complete ff:prem ki diwani update 37, pg.97 11/16

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Posted: 16 years ago
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well hi guys....i'm not a really active member of this forum but i just can't stand prem not being in kis desh....so here i am writing a fic..i got the idea when i was listening to the song "bani prem ki diwani bani"...so i started creating a vm on it...mostly cuz i was missing prem so much....then i thought why not write a fic....it'll make me happier...lol..so this is my second fic and i hope you guys enjoy.....

this is just a prologue for my fic....i hope i get responses, good or bad...jus reply...i luv reading replies...then i'll continue....

Prologue

We have all heard the story of Heer and Ranjha...how they met...fell in love...separated. Tragic love stories are usually well known among people, and Heer Ranjha's story was truly a heart breaking one. But their sad ending always seems to overshadow their love. We seem to concentrate more on their death than the time they spent together, becoming absolutely crazy about each other. But enough about the past..it's time for a new love story to bloom. A wise man once said that God makes two pieces of a heart, and when they come together, the heart becomes whole and starts to beat. It is also said that one is crazy when in love, and who else to better understand that concept than our Heer.

Heer is a simple girl with simple values. The apple of her parent's eye and the jaan of her younger sister meher. Heer is in her last year of college and is loved by all. She is sweet, caring, and traditional. Along with these qualities she knows how to voice her opinion and has a very strong personality. Heer and meher are the life of their neighborhood. Heer also has a dream of falling madly in love and marrying that special someone who will steal her heart. Living up to her name,Heer is a strong believer in love and can't wait to experience that feeling.

However, her parents had something else in mind for their oldest daughter...a certain someone actually. Log kehte hai ke heer prem ka pratheek hai...aur prem sab se zyada heer mein bas tha hai. So everyone...please come and sit. It is time to tell another tale of love. Wouldn't you like to know...ke heer prem ki diwani kaise bani?

Chapters:
part 1----pg. 1
part 2----pg. 2
part 3----pg. 4
part 4----pg. 8
part 5----pg. 9
part 6----pg. 14
part 7----pg. 15
part 8----pg. 17
part 9----pg. 19
part 10---pg. 21
part 11---pg. 27
part 12---pg. 29
part 13---pg. 31
part 14---pg. 33
part 15---pg. 35
part 16---pg. 37
part 17---pg. 39
part 18---pg. 41
part 19---pg. 43
part 20---pg. 47
part 21---pg. 49
part 22---pg. 52
part 23---pg. 54
part 24---pg. 56
part 25---pg. 58
part 26---pg. 60
part 27---pg. 62
part 28---pg. 64
part 29---pg. 67
part 30---pg. 70
part 31---pg. 74
part 32---pg. 77
part 33---pg. 80
part 34---pg. 82
part 35---pg. 85
part 36---pg. 88
part 37---pg. 97 (End)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Doing my history HW right now. So brb...

*reserved*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeee too good do update soon asap.
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hey i wud love to hear that...plz cont soon...i ll wait...😃n btw..i m parth😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey...seems very interesting...do update soon
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ya it seems interesting ,well i will be waiting to read more so do cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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here's the first part...thank you so much for replying guys....your the best!...

PART 1

The alarm set for 6:00 am went off waking a girl from her slumber. A few rays of the sun shone through the side of the curtain, shedding light on a spacious room. A big round bed, a few love seats here and there, a study table, family pictures...with a mixture of soft colors. The girl slowly sat up, stretching and yawning. Her raven black hair fell to her waist, almond shaped eyes the color of warm whiskey, thick eye lashes, luscious lips that didn't need lipstick, and fair skin. Yes…she really was beautiful…Heer Mann…but it wasn't her beauty that people loved her for…it was her personality. A girl with the heart of gold and a mischievous mind, people always wondered who would be the lucky man to steal her heart.

Heer slowly go out of bed and took her morning shower. After she was done, she dressed in casual jeans and a pink kurti top. She wore a silver chain as accessory and little eye liner as make-up….just enough to give her eyes an exotic look. Heer walked down the stairs and spotted her mother and father already at the breakfast table.

Heer smiled: good morning mama…morning papa

She gave each one a peck on the check, that's how she greeted them every morning. Heer loved and respected her parents a lot. Even though she was an out going person, she never forgets the values her parents passed down to her.

Balraj: heer beta…what are you doing after college today?

Heer sat down in her seat and started on her breakfast.

Heer: I have dance rehersals until 5…then I'll be home. Why, do you need anything?

Balraj gave his wife a knowing smile that went unnoticed by heer.

Balraj: No I just wanted to talk to you about something. It can wait till later tonight.

Heer finished off her breakfast and stood up to leave when her sister's voice stopped her.

Heer turned with an amused expression as meher raced down the stairs.

Heer: utt gaye aap? Meher seriously if you don't wake up on time from now on I'll leave for college without you.

Meher's breath hitched because she was out of breath.

Meher: sorry di, lets go.

Mama: arre…eat breakfast and go.

Meher: no mom we'll be late.

Mama: see…she's again not eating her breakfast

Meher: oh mom, why are you always trying to feed me and di.

Meher quickly kissed mom and dad on the check and left with heer.

Mama: meher!...she just doesn't listen. (she sighed, but her lips twitched in a smile)

Balraj smiled at his daughters…what would he so without them…they made his life fun.

COLLEGE

Heer was in her last year college and every year the seniors put on a show for the school. This year heer was the lead dancer and all the seniors meet up after school every day to rehearse.

Heer: this is such a nice song to dance too!...i'm so excited.

Ash, heer's friend, laughed at heer.

Heer frowned: what's so funny?

Ash: because I know why you love this song so much.

Heer hit ash playfully because the song they were dancing to was "bani prem ki diwani bani".

The song couldn't suit the lead dancer more. All of heer's close friends and meher knew that heer was an absolute romantic at heart. She will be dancing to a song that is completely dedicated to prem…love. Heer has always wondered what would it feel like to be madly in love. Like soni mahiwal, laila majnu, and her personal favorite…heer ranjha. Heer's eyes sparkled as she thought of her dream man. She wanted someone who would love her unconditionally and she wanted to spend her life with him. Heer dreams of falling madly in love and marry him in the same place her parents got married.

Ash snapped her finger in front of heer's face.

Ash: hellooooo…heer come back to earth, we still have to rehearse.

Heer blushed at being caught day dreaming again.

Heer: lets go.

HEER'S HOUSE

Heer and meher entered their house and found mom and dad sitting in the living room watching tv…with their backs to them

Heer got a mischievous glint in her eyes as she looked at meher. Meher had a similar look as she grinned at her di.

They quietly crept up behind their parents…waiting for the right moment.

They got closer…and closer….and closer.

Heer and meher: BOO!!!

Balraj and veerji both jumped up in fright.

Veerji: hai rabba…yeh ladkiya tho mujhe ek din maar de gi

Heer and meher rolled with laughter as their mother chased them.

Balraj roared with laughter at the scene before him.

After everyone calmed down balraj spoke.

Balraj: heer I want to talk to you…no meher don't leave.

He stopped meher from leaving as she thought balraj wanted to talk to heer alone.

Balraj: this is a family matter.

Heer sat next to him: is everything ok?

Balraj: heer, remember I told you about a close friend of mine who lives in Canada?

Heer thought about it for a minute, trying to remember the name.

Heer: ah…lalit chachu?

Veerji: yes…that's him.

Balraj continued: well, lalit and his family will be visiting us soon.

Meher: that's great dad! You must be really happy.

Balraj smiled: yes I am…but I'm more happy because lalit told me something.

Heer got a weird feeling when her dad said that. Her papa had a certain spark in his eyes…and it wasn't because his best friend was coming for a visit.

Balraj: lalit has asked heer's hand in marriage for his oldest son.

Heer's jaw dropped.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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really nice, looking forward to meeting prem... continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Absolutely loved it! very good, i reallly loved the prologue, the stuff u sed bout 2 parts of a heart beating together and all these cute things bout finding her prem is lyk *sigh* 😍😍 described beutifully. lookin forrward to next part!😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx everyone! heres the next part...keep replying guys...i luv reading your feedback...

PART 2

Balraj: lalit has asked heer's hand in marriage for his oldest son.

Heer's jaw dropped.

She quickly stood up as she felt her dreams vanish before her eyes.

Heer: what!...papa what are you saying?!

Balraj stayed calm: heer I know this comes as a surprise but….

Heer cut him off.

Heer: surprise?...papa I don't even know the guy…how can I marry him?

Balraj stood up to be eye level with his daughter.

Balraj: heer…there is no rush. You can first meet him and then decide for yourself. But I'm telling you, you won't find a better family to get married into.

Heer closed her eyes in frustration.

Heer: papa I'm marrying the guy…not his family. Mama don't say anything.

Heer stopped her mom from starting a lecture on how an Indian girl marries her husband's whole family and all that. Heer didn't mind…really she didn't…she had no problem becoming a part of her husband's family…but she didn't want to get an arrange marriage. She didn't want to marry a stranger.

Balraj: lalit and his family will arrive here day after tomorrow. His son's name is…

Heer cut her father out again: I need to be alone for a while.

She ran up the stairs as balraj tried to stop her.

Balraj: heer!...atleast hear his name.

But heer didn't listen…she ran up to her and locked herself in.

Heer fell face first on her bed and muffled a scream against her pillow.

*I can't believe this…I can't believe this!...How can papa just get me married to some loser just because he happens to be his best friend's son. Forget marriage…just the thought of him irritates me. Uff!*

She muffled another scream against her pillow to let out all the frustration. After her temper calmed a little a lone tear escaped her eye.

*I don't love him…how can I marry someone I don't love? This is so unfair…*

Heer heard her bedroom door open as someone walked in. She quickly closed her eyes pretending to be asleep.

Balraj sat at the corner of heer's bed and stroked her hair gently.

He whispered: I know this is a big shock for you, but know that I would never make a decision like this if I wasn't absolutely sure you will be happy. Lalit and I go back many years…aur hum dono ne ek sapna dekha tha, ke hum apne dosti ko rishtedari mein ek din badal denge. But nothing is more important to me than your happiness. If you don't want to marry lalit's son, then you won't. Just know that I only want the best for you.

He laid a kiss on heer's forehead and slowly walked out of the room.

Heer opened her eyes when she heard her door close behind her father. She rolled over to hug her pillow once again. Her heart had a sinking feeling as she closed her eyes in sorrow. Sorrow of letting her childhood dream go.

*I can't break papa's dream…I can't be that selfish….*

YOUR GOING TO DO WHAT!? –ash and meher yelled.

Meher and ash sat with heer as the seniors were having another break from rehersal.

Ash held up her hand: let me get this straight…you're going to marry a stranger because he is your dad's friend's son….a complete stranger…but wait…you can say no to the marriage, but you won't because you want to do it for your dad? Heer shaadi tujhe karni hai ya tere papa ko?

Meher: di you don't have to so this….papa will understand.

Heer sighed: I know but if I say no to the wedding, I'll still know that a dream of papa's didn't come true because of me. Meher you know neither of us can't see papa unhappy.

Meher agreed…if she was in the same situation…she would probably so what heer is doing now…they both just love their parent's too much.

Meher put her hand on heer's in understanding as a light bulb went off in ash's head.

Ash: idea!

Heer: what?

Ash: what if you don't break your dad's heart and you still don't have to marry a stranger…

Heer raised an eyebrow in interest.

Heer: and how will I do that?

Ash grinned: simple…just get the guy to say no to the wedding.

Meher grinned back as heer got a naughty gleam in her eyes.

Uh oh…the Mann girls got that look on their faces again…the look that always leads to something mischievous…

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