(FF)Kismat Konnection:Ch 4,Pg 11-Apr 8 - Page 7

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Anhdara13 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
my post has been eidted.
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
Oo thanks alot for an early update
it was great
loved it

Thankyou........................................................................
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
awesome...
premeer fighting just sounds great...
loved it...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
hey another great update cant w8 to read more keep da gud wrk up
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
heyy nice f-f !!
really like it !!
plz continue soon !
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Garima93

*POKE* 😆

*Edit*

Don't worry I've been going around "Poking" everyone today, so don't get scared!! lol😆😆
Phew! I was like I did something wrong....or Gari had eventually turned into a bully...poking her face around everyone😆

My My Shifu!!! Kya Kamaal kardiya! Itni jaldi update?!?! Wow!! Congratz!!😆 LOL I make the most silliest comments dont I?😆😛
Er no...I was expecting this!😆 My own record you know!😉


I loved how you started off with Prem! Eeehh!! Can't ever get enough him!😍 *snaps out of it* So yeah...uhh...what was I saying...Oh yeah Prem! Duh! He's shoo cute!! Even when he's pissed at Heer!!!
Prem is after all Prem na?😉


OMG! Heer's LG shine broke!😲 Not good at all!! Silly Prem, he through the sweater on Heer's face, but then Heer compared him to a dog...ouch! lol😆
Thanks to Prem...and now Heer's eyes are on his iPhone😆 I know...dogs are loyal and cute...😉


LMAO! They're humungo argument was totally awesome!!!! and funny at the same time!! hahaha Jediot!!! rofl!! Nice word combination shifu!!! 😆😆😆 I totally loves it!!😃 And then Prem has to give her baraabar ki takkar and calls her chudail!! lmao!! this argument could not have gotten any funnier with all those words!!!😆😆😆 I love how you come up with those dialogues!! I should totally use them whenever I'm insulting someone!!! hahahaha!!!
I like the word Jediot😆 Haha, except please keep the credits for such awsome words to yourself, I do not wish to be involved😆


And OMG! The last scene!! They both got lost in eachother's eyes!! *SIGH* How romantic!!😍 So...there is definitely a konnection going on between them!! Can't wait to know whats to come further!! I really loved this update shifs!! Great Job!! Keep up the wonderful work!!👏👏
Yea...there deffo IS a konnection😆 Thanks for liking the update Gari!😳


Luvs,
Gari 😳😳



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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
Thanks Purplestar!

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

*sigh* mine! 😊 will comment ASAP this time! 😃

*unreserved*

You dedicated it STRICTLY to me?😳😳😳 You were watching my mixes, and that made you wanna update? 😛 Interesting!😆😆 *sigh* I am such a good friend! I did it cus you're my friend! 😃 And cus then maybe you'll be in the mood to update more of them! 😉 And once again...you thanked me...*slap* NO MORE! 😆 that means you can't thank me for nearly 4 days now!😆😆

Yes😳 I know...you are the beshtesht friend!😳 Haha, same with you😉

Onto the update! 😃

Oooh I liked how you did the initial reaction in Prem's pov too! 😃 makes it more fun to see what he was thinking too!😆😆
Yes. I wanted to do Prem's POV...😆

Ooo LG Shine! 😛 I like those....uh oh! It got all shattered on the floor? 😔 That's not good...but she shouldn't have *sniff* compared him to a dog! 😛 Bechara! 😔
But I like dogs, go to the cuteness na?😆

They're whole argument was awesome! 😛 The running comments, I could soooo imagine a smirk on Prem's face, "Rocket's don't run"😳
Haha, I loved writing that part...😆

Eeeee Prem's attracted!! *jumps up and down* I'm excited now!😆😆😆 Reminds me kinda of MJHT!😃 Which makes me very very VERY happy!😳😳😳 Oohh my Tere Naina one!😳 I liked the vm...😆😆😆
Prem's attracted but he will be in denial😆

Update soon! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳

P.S. Hope it was long enough!😃

Thanks Meeru!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Good update!!! Really like the 'konnection' they feel between each other!!!

Hehe, thanks Maddy!
Waiting to see the progress in their relationship and where this trip is going to lead them!!
are we going to get the whole story behind why Heer ran away and what Prem is doing on this trip any time soon, or this that for later???
Yea, I will get onto that story as well, don't worry
And maaaaybe i'm just a little hyper about this FF due to obvious reasons!!!!! 😆
Haha, obvious reasons!😆
Can't wait for the next chapter!!! This one was awesome!!
Maddy

Thanks Maddy
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
Thanks Poonam😳

Originally posted by: munam_13

Baapre Baap Shifu...what a jhagralu pair...they just dont seems to get tired...😕
Heer said that she'll prefer to share her seat with a dog than him???😆... now that's
really rude...😆😆😆 .. I liked their yes no yes no a lot.. reminded me of an old serial
'tu tu main main', but they were saans bahu for a change. oh o!!! an eye locing session
😳 wah wah!!! glad something like that happened and I got to contoll my laughter... awesome
update..btw...when are you updating next????

Yea, they don't seem to get enough😆 No...I actually liked that...😆 Haha, now Premeer are both in denial of liking each other...typical na?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
Thanks Sadi, and I am glad you liked the update.

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

this is my post.

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Shifu! I seriously love the way you write. The insight into Prem's psyche was very well written. If I were in his position, I would not have been happy either. I mean, Heer never said thank you, or sorry, and has so much attitude! Of course, Prem doesn't make it easy.
I won't either. Nope, Prem does not make it easy
And Heer, she finally apologises, but then starts such a childish argument! They are both so hilarious.
Duh, they fight like hubby and wife, but just don't know it.
But the best part has got to be when she falls on him, and neither can look away. They are so attracted to one another, already! I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Hehe, they are attracted to each other...kinda obvious isn't it? or else who would waste their time fighting to a complete stranger?
Love,
Radz

Thanks Rads

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