FF khel khel mein....RECAP page 63 27/1/2011 :) - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
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first of all congratulations!!! on 100% for ur internal. 😃

thank you for the update...poor heer her room and clothes now i'm wondering wht the masterstroke is...u ended this part at a place where i'm sure everyone is dying to know wht happens next??

i really want to know heer's reaction when she comes to know th senior is her prem....

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey!!! cliff hanger!!!! now i really wonder wat has happened.....im soooo eager to know it..n will have to wait 4 it*pouted face*...he he he...its k yaar..will wait...it was a great update..and they changed heer's room...lolzzz
congrats!!! glad that u got 100%
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey this part was really interesting and funny, please update soon, waiting for the next part......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice long n very good loved it!and the last part was quite funny!lol!one two three action!hahahahaha!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi, it was awesome. i m eagerly waiting 4 new part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi guys....hope you all are fine...Well sorry for posting this part late, I know many of you are ready with a cliffhanger for me, but These exams are really bulling me...so I hope you'll bear with me...This part is neither long nor short and I have not read it after typing it, so there are possibilites of errors and even this plot may be not so interesting...but I hope you'll like this part..

Again thanks a lot to...Intellienough,PH4EVR,vrinda,Thapanee,sweta,ash,kis desh Rocks!,heer hann,haala for showering your lovely comments and suggestions. I hope you people will enjoy this part and I am really sorry I could not reply to all members individually...please dont mind, I really want to but rite now....u know it...

anywayz...here's what happens next...

PART-13

As Teji and Prem reached the living room area to check why Heer yelled,they got the shock of their life and stood wide eyed.There stood Heer fully drenched from head to toe in something really sticky...her hair was the main victim of that substance...
She stood there in shock unaware of the substance that fell on her.Everyone present at the house gathered around her. Teji and Prem did not have any words to speak, the one who spoke was Ritika...
"Yeh kya hua???how did this happen?"
"I can explain", mumbled Preet who had a small bucket in his right hand and apple on his left, he continued.." actually I was up walking up there, and she was in this ground floor walking towards the kitchen and my shoes were not tied properly I stumbled and this fell from up on her...",he grinned uncomfortably,but Prem could bet that it was some act.He looked at Heer whose eyes have welled up and face has turned red due to anger.
"But kya giraya uspe tumne?", Balraaj asked.
"ummm.... Varnish."Preet quickly mumbled and Heer reacted now, he held him by his collar and shouted like a maniac
"What this, sticky, ugly substance you threw on me is Varnish? what condition did you put me in, do you have any idea???"
"I am sorry Heer..."
"Sorry se kam chalega kya bhai?", Veera spoke up, "just look what have you done, specially to her hair" Prem stood shocked, everyone knew about the plan, except he and Teji. The last comment about her hair made Heer alarmed tears pricked out of her eyes as she spoke,"agar mere baalo ko kuch bhi huya, I'll not spare you Mr.junior",She concluded angrily.
"Listen Heer, I am extremely sorry, but I can help.Please spare with me 5-6 hours and I promise nothing will happen to your hair"
"Beta, are you sure nothing will happen to her hair",Teji at last spoke out, finally finding her voice.
"Yes aunty, not to worry...Veera please will you assist me?"
"Sure bhai."
"Then come with me" and they took Heer with them.

Now, Prem here was really very upset and angry, how could they stoop so low. What did they get throwing Varnish on her.He angrily spoke to Ritika
"This was your master stroke Ritti, this?"
"Bhaiya woh..."
"Kya woh? what did you people do to her, it is such a dirty plan. Everyone know,it is pretty difficult to remove varnish from human skin and you people poured it on her hair..shame on you."
"But listen..."
"No Prem beta, dont listen to her, scold her..meri mano to laga do do haath",Teji spoke up frustrated.
"Badi ma, please..."
"no...I dont want any explainations"
"At least listen to what she has to say" Ash pleaded
"Even you Ash?" Prem spoke up."You know how dirty plan she made,yet you are supporting her?"
"Bhaiya, I did not do anything wrong..."
"How can you even say it?"
"Kyunki that material is not VARNISH", Ritika shouted,and then huffed satisfied with the shocked look on Prem's and Teji's face, which meant they at last heard her.

"that's not Varnish?", Teji asked. and Ritika nodded her head.
"That what's it?", Prem asked confused
"Even I dont know", Ritika grinned.
"What does that mean?"
"Well...you know how I love to pull pran on people, so once I came up with an Idea of preparing artificial Varnish, which I can use to trouble people and asked one of my friend eho is a science genius is that possible, he said it is and he prepared this stuff for me...and I kept it handy, its not harmful at all,I have myself used it over me. "
"Yes Prem, it like some shampoo thing", Ash assured him.
"I am sorry bhaiya", Ritika mumbled, Prem realized that she's still afraid that he'll shout on her and therefore he gave her a light hug assuring its ok.
"Kisiko khana nahi khana kya, we are getting late for the rehersals",Karan came out of the kichen with a tray full of food.
"Jana to hai, but Heer?"Prem questioned.
"We'll come back and see to her, she's ok bro" Karana assured him.

All of them sat for breakfast and then headed for the rehersals.



After the stressed long day of Rehersals the Junejas and the Manns returned back as it was their seond last day for rehersing and as Heer,Preet and Veera were Absent in the venue the things were more hectic than usual. All of them once entered the Mann house drowned themselves to the sofa with a huff...
"One more day and we are done",Karan spoke up.
"You bet, the days went so fast, I'll miss every bit of it", Ash said.
"O you all are back?" Balraaj exclaimed as he entered the hall.
"Ha bhaiya, and you know what, all tickets have been sold and everyone's talking about our show, the day after tomorrow", Arjun sounded like a small kid and all of them laughed.
Teji came to the hall with a tray full of bowls filled with kheer and handed to each one of them, Prem took his bowl and asked
"Where Pr...I mean Junior?"
"Tada..I am here..."Preet showed from nowhere with a slightly bigger bowl of kheer in his hand.
"Where's Veera?"
"She's with Heer..."
"Where's Heer?"
"She's with Veera"
"WHERE ARE BOTH?"
"both are in there.", he pointed to a room.
"Doing what?"
"You'll see..."
"and what did you do?"
"you'll see that even, maine to apna kaam kar diya, now final touches are going on"
Prem looked at him confused, while Veera came out of the room with a big grin on her face.
"What happened?" Ritika questioned, in answer veera winked at her and gave her a thumbs up.Ritika's eyes widened in shock and then she spoke...
"Really?"
"Really."
"Where's she?"
"Ladies and Gentleman here I introduce you to a coal which turned into a diamond today,Miss Heer Mann." and she turned to the door and spoke up.
"Heer, come out...hey come out"

There from the door came out Heer and here in the hall everybody stood up in shock,surprise and happiness.Heer was in a pale green frock which stoped at her midthighs and dark brown leggings to go with it. Her hair was of the same length as before but it now has the laser cut effect and a tint of copper brown. Her eyebrows done perfectly to the curve that suits her face. Her face didn't have much makeup just kajal for the eyes and pink gloss on her lips. She was wearing big green stone studs in her ears and her hand had a green banded chunk wristwatch.She came up to the living room very slowly, concious and nervous and everyone in the living room burst out clapping and whistling except Prem, Heer and Balraaj. Balraaj and Teji's eyes welled up seeing her daughter's new look or to be precise her daughter's hidden look.Teji and Ritika ran towards her and gave her a big hug,happy and emotional at the same time.
Prem was standing there dumbfounded. He knew she was beautiful, but to this extent? He never knew that. He cursed himself as he's the one for whom she hid her beauty.

As everyone stopped clapping,Prem started clapping in a slower tempo and walking towards her.Heer looked at him with confusion and frown on her face as she knew he wll surely taunt her.As he reached to her, he extended his hand towards her.
"Hey I am PJ senior and you?"
"Heer Mann" she spoke up confused and extended her hand to meet his hand.He bent towards her hand and kissed it lightly to everyone's pleasantery and Heer's shock
"You look beautiful.", Heer stood there shocked, trying to digest what she heard from this man's mouth,while he continued "Treat from my side, where do you want to go?", Heer was now confused and shocked like anything and before she could speak up, Tanu yelled.
"Park main jo chat stall hai waha jana hai..."
Heer and Prem looked at Tanu. Everyone supported her idea including Prem.
"Fine you people start moving out"
As everyone started moving out, Prem extended his arm towards Heer
"Shall we?"
Heer, who could not make out head or tail of sudden change in Senior's mood could not decide what to do, she looked at her mother who assured her to go with him with a smie... unwillingly tucked her arm around his arm and both of them headed towards the park without any word.



so how was it???? be brutally honest, if possible(now I am dead, I know😆)

with lots of love
Priyadarshini aka Priyo😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitiggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice update,, so finally they completely changed her,,, to a girl.. waiting for the next part, update soon,,,,
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Posted: 16 years ago

That was interesting.At first,i was like "varnish?why pouring varnish or its like over her head?" But due to that Heer agreed for a makeover to reveal her hidden beauty. Hope she carries it off further. I mean if she gets a second thought - there is a probability bcos Heer in your ff is very different & unpredictable in her mannerisms.

Waiting for Heer to realise PJ senior is her Prem.When is it cuming up?Plz spare some thought on her.She's heartbroken thinking Prem's engaged already when he's in front of her.Moreover I am eagerly waiting to read the romantic tale btw Premeer unfolding once everything is cleared.I am sure that's when Heer's hidden emotions towards Prem would be portrayed.
Keep up the good work.😊
By the way,how did ur exams go?If it's still going on,then,concentrate on that first.We can wait for ur update but no hurry if ur busy with ur exams.
Edited by vrinda16 - 16 years ago

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