Missing prem heer scene - One Shot

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Kiran

@kimmu

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Not a writer? Pshaaaa!! It was brilliant... and yea so true, that last scene between Premeer really was missing something. You so filled it in... Amazing job writing it down. The feelings really fit in nicely, actually everything fit in so perfectly! Seriously, amazing job! I loved the whole thing... If only it really happened. 😍

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DGill28

@DGill28

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Fatima!!!! Wow...that was amazing. The scene was described so well and it was very interesting. You're an really great writer!!👏

-Deepika

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sshekar

@sshekar

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: fj08

aaaawww thanks for the complement Smita, i think i will leave the FF writing to you......and yes this did happen, hopefully we will see it onscreen too....... just believe in it 😊

no problem! u deserve it! sure it did and when prem comes back, we'll see this on screen too...ooooh....can't wait...😉

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Sonali

@sonali09

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

hey fatima....that was just toooooooo good!👏 👏 👏brilliantly wriiten!!!👏 you are an amazing writer yaar...truely gifted!

luv sonali

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Lady_Impala

@Lady_Impala

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

kaash ke aisa kuch ho jaata.great one shot.hopefully they bring back harshad as prem.bas prem comes back.

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fj08

@fj08

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: heer hann

ahem ahem caugh caugh lol!too good i was eating cookie n u made me caughed uff!hehe loved it!

what exactly in the shot make you cough??? glad u still enjoyed it :)

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fj08

@fj08

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra
Woowww, such a lovely premeer scene, you are a great writer- u should write an ff!! If only this really happened between Prem and Heer, I would have loved watching it ☺️ (I know,m I am becoming more besharam everyday- all Prem's fault, lol!! 😆) anyway, great scene, and you desribed it so beautifully!! xx

thanks, i guess we can afford to become besharam in the forum at least it is all in r heads....and we can blame prem and heers awesome chemistry for it

hey i just noticed ur name, i really like the name, and specially bcos its spelled Zahra, not zara....or are u still called zara?

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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

awesome shot... u write really beautifully, any plans on writing a short story?👏😊

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#29

really something was missing but u had filled it with ur shot 👏that was tooooooooo good must say u should start a FF/contineu to write 1shots😳give us lots of pleasure Thanks alot Fatema Di(Hope i can call u Di)TakeCare

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fj08

@fj08

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: kimmu
Not a writer? Pshaaaa!! It was brilliant... and yea so true, that last scene between Premeer really was missing something. You so filled it in... Amazing job writing it down. The feelings really fit in nicely, actually everything fit in so perfectly! Seriously, amazing job! I loved the whole thing... If only it really happened. 😍

come on, i just told u it happened, then to make sure everyone understood i wrote down exactly what happened please no more 'if only',

believe it did happen, where s everyones belief??

they will also show it to us as surely as prem will come back :)

but thanks for the lovely comments