Ghar Ek Mandir Premeer FF - Pa 3 Pg 4 - 12-12-08

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Tia Verma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: princeton_girl
heY...Starting OF your Story IS very Different and Awesome...I love to Read This KInd of Stories which are different from e DRAmA....Keep Writing!!!I'll be anxiously waiting for your NEXT UPDATE!!!😛

~REHANA~

Thanks Rehana

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Tia Verma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Part Two

They all rush into Heer's room where they saw Sameer hugging Heer and Janki holding her leg in pain.

Confused Saksham asked "what was that sound?"

Heer: Nothing! I just broke Bhaiyya's latest cell phone

Vardaan begun to cough while Meher patted his back

Mukti: Vardaan, what happened?

Vardaan: What happened? We almost got into an accident coming from the airport in time for Heer's birthday and she breaks my cell phone not Sameer's cell phone, but my cell phone.

Vardaan picks up his broken black berry and starts to cry a little.

Mukti, Meher and Heer couldn't stop laughing afterwards Sameer covers Heer's eyes with a cloth and asked Prem to carry her toward the garden because he has to carry his life; looking at Janki who is holding her leg in pain because Heer threw the cell toward her leg area.

{Garden}

Sameer whispered something into Saksham and Vardaan's ears so no one can hear while he covers Heer's eyes with his bare hands after Prem puts her on the ground from his arms.

Saksham returns with a cake in his hand while Vardaan and Sameer sing "Happy Birthday to you
Happy birthday to you
Happy birthday to you dear Heer
Happy Birthday to you"

Heer blows out the candle and cuts the cake with her Sameer Bhaiyya afterwards feeds her Sameer Bhaiyya than her parents along with her uncle and auntie. Than her sisters Mukti and Meher along with Saksham and Vardaan also feeds her Prem with her hand because everyone pressured her.

Prem looks into her eyes and Heer looked toward the ground.

"Know you kids enjoy while we adults go inside and chat about the wedding celebrations." Said by Mukti's father

Sameer, Saksham, Vardaan, Heer, Mukti, and Meher nods their head while Prem, Prithvi and Preet trying to figure out - what is happening but whatever is happening its so sweet and loving like them when they are around their siblings in their house.

Vardaan waits until their elders leave afterwards he say "let's go out to the new pub opening by Dhara's place?"

Heer: Not a bad idea but where is my gift?

Vardaan: What gift?

Heer: Come' on guys where is my gift? Don't tell me Sameer Bhaiyya you forgot my gift even you Saksham?

Saksham: Humari Heer asked for something and we forgot it! Nope, Vardaan was just joking around. Your gift is right there....

Heer walks where Saksham is pointing and find two girls (one is Vardaan's girlfriend and the other one is Saksham's girlfriend) dressed in beautiful black western dress ready for Heer's birthday party at the pub by Dhara's place arranged by Vardaan himself.

"So tell us how did you like your gift?" Vardaan asked

Heer whispered something into Mukti and Meher's ear than said "I don't like your choice so you can't marry them, but I love Janki Bhabhi's gift because its going to call me Bua"

Sameer choked on his food than looks at Janki who was sitting on the ground. Janki begun to blush in front of everyone and Heer said "leave the two lovers alone and we all meet at the pub by Dhara's house and plus I like your gift Saksham and Vardaan. Also Prem, Prithvi and Preet, why don't you guys join us in my birthday celebration in that way we all could get to know each other before our marriage?"

"Bhaiyya, it's not a bad idea" Preet tells both of his brother

Prem nods his head

"Than its settled that we all will meet at the pub by Dhara's place by 2:30" Vardaan said, also gave Prem the address than heads into the outhouse with Saksham.

Everyone leaves according to the plan while Sameer asked Janki if she is pregnant and she nods her head.

Narrator's voice.... Sameer and Janki have been dating each other from past 12yrs. Even both of their families have excepted their relationship, but Sameer said he won't marry Janki until his sisters aren't married in front of his eyes because he wants to settle his sisters first than himself. Janki also supports Sameer in his decision about not getting married until Heer, Mukti and Meher aren't married.

Sameer hugged Janki and touched her stomach

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Guys, Dhara's rolled is played by Mouni Roy and she is Saskham's girlfriend & Prerna's rolled is played by Krithika Sengal and she is Vardaan's girlfriend.

Tia

Edited by Shagun-Ki-Raat - 16 years ago

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Sonali

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

hey tia!!!! wonderful update once again!!!!!👏👏👏 soooooo sweet....luv heer's and sameer's realtionship...soo cute! hope you continue soon!

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iqra

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Awesome update Tia👏....👏👏

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Tia Verma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: munam_13
lovely part tia...well narrated...

priyo

Thank you Priyo

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Tia Verma

@Shagun-Ki-Raat

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sonali09
hey tia!!!! wonderful update once again!!!!!👏👏👏 soooooo sweet....luv heer's and sameer's realtionship...soo cute! hope you continue soon!

Thanks

And yes! Heer needs a loving brother who she can depend on in life and Sameer fits perfect than Nihaal. I wish Ekta wold use some of my ideas for Brother and Sister relationship 😛.

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Tia Verma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Iqra238
Awesome update Tia👏....👏👏

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Tia Verma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Part Three

{At the pub}

Prem, Prithvi, and Preet arrived early and waits for Heer, Mukti, Meher, Sameer, Saksham, Vardaan and their girfriends.

After awhile Heer enters wearing this - , Mukti also comes inside wearing this - and Meher enters the bulding wearing a smiple dress like this - because she never liked these type of places.

Prithvi couldn't take of his eyes from Mukti or Prem couldn't take of his eyes from Heer. Many other people stared at Heer, but soon Saksham and Vardaan stepped in from behind. They started minding their own busincess.

Heer couldn't stop laughing after awhile Saksham takes Dhara to the dance floor and Vardaan does the same with Prerna.

Saksham: mit jaavan tere ishq mein
kuriye na nakhre dikha

Vardaan: I can see your body moving
and its shaking from the left to the right

Dhara: oh mundeya ki tu vekh da
niyat teri karab

Mukti asked Prithvi to get them some drinks while she used the restroom. Mukti asked her sisters to join her, but Meher says "no" because she felt uncomfy at this place. Heer was about to leave with Mukti but her cell rings and she excused herself from the rest.

Prem holds Prithvi's arm and says "Prithvi, i'll go to get the drinks"

Prithvi nods his head

Preet notice Meher wasn't feeling comfy at this place so he asked her if she wanted to go for a walk while the drinks came.

Meher nods her head

Saksham: saari raat hum tum karenge tantanaa
oh baby I just want you to know that im out tonight

Dhara: oh deewane kuri main aisi hegi na

Saksham: saari raat hum tum karenge tantanaa

Vardaan: mit javaan tere ishq mein
kuriye na nakhre dikha

Saksham: I can see your body moving
and its shaking from the left to the right

Heer thanked Mukti for excusing her by ringing her without anyone knowing. Mukti hugged her saying "all the best but make sure anyone doesn't catch you"

Heer nods her head

Dhara: oh mundeya ki tu vekh da
niyat teri karab

Prerna: teri galan vich na avaan
jawani nu samaal

Dhara: jawani nu samaal

Vardaan: saari raat hum tum karenge tantanaa
oh baby i just want you to know that im out tonight

Prerna: oh deewane kuri main aisi hegi na

Vardaan: saari raat hum tum karenge tantanaa

Heer sneaks around the pub without getting caught by anyone while she was walking in a dark room someone had spot her. She looked scared! But when she felt someone covering her mouth before getting shot.

Saksham: pehli dafaa jab mile te hum
yakeen tha mere dil pe sanam

Vardaan: tu hi ek voh haseena
kadam kadam pe chale humdum

The person removed his hand

Heer looked shock in seeing Prem standing in front of her with a gun in his hand

Heer started to say something and Prem covered her mouth by saying "if you ask any question now than we both will be caught and killed so save your questions for later. And now let's find away of getting from here because I got all the proof against the person you are after. Also next time don't wear these type of clothes because it reavels everything and it will get you killed one day."

Heer stared at Prem than nods her head while he lets go off her mouth.

Saksham: aazmaale
shart la le

Vardaan: mere jaisa na tum paaoge

Saksham: saari raat hum tum karenge tantanaa
oh baby i just want you to know that im out tonight

Dhara: oh deewane kuri main aisi hegi na

Saksham: saari raat hum tum karenge tantanaa

Prem and Heer found away off getting out of that place than joined Saksham, Dhara, Vardaan, and Prerna on the dance floor so nobody knows what their main reason in coming to this place in first place along with Prithvi and Mukti.

Prem: everybody to the left
put your hands up
everybody to the right
put your hands up
party people in the house
can you hear me tantanaa

Prithvi: everybody to the left
put your hands up
everybody to the right
put your hands up
party people in the house
can you hear me tantanaa

Saksham: we came to party

Vardaan: with everybody

Prem: if you want to get naughty

Prithvi: you're in the right place

Heer: tujh mein kuch aisi hai baat

Dhara: jo keeche mujhe tere paas

Prerna: tu hai bada chikna sa

Mukti: par kaise karoon aitbaar

Prithvi: haath thaamo
nazrein milao

Prem: meri baahon mein kho jao tum

Prem: saari raat hum tum karenge tantanaa
oh baby i just want you to know that im out tonight

Heer: oh deewane kuri main aisi hegi na

Prem: saari raat hum tum karenge tantanaa

Saksham: mit javaan tere ishq mein
kuriye na nakhre dikha

Vardaan: masti ke is aalaam mein
bad nachke tu dikha

Prem: oh i can see your body moving
and its shaking from the left to the right

Prithvi: just move to the sound of the beat now
so we can jam all night

Saksham: so we can jam all night

Prem: saari raat hum tum karenge tantanaa

Vardaan: oh baby i just want you to know that im out tonight

Prem, Prithvi, Saksham: Vardaan, Heer, Mukti, Dhara, Prerna: saari raat hum tum karenge tantanaa
saari raat hum tum karenge tantanaa
saari raat hum tum karenge tantanaa
saari raat hum tum karenge tantanaa

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Tia