FF:One Lie-UpdtPt32(pg60)Fear of Losing the child - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks you guys....i promise ill update tommoorrow..i am glad you all are appreciating my work....I have my party todai so i cant update but wait..many more Premeer moments to come..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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1st of all a late Happy Birth Day to u dear Sorry for wishing u late u can say im a new reader of ur FF,i really loving it&want to thank u for writting this different story. 🥳👏HAPPY BIRTH DAY TO YOU🥳👏
May U Live Long&God Gives u everything tht u want😳BLESS YOU😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i m new reader of ur ff...i caem up here as i rele liked the title...very curious to noe that what ll be that one lie in which ur ff is plotted...mayb sumthing big huh??? veryyyyyyy super gud ff yaar....very nice...keep it up....loved ur ff....waiting for d next part....can u tell me that when r u updating it...plzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey when r u going to update yaar??? we r waiting...update soon.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 12:

"No Prem", replied Heer, "Don't say it..please don't say it. I am already in love with someone and to distance myself from him would be torture"

She put her hands on his chest and pushed him back and slammed the door in his face. Prem looked like his heart had just been pulled out and kicked. His face became gloomy and his eyes became red. He dropped on the floor of the closet wondering why she didn't like him.

That night Heer couldn't sleep due to the happiness and joy that she felt due to Prem's love but also due to the sadness that she left him with.

That night Tushar couldn't sleep due to the fact that he could only pretend to be Heer's love and as soon as reality would strike the couple, Tushar would be out of the picture…

That night Prem couldn't sleep due to his broken heart by two ladies whom he had felt attraction towards…

That night the triangle( Tushar-Heer-Prem) was depressed due to the endless stress and the torturing concern of losing one another.

The morning sun shined its orange rays above Bombay as the city got busy and loud chattering came from the corner of the streets. Heer was also very active in the morning trying to get her stuff ready to go to the radio station. She was also packing her sari to go to Gayatri and Corp later in the day.

Tushar was very busy with a client and was trying to get ready for todays show. All of a sudden a rose like scent came across his senses. He closed his eyes to dwell in the mist of the scent as the scent was very attracting and welcoming. He turned around and heard the wind blow. The wind touched his face and he felt a rush inside his body. He imagined Heer coming out from the door wearing a red sari with beautfil sequins and the dupata was flowing. She was shying away and had a shy smile on her face. She was looking down on the floor and looked amazingly graceful. He then opened his eyes just to see Heer in rugged jeans and a T shirt. She has a big smile on her face and she winks at him as soon as he opens his eyes.

"Kiya hua tushar….in love or what", Said Heer with a smile

"Ahh, man cant you act like a lady for once, like seriously…larki ho ya nahi?" said Tushar

"I am not a larki…I am a Punjabi kuri yaar..chak de", she said as she whistled at tushar

Tushar closed his ears as it was so loud he took Heer by the ears and pulled her to the radio station. She went into the cabin and put the head phones on and…

"Good morning MUMBAI,.."

The show went with songs and many interesting discussions from the viewers. After the show, Heer came rushing out of the cabin and went to the washroom to change. After she changed, she came into Tushar's cabin and said…

"Tushar, want to put sindoor on your wife",

Tushar dropped his files and turned around shockingly.

"hurry tushar, prem will be waiting", replied Heer

Tushar gulped and came towards Heer and put the Sindoor on Gloomingly. She said thanks and left the room.

Heer came into Gayatri and Corp….

Promo: Prem says I LOVE YOU

Short update but next update will have many Heer and Prem parts..As u can see by the Promo..but for a good update u will have to wait..I am really busy nowadays so it is hard for me to update..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG that was such a gud update can't wait for the heer nad prem scene!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'm starting to feel really sorry for Tushar now, poor guy!! Anyway, great update, keep up the good work!! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heeyy. awwhhhss poor Prem, Heer and Tushar.. lovely update. Can't wait for your next update! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice update. next part seems interesting,,, update soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow what an update...cant wait for the next...

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