FF- ETERNAL LOVE-upd part 25 on page92 10th feb - Page 49

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Posted: 16 years ago
Vandana,
Aww that's ok dear if you couldn't PM..no probs...it would be tiring after coming back from a long trip.

PH scene was hot ! ...Urgh Veera the spoilsport...but knowing her nature, it's no surprise..Heer has a hard time now trying to balance all the relationships in her sasural....but I'm sure Prem will be supportive to her and together, they can handle it.

Look forward to the next part.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fijiana

hey vandana first of all awesome update,loved how you potray prem.he is the perfect husband.and yes please continue with the ff,hopefully nothing of the sort of what heer is thinking doesnt happen.i mean trully.is veera ki bachi ki toh mein??????????cant wait to see how she reactswhen she finds out about rr and heers engagement in the show.(waah heer waah shayad issiliye apne meri shaadi rishab se rukwa di thi,kyunki uspar aapki nazar pad gayee,ar hogi kyun nahi ab toh woh hum se bhi ameerjo tha)sach she will say something along this line but usse chodo.you do update soon.

hey marica....
thanx a lot for replying....
it feels great to see your replies....glad that you liked the update...
so how was your new year....hope you had a gala time....
our prem is the perfect prem....there's no other way to portray him....
what kind of treatment heer gets from the family is yet to be seen...
will update asap....
love
vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: miss_hyper

2 good and about the ff u have to continue it

hello miss...(sorry to call you like that but i still don't know your name..)
thanx a lot for replying....
love
vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: madz786

hey iv been a silent reader of ur ff for ages n i lve dis ff so plzzzzz dnt stp writtin n fab ort hpe u cont soon
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madz
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hey madz....
it's great to see a silent reader leaving a reply...😃😃😃
glad that you like the ff....
will update asap..
love
vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: amanaranjan

hi vandana dii

omg im gonna kill veera
who on earth does she think she is
stupid girl!!!....*giving muderous look*
and the prem heer scene
di u did a fantastic job
i was smiling sillyly the whole type
omg it was awesome
gr8 job di
cant wait to read more
and pls do something about that crazy mad veera
Amana

hey amana...
you too... want to kill veera.... go ahead do it.....😆😆
well so i did do a good job with the premeer scene...😊
thanx a lot for appreciating it.....
why were you smiling???...was it funny😲
yaa.... i know that i have to do something about that mad soul veera......but before i do that a lot of other things need to be sorted out... i guess it will take some time....
love
vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fj08

hi vandana

sorry have been enjoying reading updates but couldnt comment, will try to post a comment even if its small,
so where r u planning on taking the FF from here?
tc
fatima

hey fatima...
great to see you back...😊
wishing you a very happy new year.....
well i do have a few tracks in my mind... but i still have to decide which one to choose.....for now... it'll be only premeer...i've deprived of their scenes in the show....i want to fulfill my desires in the ff...😉😉
love
vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow an awsoem update!
i want to kill veera for again putting doubts in heer's mind abt the family accepting her!
lets hpe that heer does not do anything drastic again!
continue soon pls!
loved the romance between the newly weds!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Magpie_07

Vandana,
Aww that's ok dear if you couldn't PM..no probs...it would be tiring after coming back from a long trip.

PH scene was hot ! ...Urgh Veera the spoilsport...but knowing her nature, it's no surprise..Heer has a hard time now trying to balance all the relationships in her sasural....but I'm sure Prem will be supportive to her and together, they can handle it.

Look forward to the next part.

hey maggie...
so you're the first person who called that premeer scene hot😆😆😆
so what happens now with heer in juneja house is something to be seen....sach main... i at times feel how can prem adore veera so much.....she really gets on to my nerves....
will update the next part asap.....
love
vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: chillingal16

wow an awsoem update!

i want to kill veera for again putting doubts in heer's mind abt the family accepting her!
lets hpe that heer does not do anything drastic again!
continue soon pls!
loved the romance between the newly weds!

hey chiilingal...
thanx a lot for leaving a reply....
glad that you liked the update....
what heer has in store for her will be clear in the next update....
love
vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago
'kay guys.... there's no sign of prem in the show....😭😭.... prem ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai😭😭
prem plzzzz come back..... we all are missing your warmth 😉 and compassion😳... so here goes the next part.... hope you guys like it....

part 21

kaun tthhaa....asked prem as he came out of the washroom wiping his wet hair with his palms......
heer would've been lost in her thoughts on what veera had just told her had the sight infront of her not made her freeze in her spot.........
....... there was he.....just out of the washroom......just in a towel which he had tucked loosely around his lower waist giving her the full view of his almost wet torso......
heer could not help herself from admiring his perfectly chiselled body......he resembled a greek god ....his perfect abs....his broad chest...water dripping down his chest and neck........
prem noticed her checking him out.....and clicked his fingers infront of her........what happened heer???........get used to this sight.....it's going to be an everyday affair from now on......prem said this with a glint of naughtiness in his eyes which made heer blush and lower her eyelashes shyly.....before he could do anything else ...... she spoke up....maaa is calling you downstairs for pooja........
oh yes........ i better get going...... or i will be late......said prem and hurriedly got dressed in the white kurta pyjama that heer had laid out for him......heer felt something amiss as she saw prem leave without her for the pooja............
she was about to cry as a new realisation dawned upon her that maybe she was going to have a hard time trying to win back the love of her family.....when a sudden urge to throw up gripped her and she rushed to the washroom......
as she came out of the washroom wiping her face..... she bumped in prem who had a worried look on his face waiting outside for her.....what happened heer..... if you're not feeling well..... just lie down.....
as prem helped heer to the bed and made her sit on it..... she saw g.mom enter the room with the pooja thaali in her hands.....heer got up to touch her feet.....g.mom blessed her and told her.....bas beta..... this is the last time you're doing it..... not anymore.... from now on i don't want to see you bending down... okay.....here take the prasad.....
beta you must be wondering why i didn't call you downstairs for the pooja......if you look practically then it should have been you ....... the eldest daughter-in-law of the family doing it....but i refrained you from doing so......as the pooja room is downstairs and i didn't want you to use the stairs today..... why today..... i don't want you to use them till you are fully well....till then i would like you to stay in bed.... take full rest.....avoiding walking around much...till the doctor says that you're absolutely fine.....heer.... becoming a mother is no joke.....utmost care needs to be taken.....you have a life breathing inside you which needs a lot of love and care... which we'll give him through you....
as g.mom said these words..... heer found herself hugging her with happiness .... all her inhibitions were gone.....how wrong she had been in judging her own family.....and misunderstanding them.....
as for now.... from today onwards we all are going to have breakfast in your room till you can join us downstairs....and as she finished heer saw kuldi and meher entering with the breakfast along with the others.....
maaaamiiiiiii...... tanu almost flung herself at heer and before heer could pick her up in her arms and peck her cheeks....prem came in between and picked up tanu.....and whispered in her ears....heer you should be careful.....you know naaa....you're not suppose to lift anything heavy.....sorry prem..... said heer smilingly....and gently pecked tanu on her cheeks who was still in prem's arms.....
seeing her kiss tanu.... prem naughtily signed towards his cheeks to heer..... who in turn pinched him in his arms,,,, in a denial.... all these not being missed a bit by preet who was watching all this while standing at the door.....
bhai... why are you making signs.....
signs??....... for what........inquired g.mom.....
prem got startled as he saw his mother approach towards them with a plate full of nutritous breakfast for heer.....nothing maaa...... nothing..... preet is just......
preet smirked as he saw his brother going red in his cheeks with the fear of being caught by their mom.....ans winked at his dear bhabhi as he settled down for breakfast with the others.....
as preet finished his breakfast and was leaving.... prem signalled him to stay back.....and told him to get ready for office......
pb..... you'll go to office today??..... i think you should be spending the day with bhabhi......... yes preet i'll definitely spend the day with her.....i'll be back in an hour or so.... you get ready... we'lll leave in 10 mins.....said prem ....
as preet left prem turned towards heer who had become a bit sad on hearing this.....kya hua heer.....i'll be back..... just before lunch.... promise... it's just some urgent work that needs my immediate attention.....
saying this he gave heer her medicines and checked her temperature.....seeing that it was normal.... he made her lie down and quickly got ready for office....and left leaving a quick peck on her pink lips.......
they both drove to their office in silence... as preet could sense that there was something serious that prem wanted to discuss......
as prem sat down in his cabin..... the first word that he uttered was...... risabh rampal.......preet i'm going to destroy him....no police or anything.....but the way we want....he's gonna die a slow death....a very slow and painful death.... i would've forgiven him for whatever he has done to me..... but..... he meddled with heer.....which is unforgiveable...... and now he's gonna pay for it dearly.....
preet nodded at his brother in approval and then both the brothers got together to devise a plan to make rr suffer the first blow to his ultimate destruction......
'kay that was it.... i don't know whether you people will like it or not... but i'll still wait for your comments...
love
vandana

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