FF: Guzarish -Note; Pg 70 (Sept 22, 09) - Page 43

*pose pose. Guess who's HERE?!?!?!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Deizy

ola....

thanks for pm.....

rocking part.....prem is falling in love ...cute ...cntn soonnnnn

Originally posted by: Innocent02

aww....lovely update.
"MY NERD GIRL" how sweet.
Prem is in LOVE with Heer....yipeee😃
possessive prem 😉
curious to know what happens next and how this bet ended😊
Thanks....

Originally posted by: missindia26

Oooh fabulous update 👏

Loved how Prem calls her MY Nerd Girl 😛

Possessiveness, jealousy, he's so in love! 😉

Aw Heer's so cute 😊

Glad Prem didn't blurt out the truth while he was drunk 😕

But I'm worried it'll come out soon

Update soon! Love TJ x

Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

*pose pose. Guess who's HERE?!?!?!!!!!! Avi is!😆😆😆

It's ME, AVI! Yeah.....erhmm, thanks for the PM BTW! But could you please take me off from it? I'm going to become inactive soon for like a year and it won't be cool making u waste your time PMing me rita? Oui.

Anyhoo, I loved the repetitive, MY Nerd Girl =P It was good. Loved the way you wrote it. Prem is a pretty full of himself kinda guy eh? *gags. Sameer sounds cool! Ah....ohh and I can totally imagine Additi in that outfit, she would look awesome. And er...I'm losing my memory, what else did I want to say?

Oh yeah, the use of first person works very well, usually it ticks me off but you do a pretty good job using it.

Good job!

-Love,

Avi =P