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Posted: 15 years ago
JC its been a yr we were so concerrned tht wht the hell happend to u ???
this is my fav ff nd i hope u do justice darlingg plzz cont soon see we hv kept ur thread alive for a yrr

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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok i'm sooo sorry again...thank you so much for keeping this fanfic alive...you guys truly are the best....here is the last chapter of the fic....you guys gave me the inspiration i needed to complete this fic...i hope i didnt dissapoint....this part was hard to write bc kis desh has ended and i didnt have the same inspiration for it anymore...but i tried my best and i hope u guys like it...thank you again for hanging in there and waiting for so long....god bless all of you....
PART 37

Heer entered the front doors of her home, tired from school and practice. The senior showcase was just around the corner and things were getting hectic and falling into place at the same time. As for her dance, everything was going great…except for her concentration. She just couldn't keep Prem out of her mind and would mess up somehow or the other.

Heer heaved a heavy sigh…Prem…She missed him. He starting to remember…she could feel it. Now it was only a matter of time. She had full faith that he would return to her.

Heer entered the living and stopped when she noticed the whole family turn to her with a worried expression. A sinking feeling entered her chest before anyone said a word. She knew…Prem was gone.

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"Patha nahin yeh ladka kya soch raaha hai…aisa kaisa jah sakta hai woh?" A worried Lalit paced his bedroom while Gayatri sat on the sofa equally worried. When they woke up this morning Prem was nowhere to be seen. His duffle bag was gone and a simple note was left behind stating, 'I need some time to think'.

No one knew where he went, and everyone was worried about Heer's reaction when she found out. But when Balraj broke the news to her earlier, she didn't say much. Her only response was…'He'll be back soon.' And with that said she went into her room. She's been in her room ever since…no one knew what was in her mind. Meher went in to check on her, and said that Heer was acting normal…as if nothing happened. This behavior worried everybody.

"I'm worried about Heer." Gayatri stated, "She has so much faith in Prem…agar uska yeh vishwaas toota tho patha nahin woh kya kar behte gi."

A helpless Lalit simply looked on worried, for once not sure what to say.

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Prem entered the hotel room, about an hour away from Heer's house. He will be spending the next few nights here until he finally flew back to Canada. Many might call him a coward…or plain evil, for leaving so suddenly. But he couldn't take it anymore.

God knows he's tried his best to remember. But it simply wasn't coming back to him. Heer's love for him became too much, and so he made the rash decision to leave. Heer deserved someone who loved her just as much, not someone who couldn't even remember her.

He placed his duffle bag on the bed and walked to the window. He did the right…he did the right thing. Then why did he feel this emptiness in his chest? He rubbed a hand over his heart in an attempt to ease the uncomfortable feeling.

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"Hello ladies and gentlemen. As you can see behind me, the grand stage is set for St. Xavier college's senior showcase. St. Xavier is known for its prestigious reputation and this year, the showcase is being broadcasted in local channels to show the many talented students graduating this year. As the principal states, this is good opportunity for the students to be exposed to recruiters who are interested in their talents. Hopefully the senior class of 2010 lives up to all this anticipation. This is Megna Kapoor, Zeetv news." The reporter smiled into the camera and finished off her report as people settled down in their respective seats.

Amongst the audience were also the Mann's and Juneja's. It has been exactly 3 days since Prem left and they were slowly starting to lose hope. But that wasn't the case for Heer.

Backstage, Heer faced the mirror as she put on her earrings, finishing up her look for the showcase. She was dressed in a deep red ghagra choli, with her hair left loose to accent her face. Light jewelry adorned her ears, neck, and wrists. Her eyes seemed to pop more with the liner, and her skin looked like a porcelain dolls. She looked like a beautiful bride.

Everyone was wondering where Prem went, or whether he would comeback. What would happen to her if Prem didn't come back? How would she accept it? Would she be able to handle seeing Prem during Preet and Meher's wedding? All these questions were on every bodies mind, but not hers.

Call her crazy, but she knew Prem will come back. She just knew…So what if Prem didn't remember her. He still loved her. She felt it every time she was near him. The intensity of his love. He may not know it, but she knew…he still loved her.

And it was this love that will bring him back. She looked at herself in the mirror. She truly looked like a bride…Prem's bride. He will come back…

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The lights dimmed…the girl's took position…the beginning tunes of 'prem deewani bani' began. They slowly moved to reveal the lead dancer's back facing the audience.

Prem Meri Aankhon Mein Hain
Prem Meri Saason Mein Hain
Prem Mere Hoto Pe Hain
Prem Meri Baaton Mein Hain

Heer's eyes were revealed. She slowly turned to the audience, only showing her eyes, shining brightly. She felt the beats of the song, her breath singing out the song.

Bani Bani Bani Re Bani
Prem Deewani Bani
Ab Kya Kare Dil Deewana
Hai Ab Kya Kare Dil Deewana

She felt the song rush go through her…as if a part of her. Everything around her faded…it was only her and this feeling. She thought of Prem…and sang it out.

Lagi Lagi Lagi Re Lagi
Prem Ki Dhun Lagi
Ab Kya Kare Dil Deewana
Hai Ab Kya Kare Dil Deewana

Prem stopped the car at the red light. He felt uneasy in the hotel room and so came out for a drive for some fresh air. He didn't know his destination…he just drove. He felt a pull…like he should be somewhere…

Auron Ke Chehre Main Dekhun Chehra Jiska Jiska Jiska
Auron Ke Sang Jodti Hoon Main Naam Uska
Hoto Pe Maine Sajaya Hai Har Geet Jiska Jiska Jiska
Nas Nas Mein Meri Samaya Hai Pyaar Uska

Heer looked at the audience, looking for a certain face…not finding it. She then closed her eyes and his face appeared. A beautiful smiled automatically adorned her face and she felt immense love go through her veins.

Prem Mere Apnon Mein Hai
Prem Mere Sapnon Mein Hai
Prem Meri Palkon Mein Hai
Prem Meri Alkon Mein Hai

The audience couldn't take their eyes off of the lead dancer. She was poetry in motion. So much passion…so much obsession. This was a girl madly in love…

Saji Saji Saji Re Saji
Prem Ke Liye Saji
Ab Kya Kare Dil Deewana

She sang each word…with so much love. She was completely lost in its meaning. She was glowing in his love…from head to toe…she was glowing. This was her moment. She once told Ash when she found her love…she will dance her heart out…and the whole world will be witness to it. The whole world will see…ke Heer prem ki kitni deewani hai…

Kehna Hai Kehna Hai Kehna Hai Aaj Tujhse Tujhse Tujhse
Le Jana Le Jana Le Jana Mujhko Mujhse
Baithi Huvi Hoon Main Tere Liye Hai Kab Se Kab Se Kab Se
Tujhse Kahan Hain To Kehdoongi Main Ja Ke Sab Se

Prem's eyes caught sight of a tv on display at a store. And he was absolutely mesmerized by what it showed. He saw Heer, dancing with so much passion…there was a certain madness in her tonight. He closed his eyes in an attempt to break the spell she casted on him. This is why he left…he couldn't see her like this. Heer has given him so much love…and it hurts him that he can't give any back.

*FLASH!*

"Log madhir, mazjid, gurdhwara, aur church jaate hai rab se kuch maangne ke liye…pooja karne ke liye…lekin mein nahi karta….kyon karoon?...mera ibadat tho tum ho…jab bhi tumhe door se dektha hoon…aisa lagta hai zindigi ki saari kwaishe poori ho gayi…"

Prem frowned…that was his voice. He concentrated harder…he was holding Heer close as he said those words to her.

*FLASH!*

"Will you shut up and come here" Prem whispered softly. Heer let out a little sob before she launched herself in his arms. Heer looked in his chocolate brown eyes, "Looks like you were right..." and with that said she captured his lips with hers…and they shared their first kiss.

*FLASH!*

"Humari sagayi ki raat abhi bhi adhoori hai.." Prem then held out the khandani kangan in front of heer. Heer's breath catched as she watched it glisten in the moonlight.

"Tum meri tho ho chuki…lekin tum abb takh mere parivaar ka hissa nahin bani" Prem then slipped the kangan on heer's wrist. Heer looked down at the gorgeous piece of jewelry, holding so much tradition and history.

"Abb yeh raat adhoora nahin hai…" Prem ended softly.

Heer's eyes glistened with emotion as she launched herself in Prem's waiting arms. Prem gently kissed a tear away from heer's cheek before capturing her lips with his…sealing a promise with a kiss.

*FLASH!*

Prem's eyes widened in shock. Each memory seeping back into his mind one after another. He held his head in his hands…the moments overwhelming him.

"Kehte hai…ladki ke haathon mein uske pyaar ki mehndi ka rang tab tak nahin char tha…jab thak uske khoon mein uske pyaar ka asar na ho…lahoo mein jitni thapish hai…mehndi ka rang utna hi gehra char tha hai…sawal aab yeh nahin ke mein isse kitna pyaar karta hoon…sawal aab yeh hai ke hum dono ke pyaar mein kitni thapish hai…kitna junoon hai ke woh pyaar aab lahoo ban kar lahoo se zyaada gehra karega heer ki mehndi ko…" Prem answered, looking at Heer as their love rushed through her veins as it seeped into her mehndi.

*FLASH!*

She went into his waiting arms and sighed, "I'll miss you…" Heer softly whispered.

Prem placed a feathery soft kiss on her forehead before replying, "I'll miss you too…but I'll be back before you know it."

The honk of another car brought Prem back. He was breathing hard, his heart was racing, there were little droplets of sweat on his forehead. He felt a slight headache starting. He didn't know what came over him. But he pressed on the gas pedal and went towards his destination.

Prem Meri Dhadkan Mein Hain
Prem Meri Tadpan Mein Hain
Prem Mere Mann Mein Hain
Prem Mere Tan Mein Hain

'Prem'…Heer breathed out the word. 'Aaa jao Prem…aa jao. Mujhe aise adhoora mat chodna. Mein pagal ho jaungi Prem…Mujhe iss deewangi se bachao…mujhe iss deewangi se bachao…' Heer silently prayed.

She then felt it…that tingling sensation in her heart. Her eyes flew to the entrance and tears filled her eyes. He came back…

Chali Chali Chali Re Chali
Prem Se Milne Chali
Ab Kya Kare Dil Deewana
Hai Ab Kya Kare Dil Deewana

Prem rushed through the entrance of the auditorium and the first thing he did was meet Heer's eyes. For a moment all they saw where each other. And then Heer ran as fast as her feet can carry her…straight into her Prem's open arms. The audience broke out into applaud as they saw the lovers embrace. The Mann's and the Juneja's were all teary eyed, but they all had a huge smile on their faces.

Prem's eyes slightly filled as well and he tightly embraced Heer. Heer held on just as tightly, tears now rolling freely down her face.

Prem cupped Heer's face and wiped away her tears. "Sorry…kuch der ke liye bhool gaya tha…" Prem said in a husky voice, filled with emotion. Heer didn't say anything; she only pulled away and twirled around him, a big smile adorning her pretty face. She felt like she was flying…

Bani Bani Bani Re Bani
Prem Deewani Bani
Ab Kya Kare Dil Deewana
Hai Ab Kya Kare Dil Deewana

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*Late that night*

Heer looked out at the lake. There were two swans swimming lazily…yes…the one that left came back…and now they were together again. Heer smiled at the sight. She felt peace…after a long time she felt peace.

Her heartbeat then increased and she placed a hand on it…he was here…

Heer turned around to meet chocolate brown eyes…those same eyes that could look into her soul.

Prem and Heer simply looked at each other. No words were exchanged…there was no need for them. They slowly walked towards each other until only centimeters apart…not breaking eye contact.

Prem then entwined his fingers with Heer's and raised her hand to his lips, placing a gentle kiss right above her engagement ring. Heer sighed…and wrapped her arms around Prem's neck when he captured her lips. They were finally together…

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"Arre Jugni…tu kahan jaa rahi hai?" the lady asked Jugni, who was busy putting her belongings on the cart.

"Jahaan pyaar hota hai..wahaan Jugni hoti hai…" Jugni replied, "Ek pyaar kahani apni manzil payi…toh doosri shuru hogi…yehi tho zindagi hai…"

"Ek Heer thi…jo deewangi ko doosra naam diya…aur ek Ranjha tha…jo Prem ko doosra janam diya. Arre yehi tho sacha pyaar hai…"

"Jab doh dilon ka hissa mil jaata hai na?...toh woh dil dhadakne lagta hai…aur uss dil ki dhadkan itni dez hoti hai…ke sirf pyaar karne wale hi samajh sakte hai…"

"Ek hissa thi Heer…aur ek hissa tha uska Prem. Heer ko tho Prem se Prem karna hi tha…lekin Prem ka junoon…uski ibaadat…Heer ko Prem ki deewani bana hi diya…" Jugni concluded with a knowing smile She then looked up at the night sky, the same knowing smile adorning her face, because she knew...this night reunited two lovers…whose love was a legend in itself.
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THE END!
THANK YOU again for sticking around guys! you are all amazing! i hope the ending was good....i tried my best....and i love you guys for sticking by me during this fic...
though i wont be writing any more premeer fics i will still continue writing other stories...if any of u are interested in my other stories do let me kno and i will send u the link....thank you again! i love you guys!
Edited by JCluvs srk - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey jc thnks fr gvng a proper endng nd i luvd it proper justice is done u knw the last yr i spnt rdng ur ff many a tms it wl amways b my fav nd i d lk to knw abt ur othr ffs do pm me the lnks of al evn fnsd one also plz regards aishu
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was abeautidl end but after such long time... loved itt...
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Posted: 15 years ago
quite mesmerizing update😃
especailly loved these lines "'Aaa jao Prem…aa jao. Mujhe aise adhoora mat chodna. Mein pagal ho jaungi Prem…Mujhe iss deewangi se bachao…mujhe iss deewangi se bachao…"
completely moved by them👏👏👏
gr8 update and perfect ending to this marvelous ff⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy thanx alot 4 giving such a gr8 ending!!!!
i luved it!! and thanx 4 the pm also....
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Posted: 15 years ago
woww what an ending, it could not hv been better, you said you lost inspiration but the end was just perfect, the actual theme you carried rght frm the beginning, Heer, Prem ki deewani. I know you kept us waiting us fr very long but finally u completed ur beautiful fic, journey of Premeer and wht speechless words.
I so loved the way he regain his memory, each word of the song gng frm her herat to his, her love brought him back, finally it ws her victory, previously it ws his who own heer, made her to believe again on love and now finally hgeer who made him to love her again. And wow FBs were amazing, while reading wanted to go through updfates but fr time being really don't remeber frm whch all these were.
But one thing you do wonder with words, intensity of love is sketched by ur words thr itself.
Beautiful work
Hope to see sum in future too
Ashlesha
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG..I loved it
it was amazing
i loved all the flashbacks of how prem remembered!!!
I really like the way you reunited them!!!!!
Are you going to do an Epilouge??
Please do it!!
and Please pm me if you do it!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowow! awesome ending! so glad that prem finally got his memory back😃😃
thanks a lot for finishing this ff :)

Cheers!
~Naina

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