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AWESOMEEEEE too good very nice part waitinggggggggggg for next asap.
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

AWESOMEEEEE too good very nice part waitinggggggggggg for next asap.

Thanks. Will do so tomorrow.
@ All : This FF is based on Prem as faking his ML. Do check out the one shot - Pyar ki dastaan by sunday, which will be from prem suffering ML and regaining his memory back.
BTW, if BT shows that the guy currently as Prem is not Prem and is hand in gloves with RR, I shall personally stop watching the videos as well.
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hy tht wz rlly gud plzz do cry on...
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omg great update luved it thank you soooooooooooo much
ash n harman not bad not bad at alll
thank you soooooooooo much for updating cant wait continue soon
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Part 34 :
Ahem, waisee Harman Bhai says preet, ab to aap us maya ke jungal se bach gaye ho. Ashlesha ke barein main kya khayal hai...
Harman - Preet as preet runs away and harman goes to catch him. Waisee Harman Bhai, Thank You... aapne bhi humara bahut madat kiya hai. Agar woh Sania nahin aati to pata nahin kya hota.
** Flashback to Harman's Meeting with Sania**
Harman was sitting and talking to Maya and her best friend danny, when danny wanted to have some coffee.Harman offered to make some and went out. Harman was standing at the door with the coffee, when he overheard the conversation
Danny : So how is sanjana? Ever since I am here, I havent heard you talk about her?
Maya : She is... ummm doing well. Danny, I have a favour to ask you. Please dont talk about sanjana while harman is around. kahin usse shak na ho jaye.
Danny : Shak
Maya : Haan, basically, his brother didnt love sanjana and sanjana loved him.
Danny : and you didnt explain things to her?
Maya : getting up, kya batatee... that the man who loves, is not hers to begin with. She is my cousin sister, danny. I love her. I cant see her hurt.
Danny : Well, may be, had you explained to her, it wouldbt have hurt her.
Maya : you know, how possessive she is about the peoplw she loves, Wants to own them, hold them.
Danny : well, maya, you know it too, you cant hold on to something very tightly. breathing space dene chahiye the.
Maya : Danny ...
Danny : seriously, if she really loved prem, she should have set him free, had he been hers, he would have come bak. If not, it was never hers to begin with. So, hows sania?
Maya : Sania .. (and she comes quite close to Danny so much so that their faces to faes..)
Danny pulls sanny and twirls her around, yes madame, how sania - your sania bhabhi. Is she still as beautiful?
Maya : Yeh Canada main hai, rishabh ke kuch properties hain, usse sambhal rahee hain.
Danny : laughs and he holds maya from her waist and goes to kiss her neck... what a roving eye he has, such a beautiful wife, but still wants to try his hands elsewhere.
Maya : Danny and she laughs and she entagles herself from danny. Oh Harman, she says, as she sees Harman at the door,
Danny sees the questioning look on his face and knows he is not happy and has a lot of answers. He decides to provide those answers to Harman over a few drinks.
Later in the evening, Harman & Danny have a boys evening out where they talk about boys stuff, There is an ad aired of a canadian company and the model is Sania, Woah, Sania, a model.
Harman : Sania?
Danny : Yeah Sania Rampal, Rishabhs wife
Harman : Tum rishabh ko jante ho
Danny : Haan, woh to maya ka cousin hai. usne tumhe nahin bataya.
Harman thinks in his minds, so that explains the connection between rai singhania & rampal... so maya, was she only doing this so that harman leaves the house, so that rishabh could...... MEHER, he then realizes and the pieces of the puzzle begin to fall in place.
Danny, Says Harman. Yes, I can hep you says Danny.Harman laughs. How did you know I was going to ask you for help. Because, says danny, you are like me, a self made man, who would do anything for his family. For whom, relationships and family mean everything. Danny smiles as he looks at Harman. The love in your heart is not here to stay Harman. For love is not love, till you dont give it away,
I dont need to worry and care about Maya then, right says harman
Why would you. I am here, She will understand. You go to your family Harman. They need you. They are ones who made you. There were there when you needed them. Today, they need you. With that Harman & Danny join hands.
The next few days go in danny woooing maya and doing things for maya. harman remembering the times he spent with his family, and they doing things for each other.
**End of Flash Back**
Harman is awakened from his thoughts as the door bell rings. Its the court notice and there is a nilaami called in for the house, two days later.
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Part 35
Harman is shocked as he reads the notice. Its dated for yesterday so that means the nilaami is fixed for tomorrow morning. He re - reads the notice again and goes to tell the family.
The whole family is shocked and Prem tells his bauji, that you dont worry, yeh nilami nahin hogee. Ashleisha then realizes she can help them out and excuses her self to go out, when she cant get through to her mother.
Mean while, Rishabh Rampal comes in and says, true to my promise, I am bring you down to the streets. Now, I really want to see Mr Lalit Juneja, how your son - Mr Prem Juneja, will save you. He leaves saying that.
In the bedroom:
Heer is putting Prems Tie
Prem : ooouuuccch'tie pehana rahee hoo ya gala dabba rahee ho.
Heer : haan maan to bahut kar raha hai gala dabbane ka
Prem : wearing his cufflings ' kyun'.
Heer : yun hiii accha Prem'main jaanti hoon kit tum aach bahut dukhee Ho
Prem : dukhee kyun'
Heer : turning Prems face towards her' Kunal, aaj tum Juneja empire take over karne ja rahe 'who empire jo is khandaan ka kabhi zibdagi tha'
Prem : Heer'us empire ko bananane main maine bahut mehnat ki the'.Canada se aaya tha, to issee business main haath bantne chalaa'Prem gets nostalgic..
Heer puts her hand on Prem

Prem ' but nothing comes before the self respect of the family Heer. Rishabh ko iskee kimat milege. Heer, You are my wife now and everyone jolly well respect that. Aaj se humare sukh dard sab ek hai m hain na...
Heers Nods and Prems put his forehead on Heers. Phir Theek Hai, he says, looking at her eyes, We both and my brothers will take over the business and this property from nilaami together. Mera Saath dogee? Prem Asks Heer. Heer nods in affirmative.
In the Evening:
The whole town has heard of the Juneja Nilaami and came forward to help the Juneja's with whatever means they have. Its enough for them to start life from scratch but not enough to save the house. Preet remembers that Daljeet Chachi had the property and the house papers and wonders, if Ashlesha has gone to get the papers from her mother.
Outside Lalit is sitting on the bench when he hears a voice ..

bura laga?

lalit ji looks up and he sees a mirror image of himself

dadadi - nahin to

mirror image - nahin... aree admit kar do koi harz nahin hai. accha ek baat batao. tumhe bura kyun laga

lalit - prem aur heer

mirror image - dono kush hain. tumhe to kush hona chahiye ki tumhara beta is layak hai, ki woh khud ki company take over kar sakta hai ya phir san kuch scratch se shuru kar sakta hai.

lalit - han par..

mirror image - par kya... prem par barosa nahin hai kya?

lalit - yakeen to hai. he is a self made man. darta hoon to duniya se.

mirror image - duniye se. and mirror image starts laughin... tumhe duniye ki parvah kabse hone lagee.. bhool gaye, aaj shaam ko to ghar ka batvara hoga. and yakeen mano. aaj phir se, prem hi tumhe bichayega..

lalit - umeed to yehi hai. dada looks up and mirror image has gone.

From the window above the house, prems eyes are moist. he looks at a rather helpless lalit sitting on the bench and gayatri going to him. He sees lalit putting his head on gayatri shoulder and how they both cry hugging each other as the though of their house, their mandir being a victim of nilaami and joke of the town plays in their mind, and prems thoughts go back to the time when he was a kid and he got hurt, and how lalit stayed up all night to take care of him and how gayatri used to get him kesar ka milk when he had to study.. Heer looks at him, wipes his tears and tells him, hum to bauji aur ma ke kande banegeing. chalein..
The Next Day:
The next morning.
At the Juneja's lalit and the family are looking at every corner of the house with tlc and think back at the moments with the hard work they stared building the house. Meher remembers her childhood, gayatri, her first days in the house. Preet & Harman are in the snooker room and remember how that room used to be their den. Veera is aghast and wonders where they will go.

All the people have come and nilaami begins. Preet & Harman are feeling sheepish as they think they are in a way responsible.

the lawyers..nillami shuru ho jaye

person 1 - 1 crore
person 2 - 50 crores
person 3 - 100 crores

100 crores 1, 100 crores 2

person 4 150 crores..

150 crores 1

person 5 - 200 crores

Lalit and Gayatri are heartbroken and feel their izzat is going down the drains. They keep looking in the direction of the gate hoping a miracle would happen and wonder where prem & heer have gone.
The old timers of the hotel staff even offer the Junejas to come and stay with them.

200 croores 1 , 200 crores 2

Just then a voice says 10,000 crores. everyone is aghast and looks up. Its Prem and behind him are daljeet, ashlesha and heer. Prem walk on, very confident, with the house papers in his hand.
He goes towards the lawyers and says, this house can not be sold and this house is now mine. He shows the papers of the house to the lawyers. Daljeet has given the papers back to Prem.

Daljeet apologizes to everyone, telling everyone ki beti ke pyar ne usse andha kar diya tha. But then when ashlesha came up to her and told her that she needed to do something for the family, daljeet too had a change of heart.

Daljeet Continues, mujhe iske barein main pata nahin chalta agar Ashlesha mujhe iske barein nahin batatee aur meri aankhein nahin kholtee. Ashlesha ne mujhe samajhaya ki uske halat ke zimmedar aap log nahin rishabh rampal aur main khood hoon. Mujhe maaph kar dijiye baujee, beti ke pyar main main aandha ho gayee thi.

Preet : Daljeet chachi, issme aapki koi galtee nahin thi. Koi bhi aapki jagah hota, to wohi karta jo aapne kiya. Ashlesha ke liye bhi koi na koi bana hai. He smiles looking at Ashlesha and continues saying, dukh is baat ka hamesha rahega, ki woh main nahin tha. Preet goes towards Ashlesha and says Thank You. Daljeet has tears in her eyes as the whole family forgives and everyone hugs each other.

As for Rishabh Rampal, he is aghast as his next move has also failed and once again, with a small face, goes out.

Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago
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Part 36 :
Every gets ready to go inside when the girls and gayatri tell everyone to stop. They come back with an aarti ki thali, place a kalash of water and rice on the ground and another kalash with kumkum ka paani in it. They then do the aarti of Prem & Heer together and then tell Heer to place her hands in the kumkum ka paani after which she has to put her hands on the walls. Once thats done, heer is told to hit the kalash of rice with her right leg and enter putting the right leg forward and enter the house. Then she is required to put her feet in the kumkum ka paani and enter further inside.
Once inside, the youngsters realize they are hungry and make a new tradition in the shaadi ka rasam : That the newly weds have to cook as a part of karchi hilao rasam..
well the kitchen is a mess by the end of it. there is flour lying on the floor, oil falling from the slab, vegetables peels on prems head and heer is lying on the floor crying with laughter with oil streaking from her hair and on her clothes!

Well as you can see there was a lot of fun and banter going on in the kitchen, lots of eye locking scenes and romancing while Heer was teaching Prem how to make sujjiii ka halwa and pao bhaaji and Prem was helping Heer around in order to help her make tea.
So there is a dwar roko scene as well, as when Heer moves left, prem moves left too, heer moves right, prem moves right too... and they both come closer to each other, near the slab where the spices are, Heer stretvhes her hands to get the spices, Prem looks in her eyes, and as if reading them, moves his hands to where heers hands is , puts his hand on top of hers as he gives her the various spices she needs to cook.
Then she is on a stool and is about to fall, when prem catches hold of her and they both are locked in each others eyes for eternity.

Gayatri thinks that the love birds are taking longer than usual so she goes to the kitchen and is aghast to see the plight there. the rotis are burnt. the pao bhaji over cooked. Tea is very kadak and the halwa is very thin...
She goes towards prem & heer who are still locked in each others eyes, taps them, but no response. The whole family bursts out laughing when they see what has happenned and go towards the love birds and tease them as they all burst into a song...
Prem & Heer are broken from the eye lock, Heer blushes and is about to go, when Prem catches hold of her hand.

While cleaning the mess together, they both fall thanks to the slippery floor and nearly break their bones... but clean up the kitchen they do...the salty water is thrown in the garden..
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice cute part loved it immenselyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy waitinggggggggggg for next asap.
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awsomgreat update cant wit to read more do continue luv ya tc

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