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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey additi dear sorry for my late reply yaar
pls mujhe maaf kardo.........😭...
i was really busy in writing my FF..i thought of posting it by nite so i am writing it fast yaar..extrememly sorry
coming to ur charcters of the show..sooo beautiful sketch..👏,,,,loved every one introduction...
seems to be something different yaar...Prem is waiting for his heer i mean soulmate...pata nahi kasie mileghi
its really awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yaar👏
waiting for the first part yaar😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushka10

Hey additi dear sorry for my late reply yaar
pls mujhe maaf kardo.........😭...
i was really busy in writing my FF..i thought of posting it by nite so i am writing it fast yaar..extrememly sorry
coming to ur charcters of the show..sooo beautiful sketch..👏,,,,loved every one introduction...
seems to be something different yaar...Prem is waiting for his heer i mean soulmate...pata nahi kasie mileghi
its really awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yaar👏
waiting for the first part yaar😍

😳thx for ur comment di!😆god bless u for commenting on my ff!😆and di u r gona update tonight!😲hope i will get a chance to read it in nigh but i dunno i can read it or not😭i can just read it tomorrow after school!😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: heer hann

😳thx for ur comment di!😆god bless u for commenting on my ff!😆and di u r gona update tonight!😲hope i will get a chance to read it in nigh but i dunno i can read it or not😭i can just read it tomorrow after school!😭


god bless u 4 commenting😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: 12345xxx


god bless u 4 commenting😆

this is for u lolo di🤣
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: heer hann

this is for u lolo di🤣

whats 4 me lala?😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: 12345xxx

whats 4 me lala?😆

😭😭😭need more ppls😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: heer hann

😭😭😭need more ppls😭

they will be repling when u update 1 st part.........so dont worry😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: 12345xxx

they will be repling when u update 1 st part.........so dont worry😊

again u ask me to update!😆i will update it tomorrow😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi everyone!Thx for all ur comments and supports thats really makes me feel like heavenKeep supporting me friends thx alot again!Here is my first update hope it will reach ur expectation.
Pyaar zindag hai Part 1!
Back ground voice=A busy city,Mumbai.Many peoples,less job.Everyone finding for a job.Everyone finding money.Theres no place of love and peace just money money money!Here is a girl Heer Gupta!Finding for a job but never get any response from her interviwes.She is really tired of her life.But who knows the destiny who knows whats the futher was waiting for her!
A quite night
Here was a girl who was totally depressed!Her wide and beautiful eyes was full of questions???Why this always happens to her why she never find a job???Her long and beautiful hair was open and covering her face!Slowly the wind play with her hair n show us her beautiful face!She was our one and only Heer Gupta.
Heer yelled=Why this always happen to me???huh what i did???What i asked u god i just want a job and give all the happiness to my family thats it!whats the problem god?why r u so not fair!Just a job not a palace?!?!?!?
Who knows what was waiting for Heer a prince charming!!!
A car came from the back and all the mud goes to Heer's dress
Heer yelled=Hey are u blind what u think!U have a car dosen't mean we r not human come out u rich ppl!
Slowly the car move backword and stop in front of Heer a handsome guy came out from the car He was tall and handsome!His blue eyes!Uff!Heer was also quite shocked that was she dreaming?Such a handsome guy!Oh my!It was our one and only Prem Juneja!
Prem=Excuse me,I m really sorry i didn't mean it I m extreamly sorry.
Heer=oh yes sorry!I know u rich ppls u do it in porpose it is fun for u to play with middle class ppls like us!
Prem=Plz don't take me wrong all rich ppls r not like that plz forgive me i m really sorry!
Heer=Whatever rich ppls always play with middle class peoples and say sorry i know its all rich ppls habit no need to say sorry i m going bye!
Prem=wait....wait.......... whats ur name i m really sorry hello?wait......
Heer just ran away in full angry!She just hate rich ppls!Than she reach her home.A cute and beautiful girl came and gave a warm hug to Heer and Heer give a hug to her back!She was our one and only Ridhima Gupta!
Ridhima=Di where was u???We all was so worried!Why was u so late!
Before Heer could say anything her mother also came to Heer
Teji=Yes bete where was u we all was so worried!
Heer=Mom u know the reason as usual i again can't find a job!
Than Balraj enter the scence
Balraj=Will u talk all the things in the door or let our daughter to come in???LOL
Three girls=Yes yes we r coming!
Balraj thinks to himself=Kya kismat hai pure ghar mai larkiyo ka hokum!lol!
They all move to the sofa.
Teji=Heer bete don't wrory and why u want a job u r a girl not a boy don't worry about money dear.
Heer=But mom i want to take all the responsibility but god dont want huh!(angry)
Balraj=daughter I m sure god had decided some thing specciall for u!u know sabar ka phal metha hota hain.(sorry bad hindi)
Ridhima=Oh my when is this family scence gona be finish i m getting hungry mom!
They all burst into laughter!
Prem's Home
Prem just entered the home thinking of that girl who was she n why she was behaiving like that!I know!Why the hell rich ppls be so mean to middle class ppls but she should also understand all rich ppls r not like that but she seems quite sad but why the hell she throw all her angry to me!Prem dear bad luck!
Preet enter the scence
Preet=Hey pb whats up???
Prem=Nothing yaar!
Preet=Bro u know u can't hide anything from me than why u give ur stupid try?(giggles)
Prem=Ok ok i accept i can't hide anything from u but don't make fun of me dear!
Preet=ok baba but tell me what happened to my pb?
Prem=what to tell dear i meet a girl(before prem can continue preet cut him n start......)
Preet=Bro!A girl!how was she r u interested on her wow bro i didn't knew u have interest on girls!wow!
Prem=(angry)Shut up!Why u think everyone is like u my bro let me continue................................
Preet=oh!bro u r again emotional u will never change bro!
Prem=same to u!
They both giggles and Gayatri enter....
Gayatri=Wow my both sons what is so funny???
Prem=nothing mom just making some funs
Gayatri=ok beta go n freash up we need to have dinner quick prem.
Prem=ok mom
Gayatri=also u preet go n wash ur hand don't just eat ur dinner without washing ur hands its so discusting!
Preet=MOM!
Gayatri=(giggles)
Dinning Table
Everyone was ready sitting in their sits than taklu lallu enter(LOL)
Lalit=wow gulab jawan!yummy!
Gayatri=Shut up!u won't have any gulab jawan its for my two handsome sons!
Preet=yes dad its just for handsome boys not for taklu!
Lallu=Preet!u will never change today i will take my revenge from u!in any course!
Preet said while running=whatever u always say that but u never catch me hahaha!
Gayatri and prem were laughing at them what a dad and son!
Prem=mom lets eat their fight is never gona be finish!
Gayatri=Ok beta(while laughing)
^_^ ^_^ ^_^
Hi friends!How was it?Hope it reach ur expectations!Plz Plz Plz leave ur thoughs about the udpate as i told ur comments make me feel like heaven(lol)so plz comment plz plz plz!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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1st to reply 👏

it was great. plzz contiue. i see that even you have a double"d" in your name. is it something given by your parents or you have added it😉

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