[FF]~** Dor**~ (PART 26 updated- Pg:39 june 26th) - Page 20

Originally posted by: kash fan4ever

hey,hi saakshi........

gr8 part. thank u soo much

loved meet scene. glad they ve finally confessed. aww even i m glad that they fnally confessed but i dunno when will this happen in the show yaar nyways current track is so depressing............

loved the way prem is flirting with heer. hope the night does get excited! love ur funny parts when prem is desperately trying to meet her at the miidle of the night. lol i kno but unfotunately nuthin like this happened in the show cuz they never had any proper marraige

hope the creatives take a cue 4m u. there's been only one or two proper premeer scenes since he has officially come back as THE PREM JUNEJA.

pls. cont soon and do pm me

i will sure pn u dear asa i update.....

ceers,

sakshi

luv
-iksha

hello pplzzz.........🤗
as promised i am here with another update of my fanfic......
i kno that there was phingoli shown today but it was an utter diappointment........ andi really hope that they dutn go thier typical BT way and seperate the lead pair.......
nyways hear is the update.......

--------------------------DOR (PART 23)
In the morning the preparations for marriage were in full swing. Everyone was busy decorating the house. Relatives had already started pouring in, Veera was also there. Prem passed her without even looking at her and this she was not able to bear because she loved him immensely.
" Prem bhaiiya please app mujhse baat kyun nahi kar rahe ho, mujhe maloom hai bhaiyya ki mujhse galti ho gayi par trust me bhaiyya agar mujhe pata hota ki ye sab rishabh ki chal hai to main aisa kabhi nahi karti" Prem was just turning a deaf ear towards her.
" bahiyaa agar aapko chahiye to aap mujhe maar lo par please bhaiiya mujhse baat karo" she said holding his hand
" tujhe kya lagta hai veera ki main tujhe marunga tujhe.... jisse maine apni nazron ke saamne bade hote dekha hai, are pagal main is baat se nahi gussa ki tune galti ki main to is baat se gussa hoon ki jiske upar tun ilzaam lagaye usse tune abhi tak koi maafi nahi mangi " he said keepin his hand on her head
" dekh veera jis tarah main teri parwah karta hoon usi tarah Heer bhi karti hai wo tere saath naahi kabhi galat karegi aur naahi galat hone degi....."
" mujhe maloom hai bhaiiya....... i m sorry bhaiiya aap chinta mat kariye main heer bhabhi se zaroor maafi magungi....."
" now thats like my sister" and he hugs her with a smile on his face
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" Meher zara yahaan aana" Preet called Meher inside the room
" kya hua preet" she asked him with a urgency in her voice.
" kuch nahi maine kab kaha ki kuch hua..... haan lekin agar tum chaho to kuch kuch zaroor ho sakta hai" he said moving close to her and grabbing her by the waist....
" preet chodo mujhe..... bahaar bahut kaam hai" she said looking down
"kaam karne ke liye aur bhi bahut log hain.... " and he placed a kiss on her nose......
" Prem jiju ??" she said in a surprised voice....
" accha..... dekho meher ye trick bahut hi puraani ho gayi hai mujhpe nahi chalne waali.... u see i m reaaly smart for all these dada daadi tricks" he said holding her more closer..... but just then sum1 tapped on his shoulder...
" so mr. smart what were u saying?" said a male voice
" PPPrem BBHaaaiyyaa...... aaap yahaan kya kar rahe hain.. aapko to apne kamre mein hona chahiye aapki to shaadi hai" he said breaking away from meher and meher rushed out of the room
" Haan to Preet kya keh raha tha tu....."
" kya bhaiiya aap bhi....."
" kyun bacchu ab aaya na oonth pahaad ke neeche chal ab MAIN..... mainnnnn ye baat sabko bataoon to..." he said putting his hand around preet's shoulders and raising his brow
" he he PB dekho aap mere acche bhaiiya ho naa..... to please aap aisa kuch mat karna...." Preet said making a childlike face
" chal tubhi kya yaad rakhega nahi karta....... lekin ek word of caution aage se agar ye romantic baatein karni hon naa to darwaza zaroor band ka lena....." he said tapping on his cheek and goin out of the room....
Preet was furoius with himself " PB aapko to main dekh lunga"
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Finally the moment was there the very moment for which Prem and Heer had been w8in for soo long. At last they were sitting in the mandap ready to b one, ready to seal their relatipship with the pious vows of marriage. From here on, they will step into another phase of their love, a phase which will be different yet similar to the life that they have been living till now. This was the most pure and most deep feeling that they both were experiencing as they were taking pheres around the fire. It took almost 4 hours to complete all the rituals of marriage. Heer was very lucky to have lalit and gayatri as her in-laws as lalit was the one who fulfilled the ritual of kanyadaan for heer. I t was not an obligation as Nihaal was there but it was Lalit's wish which Nihaal had very happily granted.
There was a joint reception immediately after the marriage. All the relatives were congratulating the newly wed couple. The Juneja's were taken by surprise when they saw Ashlesha walkiing into the house wearing a smile on her face.
" congratulations Prem.... congratz Heer " she hugged them lightly
" i know that you all are surprised to see me here don't worry i m not here to ruin anything, i m here just to tell you that i have realized that i was wrong on my part...... and i m genuinely happy for both of you" she said with a smile on her face.
" I am glad that you are back Ashlesha..... and all the misunderstandings have cleared" Heer said
They were all happy but little did they realize that how uncomfortable Meher and Preet were in the presence of Ash.. but Ash did not overlook that so after meeting everyone she went upto them
" Meher look I kno that i have been very rude to you in the past but believe me now i Know that neither of u were at fault.. " she said holding her hand with a reassuring smile on her face......
that was enough for both the sisters to hug and forget all the past things that had happened .....
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Heer was sitting in front of the dressing table looking at herself in the mirror thinking that today she is looking at the reflection of Mrs. Heer Prem Juneja in true sense. Today they have consolidated their relationship in fornt of the world. This was the stepping stone for her new life that she was going to live as Prem's wife, she still was not able to believe that she was married to a person whom she loved so dearly. Just then the door opened and something tightened in her stomach, she knew that he was here.
" you are looking very beautiful today" he said with a husky voice in her ears. She was so nervous that she was not even able to look up. Heat rose in her cheeks and before she could have said anything she was swept off her feet.
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so that was it for today next update thursday.......
and it will be very romantic....... so stay tuned for the next one it will be a treat for both prem heer and meet fans😉.....
untill then take care.........
byeeee
luv u all🤗
-iksha

Ooooooh, wow great update hon!!!!!

good ...awesome.I am waiting for your update as today is thursday.

hello pplz 🤗
i m soo very sorry i kno i am late......
actually I had guests at my place and I had my bday too so i didtn realli get time to update.....
however now that finally i have time here u gooo........

--------------------DOR (part 24)------------------------------------------

" you are looking very beautiful today" he said with a husky voice in her ears. She was so nervous that she was not even able to look up. Heat rose in her cheeks and before she could have said anything she was swept off her feet.

"Prem what are you doing put me down!!"
Prem placed a kiss on her forehead and looking into her eyes he said softly "why ....are scared hmm??"
" as long as you are with me I can never be scared" she said softly with a smile... their nose touching each others.
Both were standing by the window facing each other with moon shining upon them...
Heer was going to say sumthin when Prem put his finger on her lips....
He moved closer to her his hands tracing the curve of her waist she had her hands on his shoulders... he placed a kiss on the side of her neck making his way up to her ears and in the process his hands were working to remove her earrings... Heer closed her eyes loosing herself to the sensation of his touch... when she was free of jewellary he carried her to the bed placing her gently on it.. He was not able to take his eyes off of her.. looking into her eyes he carresed her cheeks with his fingures... and with no further indication his mouth was on hers pressing lightly then more urgently...... her hand automatically traced its way to the back of his head playing with his hair.. he held her by the waist and one hand supported her back made her lay in the bed gently... she closed her eyes yeilding to the sensation and shuttin the rest of the world... and he made her his... they made love to each other for the first time and became one..
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Meher was cleaning up the room as.....
"Meher Meher kua kar rahi ho " Preet said lookin up from the PSP which has been playin since an hour
"kya kar rahi hoon matlab..... aapki hi meherbaani is kamare ke haalat dekhi hai Preet.... tumhe kaise dikhegi tumhe is PSP se fursat mile tab na" said meher in anger....
"are baap re" Preet stood up "meri biwi ko itna gussa aata mujhe to pata hi nahi tha" He said going close to her...."chalo koi baat nahi main tumhaari madat kar deta hoon.. "he took all the clothes from her hands and threw them on the couch" and started moving towards her... as he was takin steps towards her she was takin a step back untill she hit the wall of an open window....
Preet held her by the waist.. and putting a strand of hair behind her ears he tightened his grip and moved her more closer to him....
"Preet what are you doing I have to clean the room"
Preet moved more closer and whispered in her ears "do u really want to... now??' Meher was not able to answer as the smell of his cologne reached her... Preet placed a kiss on the small of her neck....
"Preet ye tum kya kar rahe ho...'
"do u really not know ?" he said in a husky voice traacing the contours of her neck and cheeks with the tip of his nose...
Meher had no choice but to give in.... at this point cleaning the room was the last thing on her mind.....
Preet looked into her eyes and and cupping her face he placed a kiss on her lips... Meher hand autimatically reached went for his hair on the back of his neck.. and his hands slid and dissapeared into her long locks...it was the first time they tasted each other and were revering in the spell that both of them had caste on each other....
When they broke it seemed as if they have entered a totally new world.. Meher was red in the face and did not dare to llok up and meet his eyes... Preet lifted her head up and goin closer to her lips yet again whispered against them "I Love You.. dont ever leave me" . Meher closed her eyes to sort of let the words sink in....They again divulged into another lip lock this time more passionately and for longer only.... breaking away Preet said "thats another thing that you will have to clean my mess every day" he said
" I think i can bear that much on one condition" she said
"what??"
"that you will always keep loving me like this" she said with a smile
"like this standing here.... dutn u think thats a bit too much to ask for i mean u kno i have other thingd to do too..."
"Preet u knoi didnt mean that" she said slightly slapping him on the shoulder with a shy smile on her face.......
Preet just smiled back and wrapped her in his arms making her rest her head on his chest.
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so this is it for now i wil try to update in the weelend but cant promise as i have my exams on 28th..... but after that u can count on me for regular updates.......
do comment ot critsize.....
untill then
bbye
luv
-iksha

awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

Hey,

*fanning myself* Give me a minute to catch my breath!!!!!!!! ☺️ Gosh, that was so....... passionate!!!!!!! But at the same time with BOTH the couples you kept that sense of purity/sadhgi!!!!!! *thumbs up* 👏