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Posted: 16 years ago
#81

how great, hope they can follow a similar track in the show, will u be updating this again or was this the last part?? let us know

it was really good, all of it, thank u

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Posted: 16 years ago
#82
thank u so much guys..no I'll give another update or two,but I'm sorry again to disappoint u all..I know this update was lame even if it was lenghthy.Will try to give a good update but when.. I don't know.I'm sorry I couldn't PM u guys too..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
di
update was toooooooooo gooood
awesum

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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
awesome!!!!!!! luved the update!! toooo good yaar! plz continue soon
luv sonali
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
omg!.....prem aa gaya!!!. wonderful update....now i cant wait for the next update....lets see how prem and heer fall in love....all over again.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
hey di..
i've been thinking of reading ur ff ..but never gotthe time.nw i've read it all.
awsome di!! i realy liked it..
prem is back??yay!!
and plz dont stop wring di...plz..
update asap..n cud u pm me 2?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87

Hello guys,how is everyone doing?Sorry for being so late with my updates,I personally feel that this FF in particular is being dragged just like the real shows..I'll try my level best to give nice and interesting updates..as I said I'll finish this FF soon,because I'm not getting any ideas as to how I'll take this forward so hope u all understand.

I would also like to thank those who replied and appreciated the FF..u guys r too generous I must say..thank u very much for being with the FF and following it.Thank you!

Here goes the update😊


Harmann has sent all the papers and all are eagerly waiting back home for Heer and Prem to return.Heer has not left the hospital even for a minute because she has become so possesive of Prem.Prem on the other hand is very confused as to what is happening.How much ever Heer tries to tell him things of past,he is unable to recall those sweet moments.But he is confident that he'll be able to recall his lost memory and Heer too is hell bent on getting his memory back.


Though Prem has lost his memory it seems as though there is this invisible force which makes him attract towards this lady who has been with him since she has seen him.This too adds to his confidence.He is happy that he is not alone in this city and that he has one big family,whom he'll meet soon.

The day arrives for Heer and Prem to return home,Preet has taken few days leave..all possible because of Prem's friend who had given Preet job on Prem's recommendation.Prem,Heer,Preet and Ash arrive at home.All are so glad to meet them.Specially Lalit who just hugs his son and thanks god for being kind and making the impossible possible and also for returning his lost strength and lost support.Prem as usual is observing everyone and Heer is introducing everyone to him.The next first thing she does is,she takes Prem to Gayathri who has been affected the most.


Heer:Maa?(goes to Gaya3),maa..yeh dekhiye mein mere saath kisko lekar aayi hoon..

Gaya3 looks towards Heer and is so happy to see her Prem.She gets up from her bed with all her remaining strength and goes towards Heer and Prem.She starts caressing his cheeks and tears flow from her eyes


Gaya3:Mein jaanthi thi tu aayega,apne maa ke paas aayega,aur dekho tum yahan ho mere saamne sahi salamat(cries more..holds onto his kurta tightly..pats his cheeks)kahan chala gaya tha tu?huh?jaanta hai ki tere maa ki haalat kya thi??jaanta hai?ghar bilkul soona soona ho gaya tha..aayinda se aisa kiya na toh dekh mein kya karti hoon..(saying so she holds his ears..just as she had done during the cigar scene..and immediately unknowingly Prem puts his hands on his ears so as to say he is sorry..this gesture makes both Heer and Gaya3 happy..more than happy)


After awhile Prem thinks to himself as to what happened and why did he hold his ears to ask for forgiveness.Gaya3 is relieved and senses Prem's tiredness.She asks Heer to take Prem to his room so that he gets some rest,and asks Heer to be with him always and never to leave his sight.Heer agrees and takes Prem with her to his room.They reach his room,as soon as he enters his room he has this weird feeling which cannot be explained and stands at the door.Heer who is infront of him goes inside and senses that Prem is still at the door.She goes back to him and holds onto his arms and makes him come inside.Prem just stares at Heer and her holding onto his arms.


Heer:yeh hai tumhara kamra.mein jaanti hoon,tumhe thode din lagenge sab kuch yaad karne mein.Lekin tum phikar mat karo hum sab tumhare saath hain aur hum tumhe sab yaad dilayenge.Tum chinta mat karo,sirf aaram karo.teek hai(nodding her head).


Prem:I'm sorry..


Heer:(confused)sorry?sorry kyun keh rahe ho?


Prem:woh Preet bata raha tha ki kaise hamari shaadi honewali thi..aur..


Heer:(she has tears in her eyes but she doesn't allow herself to cry now)aur kuch bhi nahi,tumhe aaram ki zaroorat hai,yeh sab baatein hum baad mein kar sakte hain,tum vaapas aagaye ho wohi hum sabke liye kaafi hai.Aur kuch mat socho.

Prem:lekin(only to be stopped inbetween by Heer)


Heer:lekin wekin kuch nahi,meine kahana..hum baad mein baat karenge iss bare mein,Prem mein bahut kush hoon ki tum yahan ham sabke saath ho.Thanks.


Prem:Thanks?


Heer:laut ke aane ke liye thanks(smiles)


Prem gives a cute smile too,but he is helpless infront of his thoughts which haunt him.He didn't want to question Heer more,so he just gives her a smile.


Heer:ab mein chalti hoon,kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho,toh mujhe bula lena,teek hai


Prem:yeah


As Heer proceeds towards the door she feels something tugging to her dupatta,she stops and looks back slowly only to be realised that it's been stuck to the bed.She smiles to herself and tries to undo it.Prem comes to the rescue again,they both stare at each other forawhile and Prem gives her dupatta back.Heer leaves the room shyly.Prem walks to the window and stares at the doves which are sitting on a tree.

Sorry again guys,need to go and finish some pending work..will get back to the FF..whenever time permits..sorry for a short update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
thanks for the update, i guess everyone is running out of ideas abt bringing prem back and where to take the story from there but you did a great job getting us to prem, take some time i m sure u will figure out where u want to take this.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
hey di
awesum update
hope he get his memory soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
hey di...dat was a gr8 update..ur being too hard on yourself..and thanx 4 bringing prem bak..hope he gets his memory bak soon

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