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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Hi everyone sorry for delay…..

Well its starts from where heer has see prem's body and is shocked. She come near his body and shouts prem and broken and crys and falls down..she seats near prem's body and ask him to wakeup as his has promised that he will celebrate her birthday with her. And time passes, now its time for all the rituals to be done with prem's body all of them are shock state but has agreed the there beloved prem juneja is no longer in this world except heer. She still think her prem will come and take her as his wife and they will be together forever…

When time come to take prem, heer run after the body and falls on the floor unconscious. All of then head toward her and take her inside.

Its been 3 months since prem death. Sadly heer hasn't come out of the shock of losing her Prem. She spend day and night in her room, she never smiles, she never laughs, she doesn't talk much to family members and she hardly eats…

Chithhi na koyi sandesh€ Ho€ chithhi na koi sandesh Jaane woh kaun sa desh jaha tum chale gaye Chithhi na koyi sandesh Jaane woh kaun sa desh jaha tum chale gayeChithhi na koyi sandesh Jaane woh kaun sa desh jaha tum chale gayeJaha tum chale gaye Is dil pe laga ke thhes jaane woh kaun sa desh Jaha tum chale gaye... Ek aah bhari hogi hamne na suni hogi Jaate jaate tumne awaaz to di hogi Har waqt yehi hai gham, us waqt kaha the hum Kaha tum chale gaye Chithhi na koi sandesh jaane woh kaun sa desh Jaha tum chale gaye jaha tum chale gaye Is dil pe laga ke thhes jaane woh kaun sa desh Jaha tum chale gaye... Har cheez pe ashkon se likha hai tumhaara naam Ye raste ghar galiyaan tumhe kar na sake salaam Hai dil mein reh gayi baat, jaldi se chhuda kar haath Kaha tum chale gaye Chithhi na koi sandesh jaane woh kaun sa desh Jaha tum chale gaye jaha tum chale gaye Is dil pe laga ke thhes jaane woh kaun sa desh Jahan tum chale gaye... Ab yaadon ke kaante is dil mein chubhte hain Na dard thhaherta hai na aanson rukte hain Tumhe dhhundhh raha hai pyaar, hum kaise karein iqraar Kaha tum chale gaye Chithhi na koi sandesh jaane woh kaun sa desh Jaha tum chale gaye jaha tum chale gaye Is dil pe laga ke thhes jaane woh kaun sa desh Jahan tum chale gaye...Ho kahan tum chale gaye -3

she has become very week and one day she is been hospitalized and doctor says that she is too week and sorry to say if she doesn't come out from this dilemma you will lose her. All of the gets worried and meher gets more worried as she has lost her parents if she loose her didi then she will also die.. and she promises all of then specially Lalit uncle and Gayatri aunty that she will bring didi(heer) to normal life and she will leave again.

for time being this much
next part in the afternoon inshallah
bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
sorry for the mistakes as i promised yesterday but couldnt post.
but this part was written in quit hurry so i know there are so many mistake but i promise next part will be better then this. as Prem will come...........
bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
Hey!
I must of missed this thread!
Loved both parts!
and i am looking forward to the next !
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14

Time has passed quit fast. Its been whole year now, heer has still not accepted the fact of prem's death but she has recovered a bit bcoz of meher…she is just alive with the memories of Prem.

One day she was standing near window in deep thoughts of Prem and was crying…(Song in the background)

Lo Aa Gayee Unki Yaad, Wo Nahin Aaye

Dil Unko Dhoondhtaa Hai, Gam Ka Singaar Kar Ke
Aankhe Bhi thak Gayi Hai, Ab Intajaar Kar Ke
Ek Aas Rah Gayee Hai, Wo Bhi Naa Toot Jaaye

Lo Aa Gayee Unki Yaad, Wo Nahin Aaye


Roti Hain Aaj Hum Par, Tanahaeeyaan Humaari
Wo Bhi Naa Paaye Shaayad, Parachhaeeyaan Humaari
Badhate Hee Jaa Rahe Hai, Maayooseeyon Ke Saaye

Lo Aa Gayee Unki Yaad, Wo Nahin Aaye

Lau Tharatharaa Rahi Hai, Ab Shama-ye-zindag bhi
Ujadee Huye Mohabbat Mehmaan Hain Do Ghadee Ki
Mar Kar Hi Ab Milenge, Jee Kar To Mil Naa Paaye

Lo Aa Gayee Unki Yaad, Wo Nahin Aaye

Lo Aa Gayee Unki Yaad, Wo Nahin Aayeeeeee…

Prem appears and stand next to heer and he puts his hand on heer's shoulder…. when she turns she is shocked to see Prem there and she hugs him and he also hugs her tightly and she ask him kaha chale gaye the Prem sab log kitne pareshan the maa-bauji tho toot se gaye hai…chalo ja ke sab ko batate hai ki tum aagaye ho bahut khush hogayenge sab…chalo chalo jaldi chalo. But Prem stop her and say mein sirf tumse milne aaya hoon "Heer" and say pehle rona band karo aur tumhe kasam hai meri, agar tumhari aankhon se aab ek bhi aansu nikla tho..mein tho samjhta tha ki meri heer tho bahut himmat wali hai lakin ye kiya.. heer agar tum aapne aapko nahin sambhalogi to ghar walo kaun sambhalega and she quickly say tum…Prem say heer aur Prem ek hi hai kiya hum kabhi alag the "nahi na", aur agar tum meri baat nahi maanti tho mein chala jata hoon. she suddenly say nahin nahin prem please mein tumhari har baat manugi. He says thik hai tho aao mere saath and both of them went and sat together. Meri baat zara dhiyan se sunna aur haan u have to accept whatever I say ..heer says yes. He says mein chahata hoon ki tum meri sari zimmedariyoon ko pura karo aur uske saath saath ghar aur office ko bhi sambhalo aur khas kar maa bauji aur preet ko. aur mein jaanta hoon ki meri heer meri zimmedariya bakhubi nibhayegi aur use pura karegi.

Heer aaj tumse tumhara Prem bahut kuch mangne aaya hai.. Mein chahata hoon ki tum meri sare adhure sapne pure karo , preet-ash ki shaadi ka sapna, Harman-meher ki shaadi ka sapna, juneja industries ko aasman ki bulandi tak pochane ka sapna, maa-bauji, kulraj-veera, Harman-preet ko meri kami kabhi mehsoos na ho yeh sapna, meher ko uski pehli wali didi (Heer) lotane ka sapna, aur sabse bada sapna hai tumhari khushi mein chahata hoon tumhari aankhon mein ek aansu bhi na aaye…

Yaad hai heer maine sabse wada kiya tha ki mein tumhe kabhi dukh aur aansu nahi dunga lakin aaj is aansoon ki vajha mein bangaya hoon, tumhari zindagi berang hogaye hai…heer says nahi Prem essa mat kaho…thik hai heer mein nahi kahonga lakin tumhe aapni berang zindagi main phir se rang bharne honge, …she ask "matlab"…matlab ye ke tum, tum aapni shaadi ke liye kabhi mana nahi karogi hamesha khush rahogi, is ghar ke jo rang chale gaye hai use wapas laogi, juneja industries ko jo bhi nuksan poochane ki khoshish karega use mooh tud jawab dogi, sachai ka saath hamesha dogi, is ghar ke kisi bhi member (was not knowing hindi word) ki aankhon mein kabhi aansu nahi aane dogi…….mere ye wade pure karogi na heer bolo heer karogi na…wind start blowing and premeer is crying and heer say haan mein "HEER PREM JUNEJA" tumse ("PREM JUNEJA") se yeh wada karti hoon ki mein tumhare sare sapne pure karongi…..ghar mein kisi ko tumhari kami mehsoos nahi hone dongi mein wada karti hoon tumse prem wada karti hoon..and they both hug and cry a lot after sometime Heer falls asleep and Prem disappears leaving smile on heer's face…

This song is playing in the background

kasme waade nibhaayenge hum milate rahenge janam janam dekhaa maine tuz ko to mujhe ayesaa lagaabarason kaa soyaa huaa, pyaar meraa jagaatoo hain diyaa, main hoo baatee, aajaa mere jeewan saathee kasme waade nibhaayenge hum milate rahenge janam janam cheharon se ho anajaane hum dil to dil ko pahachaanekabhee pyaar naheen marataa hai, paagal premee hee jaaneaa jaatee hain lab pe khud hee, bhoolee bisaree baatkasme waade nibhaayenge hum milate rahenge janam janam too hain mere jeene kaa sahaaraa, sadiyo puraanaa hain saath humaaraatoo hain diyaa, main hoo baatee, aajaa mere jeewan saatheekasme waade nibhaayenge hum milate rahenge janam janam jis dil mein pyaar basaa hai, wo dil bhagawaan kee muratye murat kabhee naa badale, badale insaan kee suratdil ke bandhan itane sachche, jitane ye din raat kasme waade nibhaayenge hum milate rahenge janam janam
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
wat!😕thats mean prem is really dead oh god bye bye than!😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
hope prem doesnt die n he gets up
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
well dear he is dead and it all most one year
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

im liking how this story is heading so pls cont. soon.even though i dont like how prem is dead. but mayb the future track of kis desh would b like this.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
didnt realise u had updated, can u edit ur topic when u update with the page number and date, it would be easier to find it... like the way it is turning out, why did u wait a whole year after prems death before prem's intervention in heers life?? where will heers life go from here?? waiting for your next update
redrose24 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#20
first of all thnx for ur complement...i will surely updated next part soon. actually iam working lady so take time to write...
well sure i will edit but dear iam new to this forum and have no idea of the features and option anf how to edit. if possible pls let me know.
Rose

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