we could afford them too πŸ˜† well, lets wait to see their comments! 😳 oy, we're working together in this! watch, sometime, ill make u update instead of me writing some prt πŸ˜†
Can't wait obviously for the upcoming parts!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
aw thanks meeru!
Love you loads,
ily2
Meera😳😳

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