FF- ETERNAL LOVE-upd part 25 on page92 10th feb - Page 23

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Posted: 16 years ago
will be waitinggggggggggg for da update asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi!!!!
welcome to my ff.
glad that you liked it.
enjoy reading...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: premeer92

noooooooooooooo....please bring heer back with prem...i cant see that rr in a way.....

ur ff is awesome baby.....heer and prem all the way!!!!!!!! do something with rr,..i cant stand that human....do something...lol..
i like ur work..its awesome!!!!

hey premeer 92
i guess this is your first reply......well thanx a lot for the reply....
heer will definitely be back with prem... just a few updates more.....and plzzz don't call rr human..... he's an animal atleast in my ff.....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rag-ran4ever

omg why did u stop there anyways great update that was so great i want prem to cme and save heer frm that RR😡

hey amna
thanx a lot for the comment
well i'm sorry that i had to stop here..... kaan pakding...but i had to coz there's a huge shock for everyone in the next update and the continuity had to be maintained...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

will be waitinggggggggggg for da update asap.

hey swati
the next update will be on monday morning..... promise
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: riks1

hey amna
thanx a lot for the comment
well i'm sorry that i had to stop here..... kaan pakding...but i had to coz there's a huge shock for everyone in the next update and the continuity had to be maintained...
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vandana

😲😲😲 Shock???? ok well i guess...... lol btw whats ur name???? /
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Posted: 16 years ago
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzz with long part asap waitinggggggggg
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: riks1

hey thanx a lot priyo
i'm very glad that you liked the update.... but prem doesn't know the full truth...... he just knows about heer's pregnancy...... par ek baat pakki hai.... woh rr ka band bajaa dega.... wait till monday..
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hey! vandana..achche se bajana band us rr ka, if u need I can supply the equipments,,,,😆😆
and prem ke bheje mein yeh bat ghusni chahiye that its his baby...😳
evn I got confused with those flowers and bees😆 but I guess mothers know everything...when I your update suddenly I remembered one of my aunty who did exactly like this to her daughter and seriously she was Pregnant...and we all were happy and shocked at the same time...😲😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
well here i am with part 14........ first things first.... i have no words to express the grief because of the recent mumbai blasts.....although i live in india but have never been to mumbai....i still feel that the people out there have suffered a lot.....enough is enough... all this should be put to a stop.... i know that it's easy saying than doing... my condolences to all who have lost their loved ones and i salute all the martyrs who laid their lives to relieve the city of this fear.....
part 14
prem fell on the ground......... heer was pregnant...pregnant with his child..... their child........he could not suppress his joy and started crying with happiness.... he just hugged his mother......it was as if he had got a new life instigated in him....... a new reason to fight ...... a new reason to live........ a new reason to bring back heer in his life.....
as heer sat in the car the first thing that she did was to switch off her phone so that prem would not be able to contact her....i'll change the number tomorrow itself... thought heer..... once at rr's house she quickly went up to her room so that no one noticed that she had been missing for some time...
as rr and his mom returned from the wedding, mrs. rampal's thoughts were drifted towards heer...... and she made up her mind to speak to rr about it as soon as they reached home.......
as rr retired to his room...... he heard the door close behind him and saw his mother.... what happened maaa...... you want to say something??? mrs.rampal told her son exactly what was going on in her mind.....
on hearing what his mother wanted all rr could say was that even he wanted his and heer's marriage to be legalised as prem was free now and he would leave no stone unturned to get back heer,...... and if heer was legally married to him then prem wouldn't stand a chance.....
heer fell as if someone had pulled the earth under her feet....... she was not married to rr!!!!!!!! all this was a fraud...... she had been cheated!!!! she was still prem's.......... had it not been for her health than she would have never heard the conversation between the mother and son!
flash back
on returning from prem's hotel heer had gone straight to her room and was lost in the thoughts of the evenings events....... had g.mom. guessed about the truth of her pregnancy..... she looked at herself carefullyin the mirror.....had she started showing... wasn't it too early....she brushed off the idea coz according to her maybe the glow on her face showed off the truth but not the whole truth.... she would never know the truth unless she discussed it with prem.... for it would take no time for prem to guess the whole truth about her pregnancy.... because he knew her too well...... she would rather die than let anyone else touch her........
she did not realise when she drifted off to sleep while lying on the couch...... and was woken up because of her sudden urge to throw up.......... as she cleaned herself in the washroom....... she felt a bit dizzy...... her whole body was aching and she did not even have the strenghth to stand straight.....
holding on to the walls she somehow mangaged to sit on the bed......i need to see the doctor tomorrow...... this whole sickness is giving me a hard time.... god only knows when i will get rid of this morning sickness.... why the hell do they call it morning sickness.... when the whole puking business had nothing to do with mornings...... it happened all the time..... and with her.... almost whenever she ate anything...... she was not able to digest anything..... whatever she ate was thrown out.... god only knew how would she be able to feed the little one inside her...when she herself was unable to have anything..... the sudden thought of food made her realise how hungry she was and that she had not eaten anything since afternoon..... she did not have the strenghth to go down and eat something.... her sudden thoughts drifted to the bar just outside rr's room which had a well stocked fridge...... hoping to find something edible there heer had just tiptoed to rr's room when she had overheard the conversation in the room
flashback ends
heer almost ran back to her room........
here prem had been frantically trying to call heer all evening...... but no success....her phone was switched off......he wanted to share the joy with her..... to make her believe that he was there for her........ he knew the reason of her strange behaviour and no matter what they would overcome all the obstacles and be one again........ and this time forever......
as he entered the room.... his eyes fell on the bed and a smile played on his lips.... it was on this very bed that he had spent his life's most cherished moment with heer..... and where the symbol of their love had been conceived......... he would have been lost in her thoughts had the ringing of the phone not interrupted him....as he saw heer's name flashing on the phone..... he quickly recieved the call.......hello..... heer....
hello... hello.... prem.... it was heer crying.....prem's heart started pounding heavily......what had happened which had made heer cry????
before he could say anything.... she spoke up and told him everything...... how she had made the deal with rr..... how she had fainted just before the wedding....whatever she had heard from rr's mom..... how rr had treated her,..... everything...... but before she could finish he heard rr's voice over the phone....
so prem...... you know the truth now........i guess now you'll want her to take away from me.....hai naa prem..... guess what till now i really had no interest in heer...... but suddenly she appears to be pretty tempting to me..... till date she was untouched... all pure.... all yours..... but now i feel it's better that i make her aware of another man's touch....... so that she exactly knows what to choose.... you know to make the right choice.... well even you r not married to her..... nor am i......you have spent some quality time with her and so will i do today..... to make heer's task easier.....all this while he had heer's mouth tightly secured with his right hand...... and his grip was becoming tighter on her which made her groan in pain........and poor heer.....she's so helpless today......see she's pregnant..... she has fever.....she doesn't even have the strenghth to stand....... how will she protest.......who'll save her.....today she'll pay heavily for her wrongs......and you'll not be able to do anything about it....... well prem..... you did not include me in your special time with heer...... but i will...... i'm not disconnecting the phone.... so that you can listen to her .... hear her destruction.......
before prem could react or say anything all that he heard was heer shouting!!!!!
PREM!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!NAHI!di i m too scared!What a scary surprise!AHHHHHHHHH!Prem plz come to safe ur heer!Di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Update soon!N dont give scary surprise!

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