FF Murder Mystery Ch 3: Pg 14 Jan 29 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Ghia

it was awesome 👏 you surely should continue. its different from all the ff I read...so I am really curious to know what happens...so update soon😊

Originally posted by: Intellienough

pls continue with khamoshi as i was regular reader of it.

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

interesting very nice
very different
do cont soon...

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

I want you to continue!!

And I'm sure everyone else does too. I'm very curious to know what happens next but if you don't want, I guess I understand. Just wanna let you know, it's an awesome FF😊 ---aww thanks so much ravz! i'll try to continue it if i can, its just that, i kind of forgot about what i started off with, you know? but i still know what i'm going to do, so I'll try conitnuing it. 😳

Ooh a story about Preet? Seems interesting --- yeshh... a story bout preet solving a crime. 😈 i've been wanting to do something bout preet for a while heh.

Aww poor Veera. Feel kinda bad for her. Can't believe she got more love from Rishab than her family... And Rishab actually seems nice. Never though I'd see the day when I would say that. ---yea, i guess that was the point. well, prem wasn't in her family, or preet. so yea, it was just lalit, and gayatri and kulraaj... and the two monkeys whose names i dont know. yupp i tried keeping them nice, cuz i was killing them anyway.

Omg they're both dying? How? I bet it was the perfume she sprayed...or something like that. You can't end it there! There's so much suspense! I demand another update. ---There both dead, tehehehe. 😃😆 Your good ravz, but you'll have to find out later if it was the perfume or not. Ah I'm nto ending it there, more will be coming up tomorrow. Cuz its sushants birthday! Can you believe it, I wish I knew bout it earlier. Ooh sumones demanding.

Oh oh oh! May I be added to the PM list?😊 ---yesh you may be added to the PM list, actually i already added you. Oh! And you prolly already now, your in the jury.

Originally posted by: sonali09

hey! wow!!!! the story is already super duper interesting!!!👏 its vey different from other FF's.....luv it already!😳 hmmm so veera got choked?! wow....aw i feel a bit sad 4 her....hmm k maybe not. Preet's the main lead?! yipee! i adore him...but i don think any1 adores him more then (ahem ahem) rinkz!😆 and im sure you will be continuing it....right?! lol o ya and can you add me to your pm list plz?! thanks!😊

Originally posted by: munam_13

hey kimmu awesome start and a very different story...you must continue with it..will be waiting to read the rest of the story... the concept is really wonderful...wonder how Preet is going to solve all the thing...but that's what only you know right????so please do continue...and please continue your khamoshi...i was totally hooked into it... it is a wonderful story...and pls add me in your pm list..

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Kimzie! Nahin! *devamuski ishtyle* Don't leave me hanging for Khamoshi! Unless you PM me the way the story was to go.. no need for details.. 😉😃 And what is this, you started a new FF, and didn't inform me???? I'm hurt.. *sniffles* ---Haila.. you ishlearns quickly. Putting Deva-musks in action again, eh? Good job my bacha. *pats head* Err... yes, I know i'm the younger one. Aww... I'll pm you the summary. I think i'll summarize the rest of the story of kahmoshi too, everyone will be happy then... heh. I'm sorry, i didn't want to bother you. 😳

But I'll still read it.. 😆 ooohh, Preet? Hain main mar jawa! 😆 *hides from Rinki* I forgot the deal we made! Sorry! 😆 ---Aww yayy! 😃 Don't worry, i've been secretly admiring Preet too. *drrreamy eyes* Shhh we Rinki doesn't have to find out. 😉😆

Wow, I actually felt sorry for Veera.. mostly because Lalit is horrible, so I can understand Veera leaving the family due to him. And here Rishab and Veera actually love another, so I felt bad for her for having to choose between her family and love.. That's a first.. 😆 ---Yeaa... i think dying people deserve pity. Lalit is horrible, I just hate him so much in the show that Im going to take it out over here with "accidents". She never really had to choose though, she was just kicked out. I'll explain that situation more later.

Stupid girl! If you remember throwing the perfume away, don't use it! Of course, she wouldn't think someone was trying to kill her.. Okay, so not her fault.. Damn, but who would be trying to kill the pair? I have a few guesses *cough*Lalit*cough* ---She thought Rishab gave it! Shhh! Can't you act dumb for a second? *hmph* Hmm... good guess. Lets see, we'll just have to find out later. (SHUT UP RINKI! I like keeping people in suspense. 😃)

Aw, the way they died was kinda.. sweet.. In each other's arms.. *sigh* I cannot believe you wrote a romantic death for Rishab and Veera.. it was a kinda redemption in my eyes.. ---Heh yeaa... But Preet isn't going to think the same. 🤣 Yea I can't believe i did either. *shivers* Just thought I owed 'em that much since I was murdering them. Even in a fic, i feel guilty for murdering them. 😆😆

Rinki's in it too?? Nice! Love the Prat and the Vixen.. 😆 Can I warrent a cameo as well? ---Yupp she's in here too. I knoww mee too!! *squeels* Yupp your a part of the jury. With shabz, meera and ravz. I love your character the most in it. 😆

Looking forward to updates! ---I'll have an update today. SUSHANTS BIRTHDAY!

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Kimz!! you started a new ff? and I get no notification! 😔 This is horrible friendship! 😔 ---Meeraa! I'm sowwie! I didn't want to bother you... 😳

Anyways after that nice dramatic bit! 😛 ---Heh, the only thing your missing is "deva muski style'.

I wanna be on the pm list!😃 but ahh you're not going to continue khamoshi? but it was soo good! 😳 It's okay...I know how it feels when you have to continue a story once you lose interest, so it's okay! 😛 ---Kk, added you. I'm not sure, I might just write a summary of what was supposed to happen next. Not go into details and all. Yeaa... when you lose the feel, you just can't do it anymore.

I love the idea of this one! 😃 Yay for Preet being the main hero! 😛 ---Aww thankoo.. Yupp! I luurvee Preet. *cough* I mean Prat and Vixen. *smiles*

god they died like that? all romantic and perfect?? that disturbs me! 😆 😆 But ahhh cant wait to know how everything unfolds! 😃 Murder mysteries are the best! 😊 ---Yeaa... It disturbs me too, don't worry. But I think I just think they deserved it since I was kinda murdering them... hehe. Yeaa I really can't wait to be all suspensful and see all of your desperate faces. *dreamy eyes* I knoww.. I love murder mysteries.

Ahh rinks is in this as well 😛 YAY! 😛 I knew it was going to be fun to read anyways....but now it's going to be even better! 😉😳 ---Yupp! With Prat and Vixen. I knoww.. with there masti and what not... ahh i'm going to have fun while writing too. 😃

Update soon! 😃 ---Will do... today. In an hour or so when I have the scene in my head ready. 😳

Meera!😳